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So heres my honest review. Writing quality : 5/5 The writing style is simple enough to understand.Compare to mtl, a few small mistake is acceptable for me.So i give it 5/5. Updating stability : 5/5 As long as you can keep the update going then im fine with it. Story development : 3/5 Its your average transmigation novel that has been overused.No major mistake as of yet.But the only problem i have is that the story lack flavour.Theres nothing wrong with the story but theres also nothing new with it.Can be said to be predicatable. Character design : 3/5 Same with story development, every character in the story can be found in any other novel.Probably because theres not a lot of chapter.But im afraid that the MC wont get any major character development within a couple hundreds chapter.Side character would get a few of it but hopefully it will be memorable enough to stick in the head. World background : 3/5 Not a lot of info has been given as the novel is new.But i do like the way you give a little bit of info here and there about the academy.Unfortunately no info about the whole country, kingdom or empire.Can be resolves with more chapter. To conclude, the novel is good enough for you to pass the time and forget about it afterward.Just another average novel per say.
having read the author's previous work i already expected this novel to be of nice quality but even then it still amazed me as it only got me to want to read more of it. Anyway the story is just starting but it looks promising enough for a five star review from now which speaks volumes of the author's capability
You made It locked so I can’t read further it’s good but that alone makes this story suck. But the story is good but you ruined the vibe by locking it
I was hoping to there will be some romance, like Lia or something i hope author may add it or that girl from chapter 1 come back just like mc [img=Loving it]
Peak...........................................................................................................................................................Peak.
Mannnn gotta love this, first of all, I'm thankful about the fact that Jareth stays true to Shiina even after everything that happens, I like the plot where he's always cold on the outside lol, the fact that he doesn't get involved with the OG Protagonist is a good thing as the protagonist will always bring trouble wherever he goes and leads to unnecessary plot. The fights between Jareth and Shin xD. I recommend the novel as it's fun to read and is also interesting
Very interesting and perfect. The arrogant personality of the male lead is so fun to read.
I get it. The story is Okay too, Jareth is lovesick. Okay, But have you considered a point like since he lost everything, then he would go to extreme to obtain it. Love is not needed, what needed is the determination to push forward no matter the cost. Why does Wang Lin wasted thousand years in Solitude for Li Muwan, Why does Zhao Lian Yun loved Ma Hong Yun, Why does Barry couldn't save his mom Nora, even though he could travel back in Time, Barry loved her more than anyone, but Savitar got the best of him. We all know love is Painful, but one has to break away from the past and move forward no matter the circumstances, this applies to everywhere no matter whether you are in present world or in alternate world. In present world forgetting the past might be harder, as you see the resemblance of the moments, but In the alternate world, it isn't. It is simply possible to forget as you look around, unless you are a dumb bastard who thinks a few meat on the chest and a hole between the legs crave satisfy you. As far as I know, humans are greedy, even Love hm, how should I put it! Love can be used as a Pawn! I think it's theoretically and practically feasible and possible anywhere. I hope, the MC just get over this and become EVIL as destroying the harem protagonist and giving his chance to Mark, 'cause I also believe that only the talented people are worth something. I do liked the story where MC killed his step family 'cause they annihilated his mother's corpse. I can understand that scene and it's pretty good, not excellent. If the story progresses in every chapter like his sadness over Shiina. I am getting an idea like whether the author is just doing it, so he can complete the word count or not. Hope I am wrong, but I rarely am! This story is good, but the emotional dilemma you are making the MC stuck in a singular point, take him out of his cocoon. A transmigrated person needs about no less than a week to accept their circumstances and even the worst can accept the circumstances in within a month, but it is already three months, why the hell is taking it so long. Huff, I think I will look at this later If I feel like it, but the story hasn't progressed much, though it seems progressed a lot. You can see that there is also a Plot Armor here in the book, if you look at it closely. Hope you can understand.
The story itself is interesting but the author has an extremely long authors note at the end of EVERY chapter that increases the costs of coins per chap. I was hoping that author would cut it out once he started charging at chapter 30 but unfortunately that isnt the case. Cant overlook it, sorry. Will be dropping at chapter 35.
First couple of chapters were nice but started going downhill after about 40 something
I've read the story up to the 34th chapter so there is a few things I want to say. Story is quite generic but nothing bad characters are also can be recognised and undrestood pretty quickly so not a bad thing to do. I had fun reading it. I hope author edits earlier chapters or someting, because the writing style used by the author suprised me by how immersion breaking it was. After every sentence spoke by a person there is a parenthesis with the characters name in it. Then some lore about the world or the characters given by the same way. This broke my immersion several times. I don't know how many chapters later does this continues, but I can't get myself to see them anymore. I hope the story improves best regards to author, good days.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
exelente novela la actitud del protagonista me gusta mucho y la historia me encantó
One of my top favorite novel. The mc is smart amd hard working. I'm a fan of all the misunderstanding. There is no romance as far as I know of, which is a huge plus in my opinion. The other characters are interesting, they have good background stories. The world building is great, it is a modern dark fantasy world.
Good Story,After Volume 1 end i can rate this novel as 5 stars. Jareth the goat🐐.
Absolutely Fantastic!the story is both understandable and interesting, it's also easy To read and understand.the cliffhangers also add to the story as it gives a person a reason to be excited for the new chapter and frustrated that it stopped when it was getting interesting.
It had a pretty good start but after the talent "mana singularity", the title pretty much became an empty title, he basically is 2 star mage or whatever they are called after that, then theres the power scaling thats just gone to everywhere, the world building isnt properly explored but its decent. The authors way of giving information is weird too, its in the form of giving out random facts every now and then that just ruins immersion most of the time though he fixes it in later chapters. The story doesn't even give like a sense of mystery like a character pointing out a dude to watch out for, creating a good sense of wonder of who that is then the next paragraph is just a parenthesis statement of who it was. Overall, I read up to 50+ chapters but its not my cup of tea, though it may he different for some people
揭示劇透
I really like this author novels, the other novel Reborn as an extra is also very great i like wait for everyday and now this book, i am really enjoying it.
I think this story had so much potential. It deserved top 3 spot in my list. What I like the most is the character design of the main character, it's similar to Deculein in some way, which make the story unique cause it incorporate research paper into magic which most one brain cell writer seldom does. The world background itself is decent but I can't see it goes beyond the current world as it was normally so for most fantasy type novel. I can't see the chapter goes for a long way, probably around 400ch?? I will just read it while it last.
The shameless author gives his novel 5 stars as a lucky charm! This is my second novel, but I will put my best efforts into it. Thanks for all of your support.
So heres my honest review. Writing quality : 5/5 The writing style is simple enough to understand.Compare to mtl, a few small mistake is acceptable for me.So i give it 5/5. Updating stability : 5/5 As long as you can keep the update going then im fine with it. Story development : 3/5 Its your average transmigation novel that has been overused.No major mistake as of yet.But the only problem i have is that the story lack flavour.Theres nothing wrong with the story but theres also nothing new with it.Can be said to be predicatable. Character design : 3/5 Same with story development, every character in the story can be found in any other novel.Probably because theres not a lot of chapter.But im afraid that the MC wont get any major character development within a couple hundreds chapter.Side character would get a few of it but hopefully it will be memorable enough to stick in the head. World background : 3/5 Not a lot of info has been given as the novel is new.But i do like the way you give a little bit of info here and there about the academy.Unfortunately no info about the whole country, kingdom or empire.Can be resolves with more chapter. To conclude, the novel is good enough for you to pass the time and forget about it afterward.Just another average novel per say.
having read the author's previous work i already expected this novel to be of nice quality but even then it still amazed me as it only got me to want to read more of it. Anyway the story is just starting but it looks promising enough for a five star review from now which speaks volumes of the author's capability
You made It locked so I can’t read further it’s good but that alone makes this story suck. But the story is good but you ruined the vibe by locking it
I was hoping to there will be some romance, like Lia or something i hope author may add it or that girl from chapter 1 come back just like mc [img=Loving it]
Peak...........................................................................................................................................................Peak.
Mannnn gotta love this, first of all, I'm thankful about the fact that Jareth stays true to Shiina even after everything that happens, I like the plot where he's always cold on the outside lol, the fact that he doesn't get involved with the OG Protagonist is a good thing as the protagonist will always bring trouble wherever he goes and leads to unnecessary plot. The fights between Jareth and Shin xD. I recommend the novel as it's fun to read and is also interesting
Very interesting and perfect. The arrogant personality of the male lead is so fun to read.
I get it. The story is Okay too, Jareth is lovesick. Okay, But have you considered a point like since he lost everything, then he would go to extreme to obtain it. Love is not needed, what needed is the determination to push forward no matter the cost. Why does Wang Lin wasted thousand years in Solitude for Li Muwan, Why does Zhao Lian Yun loved Ma Hong Yun, Why does Barry couldn't save his mom Nora, even though he could travel back in Time, Barry loved her more than anyone, but Savitar got the best of him. We all know love is Painful, but one has to break away from the past and move forward no matter the circumstances, this applies to everywhere no matter whether you are in present world or in alternate world. In present world forgetting the past might be harder, as you see the resemblance of the moments, but In the alternate world, it isn't. It is simply possible to forget as you look around, unless you are a dumb bastard who thinks a few meat on the chest and a hole between the legs crave satisfy you. As far as I know, humans are greedy, even Love hm, how should I put it! Love can be used as a Pawn! I think it's theoretically and practically feasible and possible anywhere. I hope, the MC just get over this and become EVIL as destroying the harem protagonist and giving his chance to Mark, 'cause I also believe that only the talented people are worth something. I do liked the story where MC killed his step family 'cause they annihilated his mother's corpse. I can understand that scene and it's pretty good, not excellent. If the story progresses in every chapter like his sadness over Shiina. I am getting an idea like whether the author is just doing it, so he can complete the word count or not. Hope I am wrong, but I rarely am! This story is good, but the emotional dilemma you are making the MC stuck in a singular point, take him out of his cocoon. A transmigrated person needs about no less than a week to accept their circumstances and even the worst can accept the circumstances in within a month, but it is already three months, why the hell is taking it so long. Huff, I think I will look at this later If I feel like it, but the story hasn't progressed much, though it seems progressed a lot. You can see that there is also a Plot Armor here in the book, if you look at it closely. Hope you can understand.
The story itself is interesting but the author has an extremely long authors note at the end of EVERY chapter that increases the costs of coins per chap. I was hoping that author would cut it out once he started charging at chapter 30 but unfortunately that isnt the case. Cant overlook it, sorry. Will be dropping at chapter 35.
First couple of chapters were nice but started going downhill after about 40 something
I've read the story up to the 34th chapter so there is a few things I want to say. Story is quite generic but nothing bad characters are also can be recognised and undrestood pretty quickly so not a bad thing to do. I had fun reading it. I hope author edits earlier chapters or someting, because the writing style used by the author suprised me by how immersion breaking it was. After every sentence spoke by a person there is a parenthesis with the characters name in it. Then some lore about the world or the characters given by the same way. This broke my immersion several times. I don't know how many chapters later does this continues, but I can't get myself to see them anymore. I hope the story improves best regards to author, good days.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
exelente novela la actitud del protagonista me gusta mucho y la historia me encantó
One of my top favorite novel. The mc is smart amd hard working. I'm a fan of all the misunderstanding. There is no romance as far as I know of, which is a huge plus in my opinion. The other characters are interesting, they have good background stories. The world building is great, it is a modern dark fantasy world.
Good Story,After Volume 1 end i can rate this novel as 5 stars. Jareth the goat🐐.
Absolutely Fantastic!the story is both understandable and interesting, it's also easy To read and understand.the cliffhangers also add to the story as it gives a person a reason to be excited for the new chapter and frustrated that it stopped when it was getting interesting.
It had a pretty good start but after the talent "mana singularity", the title pretty much became an empty title, he basically is 2 star mage or whatever they are called after that, then theres the power scaling thats just gone to everywhere, the world building isnt properly explored but its decent. The authors way of giving information is weird too, its in the form of giving out random facts every now and then that just ruins immersion most of the time though he fixes it in later chapters. The story doesn't even give like a sense of mystery like a character pointing out a dude to watch out for, creating a good sense of wonder of who that is then the next paragraph is just a parenthesis statement of who it was. Overall, I read up to 50+ chapters but its not my cup of tea, though it may he different for some people
揭示劇透 I really like this author novels, the other novel Reborn as an extra is also very great i like wait for everyday and now this book, i am really enjoying it.
I think this story had so much potential. It deserved top 3 spot in my list. What I like the most is the character design of the main character, it's similar to Deculein in some way, which make the story unique cause it incorporate research paper into magic which most one brain cell writer seldom does. The world background itself is decent but I can't see it goes beyond the current world as it was normally so for most fantasy type novel. I can't see the chapter goes for a long way, probably around 400ch?? I will just read it while it last.
The shameless author gives his novel 5 stars as a lucky charm! This is my second novel, but I will put my best efforts into it. Thanks for all of your support.