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Me gusta como se desarrollo, tiene algunas partes que no me gustan, podría ser mejor, pero en general está bien. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing book overall, won't spoil but it has one of the the best MC designs I've ever seen with actual stakes.
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I really like the MC and the pacing is also very good. I also liked the fact that the author included the other characters from the Riordanverse (Kane family) and would love to see them go on some adventure together. Lastly Please don't drop this 🥹.
In my opinion. Bad.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
Joanjudo Can you please do a certain magical index fanfiction idea during PJO : Son of a Primordial and there are no certain magical index fanfics on webnovel so here’s the synopsis for the fanfic : A man dies in our world and is reborn in Certain Magical Index with all the Esper powers of Shigeo Kageyama aka “Mob”. What will he do now? Harem Kaori Kanzaki Yoshikawa Kikyo Yomikawa Aiho Kazakiri Hyouka Sherry Cromwell Orsola Aquinas Itsuwa Fukiyose Seiri Misaka Misuzu Oriana Thomson Lidvia Lorenzetti Mugino Shizuri Elizard Carissa Villian Riméa
Very good. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write.
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I think I took too long to write a review, and I might be biased since the Author is one of my homies, but I must say that the story is really good. The pacing, relationships and congruence with the original world are awesome, I love the powers and I really want to see where Ozzy will take us with his adventures. :)
Seems good so far. I really like the twist in his upbringing. Probably could do with a bit more emphasis on his experimenting with what he can do with his powers, but on the bright side it doesn't seem like he just gets everything instantly handed to him or is far too powerful. Great work!
autant resté simple, j adore! bonne écriture ( relativement bien sur ) mise a jour régulière, l histoire a été bien développé pour un début, le personnage est atypique et le contexte mondiale a été évoqué de manière clair . merci
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I am the author so I am obviously going to give myself five stars lol. I hope you all like my story I have enjoyed Uncle Rick’s stories since I was four so I hope to do them justice even with this cheap imitation.
It’s a great story and I can’t wait to finish it, so far I’ve already finished reading the newest chapter so I’m just waiting for another. If your looking at the reviews on this story and your wondering if you should read this book then let me just say this, I highly recommend you do. This story has a lot of ups and downs, the characters more specificity the OC’s are really interesting and they don’t hurt the story in fact they seem to add more to the story then most of the characters from the original story do. As for the MC, he has a very interesting story. I don’t want to spoile it but he is by far a really interesting backstory and powers. Basically what I’m trying to say is that I highly recommend this story and I can’t wait for the next update.
Me gusta como se desarrollo, tiene algunas partes que no me gustan, podría ser mejor, pero en general está bien. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing book overall, won't spoil but it has one of the the best MC designs I've ever seen with actual stakes.
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I really like the MC and the pacing is also very good. I also liked the fact that the author included the other characters from the Riordanverse (Kane family) and would love to see them go on some adventure together. Lastly Please don't drop this 🥹.
In my opinion. Bad.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
Joanjudo Can you please do a certain magical index fanfiction idea during PJO : Son of a Primordial and there are no certain magical index fanfics on webnovel so here’s the synopsis for the fanfic : A man dies in our world and is reborn in Certain Magical Index with all the Esper powers of Shigeo Kageyama aka “Mob”. What will he do now? Harem Kaori Kanzaki Yoshikawa Kikyo Yomikawa Aiho Kazakiri Hyouka Sherry Cromwell Orsola Aquinas Itsuwa Fukiyose Seiri Misaka Misuzu Oriana Thomson Lidvia Lorenzetti Mugino Shizuri Elizard Carissa Villian Riméa
Very good. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write.
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I think I took too long to write a review, and I might be biased since the Author is one of my homies, but I must say that the story is really good. The pacing, relationships and congruence with the original world are awesome, I love the powers and I really want to see where Ozzy will take us with his adventures. :)
Seems good so far. I really like the twist in his upbringing. Probably could do with a bit more emphasis on his experimenting with what he can do with his powers, but on the bright side it doesn't seem like he just gets everything instantly handed to him or is far too powerful. Great work!
autant resté simple, j adore! bonne écriture ( relativement bien sur ) mise a jour régulière, l histoire a été bien développé pour un début, le personnage est atypique et le contexte mondiale a été évoqué de manière clair . merci
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I am the author so I am obviously going to give myself five stars lol. I hope you all like my story I have enjoyed Uncle Rick’s stories since I was four so I hope to do them justice even with this cheap imitation.
It’s a great story and I can’t wait to finish it, so far I’ve already finished reading the newest chapter so I’m just waiting for another. If your looking at the reviews on this story and your wondering if you should read this book then let me just say this, I highly recommend you do. This story has a lot of ups and downs, the characters more specificity the OC’s are really interesting and they don’t hurt the story in fact they seem to add more to the story then most of the characters from the original story do. As for the MC, he has a very interesting story. I don’t want to spoile it but he is by far a really interesting backstory and powers. Basically what I’m trying to say is that I highly recommend this story and I can’t wait for the next update.