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What is a damn whitebearded son doing being cared for and raised by garp? I don't have to read a single chapter to know it's going to be complete garbage [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
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Same stuff happens over and over , evenif. you skip chapter and read last you won't miss anything
I like the fic so far, but i just have to ask, why does MC train in haki so early and yet he does know the basics of 6 styles yet? im only chapter 16 and have not read that far yet but still i have to ask
I think it is a good novel but you make him to soft ..............................................................................................
What is a damn whitebearded son doing being cared for and raised by garp? I don't have to read a single chapter to know it's going to be complete garbage [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
揭示劇透 Same stuff happens over and over , evenif. you skip chapter and read last you won't miss anything
I like the fic so far, but i just have to ask, why does MC train in haki so early and yet he does know the basics of 6 styles yet? im only chapter 16 and have not read that far yet but still i have to ask
I think it is a good novel but you make him to soft ..............................................................................................