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5 star, really good story character just don't for filled the story each one have really like real people personalty
Man how is this fanfic not popular yet? Only 3 review? The fact that I love about this fanfic is that it doesn't just go straight to the beginning of overlord, instead it take it time to build up the world and journey of Shirou and the members of Ainz Ool Gown playing Yggdrasil. The world building, the interaction and the character development is amazing to read, it is fun and emotional I love that Shirou is actually affect the other characters personality Most fanfic just keep the character the same while inserting their own character making it feel like their character is an extra or a spectators that's isn't affecting the story. And that is what I love about this fanfic, it doesn't do that, Shirou presence is actually changing the character, the connection and friendship. I truly hope you don't drop this author
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Bro what happened to your other book, Better living through Magic? It seems to be deleted! Btw trust that this one will be great as well!!
You lied now update or else Jk this is my second read around but I need more
5 star, really good story character just don't for filled the story each one have really like real people personalty
Man how is this fanfic not popular yet? Only 3 review? The fact that I love about this fanfic is that it doesn't just go straight to the beginning of overlord, instead it take it time to build up the world and journey of Shirou and the members of Ainz Ool Gown playing Yggdrasil. The world building, the interaction and the character development is amazing to read, it is fun and emotional I love that Shirou is actually affect the other characters personality Most fanfic just keep the character the same while inserting their own character making it feel like their character is an extra or a spectators that's isn't affecting the story. And that is what I love about this fanfic, it doesn't do that, Shirou presence is actually changing the character, the connection and friendship. I truly hope you don't drop this author
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Bro what happened to your other book, Better living through Magic? It seems to be deleted! Btw trust that this one will be great as well!!
You lied now update or else Jk this is my second read around but I need more