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Thanks for the quality work. I really enjoyed many aspects of the book, especially the main character. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing his interactions with the characters MCU 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Saw this delete coming from a mile away personally though I think if the author wants to keep writing he should you don’t become a master just from one story
Why did you delete it all it was good. I actually enjoyed the story, It was a bit iffy at times but it was still a good read??? Why.
17 chapters into the book and I can say it should be rewritten by a better writer The story is good execution is bad
The story is very interesting and does a smart main character very well, you should read it The only problem is the amount of repetition of the same sentences in different wordings over and over for maybe 4-5 times. (To make it enjoyable and not ruin the mood, just skip through them and do skim reading)
I barely read 10 chapters. if you like reading meaningless, filler dialogs and repetitive explanations, go ahead. I am stopping reading. I am waiting for a healthy critique from those who continue. let me know if the following chapters are worth reading.
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This has to be au because Lord Barron, Strucker dies during the movie avengers age of Ultron, so this has to be in alternative universe
bro I read like 10-15 chapters and story and character development are going pretty good it made me hooked to the story l the only fault I could find in this story is grammatical mistakes which is holding this story back but it cand be improved and if you fix some errors here and there it will make the story mor entertaining without having correcting mistakes ourselves when reading. Good work and thank you for translation 😊 👍🏻
The translation and grammar is the biggest thing that is holding this story back. also the pandering of the mc can be lowered to make it more authentic .
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Awesome novel. Beginning may feel a little hurried. Definitely recommended read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good read but it is also a slowburn at times. mc is likeable but his golden finger doesn't really allow him to be a heroic person. I'd say he is chaotic neutral. xoxo my way or the highway.
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why does say he is a villain its like he is a anti villian/hero because he save certain ppl for his on usre
Buen fin recomendado. La historia está buena el desarrollo no es muy apresurado alemnos hasta donde leí la recomiendo Buen fin recomendado. La historia está buena el desarrollo no es muy apresurado alemnos hasta donde leí la recomiendo
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That novel was a good thing to say that let's go for the first time we are on the way back from school tomorrow ......... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]I'm bot
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Currently at chapter 15. I’m loving the novel so far it is very exciting and fun to read! The writing quality is very good as well!
This story is very good, the idea is creative and it is super well written! and oddly enough I didn't find any flaws or holes in the script! so this story has been a wonderful experience!.... one question who will be the romantic partner?
Thanks for the quality work. I really enjoyed many aspects of the book, especially the main character. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing his interactions with the characters MCU 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Saw this delete coming from a mile away personally though I think if the author wants to keep writing he should you don’t become a master just from one story
Why did you delete it all it was good. I actually enjoyed the story, It was a bit iffy at times but it was still a good read??? Why.
17 chapters into the book and I can say it should be rewritten by a better writer The story is good execution is bad
The story is very interesting and does a smart main character very well, you should read it The only problem is the amount of repetition of the same sentences in different wordings over and over for maybe 4-5 times. (To make it enjoyable and not ruin the mood, just skip through them and do skim reading)
I barely read 10 chapters. if you like reading meaningless, filler dialogs and repetitive explanations, go ahead. I am stopping reading. I am waiting for a healthy critique from those who continue. let me know if the following chapters are worth reading.
good good good ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddd
This has to be au because Lord Barron, Strucker dies during the movie avengers age of Ultron, so this has to be in alternative universe
bro I read like 10-15 chapters and story and character development are going pretty good it made me hooked to the story l the only fault I could find in this story is grammatical mistakes which is holding this story back but it cand be improved and if you fix some errors here and there it will make the story mor entertaining without having correcting mistakes ourselves when reading. Good work and thank you for translation 😊 👍🏻
The translation and grammar is the biggest thing that is holding this story back. also the pandering of the mc can be lowered to make it more authentic .
bom ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome novel. Beginning may feel a little hurried. Definitely recommended read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good read but it is also a slowburn at times. mc is likeable but his golden finger doesn't really allow him to be a heroic person. I'd say he is chaotic neutral. xoxo my way or the highway.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
揭示劇透 why does say he is a villain its like he is a anti villian/hero because he save certain ppl for his on usre
Buen fin recomendado. La historia está buena el desarrollo no es muy apresurado alemnos hasta donde leí la recomiendo Buen fin recomendado. La historia está buena el desarrollo no es muy apresurado alemnos hasta donde leí la recomiendo
this history has potential , continue !! i reading your two os histories [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Very good story. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
That novel was a good thing to say that let's go for the first time we are on the way back from school tomorrow ......... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]I'm bot
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Currently at chapter 15. I’m loving the novel so far it is very exciting and fun to read! The writing quality is very good as well!
This story is very good, the idea is creative and it is super well written! and oddly enough I didn't find any flaws or holes in the script! so this story has been a wonderful experience!.... one question who will be the romantic partner?