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寫檢討
it's mha without change with a Doflamingo from Wish which is useless he's there for nothing, we follow izuku and the band that's all, there are errors on the names everywhere, whether the characters or the techniques , author reads MHA:HORIZON it will help you
*dies of cringe* Author's language barrier is very easily seen while reading, mc is cringe af
Интересное начало, жду продолжение, главное не делай героя слишком самоуверенным, и побольше сделай сами главы- добавь в них больше описания действий и разговоров
Interesting idea, I'm very interested in how it will turn out. good luck to the author in his endeavors
I liked everything especially the ending(help they are holding me hostage and forcing me to write this)
it's mha without change with a Doflamingo from Wish which is useless he's there for nothing, we follow izuku and the band that's all, there are errors on the names everywhere, whether the characters or the techniques , author reads MHA:HORIZON it will help you
*dies of cringe* Author's language barrier is very easily seen while reading, mc is cringe af
Интересное начало, жду продолжение, главное не делай героя слишком самоуверенным, и побольше сделай сами главы- добавь в них больше описания действий и разговоров
Interesting idea, I'm very interested in how it will turn out. good luck to the author in his endeavors
I liked everything especially the ending(help they are holding me hostage and forcing me to write this)
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