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I'm just gonna stack for more chaps before I reed dizznuts never gonna give you up never gonna let you down
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Incredibleee.. I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter. I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter. I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter.
This fanfic was very good, but after rewriting it became a masterpiece. Also, the author doesn't forget to post illustrations of characters and places. I will recommend all my friends to read this fanfic.
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First impressions... This is gonna be another trashy wish fulfillment harem fic... but call me a raccoon cuz I'll be dining fine tonight!
I'm Enjoying it so far! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Stumbled onto this story and what a diamond this is turning out to be. Sizable chapters with great writing thus far. I hope for many more chapters to come.
Well..it is good story and I like it, but here is TOO MUCH anything.. Omniverse with a many worlds, time traveling on the same worlds and cross lines.. It is hard to explain but when you read it you can't understand how it will work as the story progresses, there's just TOO MUCH stuff thrown in at the beginning
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A wonderful story. I hope the author follows it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I said to myself to wait for more chapters before making a review but I figured posting now may help the fic get more exposure since I don't want this to drop. This fic is a very ambitious fic with a large cosmology or basically a multiverse. MC has a goal from the start that he wants to achieve and is supposed to travel to multiple worlds until he gets there. Mondaiji's Little Garden is used here as the Highest Point of Reality or the Highest World, that in itself is very exciting because there are almost no Mondaiji fics in here in WN, I myself have only read one with Mondaiji in it. Regarding the update stability, I'd say it's pretty good so far, I've seen fast uploads but not quick enough that it reduces the quality of the work. We're currently at Danmachi world and is pretty much on early game right now, but with how much potential the MC has, I'm sure it won't be long until he gets OP. Oh and did I mention that there's a Genderbend Bell?😳I will probably update this review in the future, maybe once we leave Danmachi world. All in all, I'd say it's a recommendation to read this because das goodshi—
..............MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I WANT HE'S MOTHER TO REVIVE
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I'm just gonna stack for more chaps before I reed dizznuts never gonna give you up never gonna let you down
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Es demasiado buena .................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Incredibleee.. I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter. I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter. I neeed next chapter I neeed next chapter.
This fanfic was very good, but after rewriting it became a masterpiece. Also, the author doesn't forget to post illustrations of characters and places. I will recommend all my friends to read this fanfic.
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First impressions... This is gonna be another trashy wish fulfillment harem fic... but call me a raccoon cuz I'll be dining fine tonight!
I'm Enjoying it so far! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Stumbled onto this story and what a diamond this is turning out to be. Sizable chapters with great writing thus far. I hope for many more chapters to come.
Well..it is good story and I like it, but here is TOO MUCH anything.. Omniverse with a many worlds, time traveling on the same worlds and cross lines.. It is hard to explain but when you read it you can't understand how it will work as the story progresses, there's just TOO MUCH stuff thrown in at the beginning
揭示劇透 A wonderful story. I hope the author follows it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I said to myself to wait for more chapters before making a review but I figured posting now may help the fic get more exposure since I don't want this to drop. This fic is a very ambitious fic with a large cosmology or basically a multiverse. MC has a goal from the start that he wants to achieve and is supposed to travel to multiple worlds until he gets there. Mondaiji's Little Garden is used here as the Highest Point of Reality or the Highest World, that in itself is very exciting because there are almost no Mondaiji fics in here in WN, I myself have only read one with Mondaiji in it. Regarding the update stability, I'd say it's pretty good so far, I've seen fast uploads but not quick enough that it reduces the quality of the work. We're currently at Danmachi world and is pretty much on early game right now, but with how much potential the MC has, I'm sure it won't be long until he gets OP. Oh and did I mention that there's a Genderbend Bell?😳I will probably update this review in the future, maybe once we leave Danmachi world. All in all, I'd say it's a recommendation to read this because das goodshi—
..............MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I WANT HE'S MOTHER TO REVIVE
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Is this still and Danmachi fanfic ? Be I hope it is