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The Story in short, is short. The character description doesn't really say much about'em. The quality of the writing is alright... From what I read, it's just better to wait for this story to temporarily turn free to read. due to how short the pages are.
It’s a great story. I love parallel world pharmacy so I always wanted another story in the same genre. Keep writing it’s great 👍
Muito bom mesmo.. espero por mais capítulos.................................................................................................
Many times it is not only the general things that make a novel hook the reader, but the small and continuous things. In this case I like the general hypothesis, a transmigrated MC but with a system that helps him on his path to being a healer. Nice details, the fact that it is a grim reaper who helps him transmigrate, and the AI that is even abusive at times with its opinions about the protagonist. Good job
Honestly, this story is a page-turner! I can't wait for more chapters! The characters and world feel very solid. I was worried the medical knowledge would be unrealistic, as is common in specialized job stories like this, but so far it seems accurate and very realistic. There is a lot of good conflict in this too and it really makes you want to find out what's going to happen next every page! Give it a read, NOW!
I'm fond of the concept where the main character has a conversational system by his side, making the journey more intriguing. The writing is easily digestible and perfectly descriptive. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter's arrival.
I really love the world background and how it has North South east and west. seojun/han is also an interesting character. the story and writing quality is good but it feels a little slow paced and it has a lot of words that don't necessarily make the story better. all in all, it's definitely in the top 10 webnovels i read so far 💖🤗
it's a good book with a decent start and even though it didn't really captivate me personally, i believe it has potential seeing this author's other works, its definitive that his new book will do pretty well, thanks for the good read author
The writing is good but the story is less suspenseful maybe because I feel like everything can be resolved easily? Or maybe because I only read it until chapter 5. When reading it, everything was good in terms of plot and change of events, but there was no curiosity factor in it. Also, his character looks like he has trust issues. But yet he always easily accepts the situation without questioning or doubting it. Or is it just me who feels that way? Anyway, this webnovel is not difficult to read because of the good writing. The story flows smoothly. Regardless of what I encounter I don't understand.
S - super good I could never Y - You should give this guy your powerstones S - your synopsis is gold <3 T - tanjiro (???) E - Epik book dude M - Masterpeice, good luck with WSA 2024 Nice writing style btw ~ fellow author ~~~ Happy tuesday!
This is a pretty one. Where is my coffee? I will queue along each of the chapters.
The beginning of the story nicely sets up the premise of a devoted surgeon's rebirth in a fantastical world, and the inclusion of a unique gift adds an intriguing twist to the plot. However, there are a few areas that could use improvement. The writing could benefit from more descriptive language and stronger characterization to help readers connect with the main character. Additionally, the pacing feels a bit rushed, and more time could be spent delving into the intricacies of this new world. Overall, with some attention to details and further development, this story has potential for a strong premise. Your story has a captivating premise that immediately draws readers in and leaves them curious to know more about the adventures of Han in this new world. The concept of a surgeon turned beggar with a supernatural gift is unique and refreshing. The world-building is intriguing, and I can sense potential for rich and complex worldbuilding to come. With its exciting premise, relatable main character, and engaging plot, I'm eager to see where this story goes. Keep up the excellent work!
I'm genuinely impressed by the novel's gripping isekai theme and the clever introduction of a companion system for the MC, adding depth and intrigue. The narrative's smooth grammar facilitates an enjoyable read, with just the right amount of description. The novel's solid dialogue, effective scene transitions, and overall potential shine through. Eager for more chapters!
I have to admit. I didn't see the grim reaper transition coming. This seems like a good book with great potential but I think you belittled the mc too much, System intro needs more editing. Other than those two, you're good to go author. Grammar is smooth and very easy to read too. Say Hi to Mr. Blob for me
This story is pretty interesting. I really like the writing style and how the scene plays. I am excited for more and how the story unfolds. Keep up the good work author.
The writing quality is solid in terms of dialogue and scene changes. The transmigration to another world was also good when it came to transitioning from scene to scene. I can't say too much about story development as there aren't enough chapters to completely make a full basis of it. The world background is overall good and I hope you keep writing.
A good isekai theme story so far 👍🏼 I really like that the mc is not alone and has a system that can talk by his side. It is easy to read and just the right amount of description. I’m impatient to read the next chapter as soon as possible 🔥
Of course, I'm giving myself a 5-star shameless review. Also for this novel do you have any thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate Power Stones once that opens up. I am confirming there will be no romance, but there will be a side couple of his friends. There are people in the novel with vivid personalities, I hope you like them. The Story is basically about Han and how he improves his medical expertise in this new world. This a slice of life about his day-to-day life in the clinic but can the MC be left alone? Think again... I also included some fighting scenes in the upcoming chapters. I look forward to your thoughts. Have fun guys.
The Story in short, is short. The character description doesn't really say much about'em. The quality of the writing is alright... From what I read, it's just better to wait for this story to temporarily turn free to read. due to how short the pages are.
It’s a great story. I love parallel world pharmacy so I always wanted another story in the same genre. Keep writing it’s great 👍
Muito bom mesmo.. espero por mais capítulos.................................................................................................
Many times it is not only the general things that make a novel hook the reader, but the small and continuous things. In this case I like the general hypothesis, a transmigrated MC but with a system that helps him on his path to being a healer. Nice details, the fact that it is a grim reaper who helps him transmigrate, and the AI that is even abusive at times with its opinions about the protagonist. Good job
Honestly, this story is a page-turner! I can't wait for more chapters! The characters and world feel very solid. I was worried the medical knowledge would be unrealistic, as is common in specialized job stories like this, but so far it seems accurate and very realistic. There is a lot of good conflict in this too and it really makes you want to find out what's going to happen next every page! Give it a read, NOW!
I'm fond of the concept where the main character has a conversational system by his side, making the journey more intriguing. The writing is easily digestible and perfectly descriptive. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter's arrival.
I really love the world background and how it has North South east and west. seojun/han is also an interesting character. the story and writing quality is good but it feels a little slow paced and it has a lot of words that don't necessarily make the story better. all in all, it's definitely in the top 10 webnovels i read so far 💖🤗
it's a good book with a decent start and even though it didn't really captivate me personally, i believe it has potential seeing this author's other works, its definitive that his new book will do pretty well, thanks for the good read author
The writing is good but the story is less suspenseful maybe because I feel like everything can be resolved easily? Or maybe because I only read it until chapter 5. When reading it, everything was good in terms of plot and change of events, but there was no curiosity factor in it. Also, his character looks like he has trust issues. But yet he always easily accepts the situation without questioning or doubting it. Or is it just me who feels that way? Anyway, this webnovel is not difficult to read because of the good writing. The story flows smoothly. Regardless of what I encounter I don't understand.
S - super good I could never Y - You should give this guy your powerstones S - your synopsis is gold <3 T - tanjiro (???) E - Epik book dude M - Masterpeice, good luck with WSA 2024 Nice writing style btw ~ fellow author ~~~ Happy tuesday!
This is a pretty one. Where is my coffee? I will queue along each of the chapters.
The beginning of the story nicely sets up the premise of a devoted surgeon's rebirth in a fantastical world, and the inclusion of a unique gift adds an intriguing twist to the plot. However, there are a few areas that could use improvement. The writing could benefit from more descriptive language and stronger characterization to help readers connect with the main character. Additionally, the pacing feels a bit rushed, and more time could be spent delving into the intricacies of this new world. Overall, with some attention to details and further development, this story has potential for a strong premise. Your story has a captivating premise that immediately draws readers in and leaves them curious to know more about the adventures of Han in this new world. The concept of a surgeon turned beggar with a supernatural gift is unique and refreshing. The world-building is intriguing, and I can sense potential for rich and complex worldbuilding to come. With its exciting premise, relatable main character, and engaging plot, I'm eager to see where this story goes. Keep up the excellent work!
I'm genuinely impressed by the novel's gripping isekai theme and the clever introduction of a companion system for the MC, adding depth and intrigue. The narrative's smooth grammar facilitates an enjoyable read, with just the right amount of description. The novel's solid dialogue, effective scene transitions, and overall potential shine through. Eager for more chapters!
I have to admit. I didn't see the grim reaper transition coming. This seems like a good book with great potential but I think you belittled the mc too much, System intro needs more editing. Other than those two, you're good to go author. Grammar is smooth and very easy to read too. Say Hi to Mr. Blob for me
This story is pretty interesting. I really like the writing style and how the scene plays. I am excited for more and how the story unfolds. Keep up the good work author.
The writing quality is solid in terms of dialogue and scene changes. The transmigration to another world was also good when it came to transitioning from scene to scene. I can't say too much about story development as there aren't enough chapters to completely make a full basis of it. The world background is overall good and I hope you keep writing.
A good isekai theme story so far 👍🏼 I really like that the mc is not alone and has a system that can talk by his side. It is easy to read and just the right amount of description. I’m impatient to read the next chapter as soon as possible 🔥
Of course, I'm giving myself a 5-star shameless review. Also for this novel do you have any thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate Power Stones once that opens up. I am confirming there will be no romance, but there will be a side couple of his friends. There are people in the novel with vivid personalities, I hope you like them. The Story is basically about Han and how he improves his medical expertise in this new world. This a slice of life about his day-to-day life in the clinic but can the MC be left alone? Think again... I also included some fighting scenes in the upcoming chapters. I look forward to your thoughts. Have fun guys.