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寫檢討Love the writing narrative and lots of techniques used, the updates sometimes get delayed however. Story development so far isn't incredible but not terrible, I see potential. I love the character designs as I've been on Wattpad and follow the art account, there is also quite a lot of symbolism from what I've heard from the author. The world is meant to be a "hidden world" which kind of reminds me of some games, I quite like this trope, hope to see more!
Love the writing narrative and lots of techniques used, the updates sometimes get delayed however. Story development so far isn't incredible but not terrible, I see potential. I love the character designs as I've been on Wattpad and follow the art account, there is also quite a lot of symbolism from what I've heard from the author. The world is meant to be a "hidden world" which kind of reminds me of some games, I quite like this trope, hope to see more!