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That's the one novel that I can't wait for each chapter. it's easy to read. Great world building. Interactions of the MC with beasts and his team are so fun to read. This is the one novel that I can be laughing out loud. The MC isn't struggling but never stay in one place for to long. Plenty of arches and. This is a rare book where not all team only emails. He's not frigid aswell, he will have some romance but it's not like author pushing this line to much. All heroes are well written and have their own charisma. 5 out of 5. I sudgest this storry to readind right now.
i really love all the character iIthink they are amazing and the writer really did a great job i love the story so much
been reading for a while and this is one of the stories that are actually good and not a copy of someone elses story i would say its got some action its not exactly a serious kind it does have its moments but mostly its a bit cute and funny at times perfect chill story to read really recommend giving it a read
I am thrilled to read this kind of book.I do not know too much of language,but it is worth to struggle with reading for this kind of story.
The only thing to note is that the MC has no real rival or antagonist per se, and the ppl of his nation are way too supportive of him....unnaturally so. However I don't see this necessarily as a bad thing, it is a huge change from all the usual novel read on this site where MC is constantly antagonize for no good reason and constantly wins by plot armor but yet is never recognized as if the world is filled with intellectually deficient people only. This isn't the case for this world. Most ppl are smart or bonafied traitors. MC is a pathfinder and provides real help to his people and nation, even extending his willingness to help 2 other nations. A very good, fun and happy read! Thank you for your hard work author.
This pretty good so far. I like the beast tamer trope. This is def more of a fun read than a complex one, very enjoyable nontheless.
Sorry, I wasn’t able to get into the story or characters in this one. I’m a fast reader and it simply took to long to watch a bunch of adds to read a chapter that amounted to little more than a few paragraphs. I would much rather read this on my Kindle where I can purchase for a decent amount and read at a faster pace.
I really liked this novel and I'm obsessed with how it developed and how the chracters are written[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good story so far . like the characters, but just getting into the real part of character development
Excellent story! A nice easy read, plenty of excitement and character development. Only down side i can see is that the characters can come across a bit one dimensional. I hope to see more emotional complexity in the future. Still excited to see how the MC will develop. Character wise the star of the show is Hawk. I just hope the MC starts becoming more charismatic and takes more of the lime light.
Muito muito bom… uma história com drMa adolescente que traz um ar puro de alegria
The story and characters develop in a fun and interesting way that makes it hard to put down. If you are like me you’ll end up reading chapter after chapter not even realizing you have read more than one as they flow together seamlessly.
Second book from this author I've read and it is the second one that I absolutely love. Great story building and flow. can't wait for more chapters.
great story, great character growth. cant wait to read more. Just can't afford more coins.
Good story, good universe, good updates and good characters the story is funny, the final is okay and the development is good but need some fixes recommended
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That's the one novel that I can't wait for each chapter. it's easy to read. Great world building. Interactions of the MC with beasts and his team are so fun to read. This is the one novel that I can be laughing out loud. The MC isn't struggling but never stay in one place for to long. Plenty of arches and. This is a rare book where not all team only emails. He's not frigid aswell, he will have some romance but it's not like author pushing this line to much. All heroes are well written and have their own charisma. 5 out of 5. I sudgest this storry to readind right now.
i really love all the character iIthink they are amazing and the writer really did a great job i love the story so much
been reading for a while and this is one of the stories that are actually good and not a copy of someone elses story i would say its got some action its not exactly a serious kind it does have its moments but mostly its a bit cute and funny at times perfect chill story to read really recommend giving it a read
I am thrilled to read this kind of book.I do not know too much of language,but it is worth to struggle with reading for this kind of story.
The only thing to note is that the MC has no real rival or antagonist per se, and the ppl of his nation are way too supportive of him....unnaturally so. However I don't see this necessarily as a bad thing, it is a huge change from all the usual novel read on this site where MC is constantly antagonize for no good reason and constantly wins by plot armor but yet is never recognized as if the world is filled with intellectually deficient people only. This isn't the case for this world. Most ppl are smart or bonafied traitors. MC is a pathfinder and provides real help to his people and nation, even extending his willingness to help 2 other nations. A very good, fun and happy read! Thank you for your hard work author.
This pretty good so far. I like the beast tamer trope. This is def more of a fun read than a complex one, very enjoyable nontheless.
Sorry, I wasn’t able to get into the story or characters in this one. I’m a fast reader and it simply took to long to watch a bunch of adds to read a chapter that amounted to little more than a few paragraphs. I would much rather read this on my Kindle where I can purchase for a decent amount and read at a faster pace.
I really liked this novel and I'm obsessed with how it developed and how the chracters are written[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good story so far . like the characters, but just getting into the real part of character development
Excellent story! A nice easy read, plenty of excitement and character development. Only down side i can see is that the characters can come across a bit one dimensional. I hope to see more emotional complexity in the future. Still excited to see how the MC will develop. Character wise the star of the show is Hawk. I just hope the MC starts becoming more charismatic and takes more of the lime light.
Muito muito bom… uma história com drMa adolescente que traz um ar puro de alegria
The story and characters develop in a fun and interesting way that makes it hard to put down. If you are like me you’ll end up reading chapter after chapter not even realizing you have read more than one as they flow together seamlessly.
Second book from this author I've read and it is the second one that I absolutely love. Great story building and flow. can't wait for more chapters.
great story, great character growth. cant wait to read more. Just can't afford more coins.
Good story, good universe, good updates and good characters the story is funny, the final is okay and the development is good but need some fixes recommended