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Please keep updating. it is a damn shame that so many good books just stop or even die.
A great novel to pass the time, with a great update The only thing that bothered me was the issue of the system being revealed to anyone The only question is, will you go the harem route?
Everything is great... Except if u don't want ur protagonist telling her system to others(like me) it ain't for us. Do ur best author for ur true reader 😊
Please keep updating. it is a damn shame that so many good books just stop or even die.
A great novel to pass the time, with a great update The only thing that bothered me was the issue of the system being revealed to anyone The only question is, will you go the harem route?
Everything is great... Except if u don't want ur protagonist telling her system to others(like me) it ain't for us. Do ur best author for ur true reader 😊
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