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Using A.I. as the central idea was a very fresh one. I loved how the story gives off a Pokémon vibe. I am a fan, so you know! The writing style is very nice too. Casual and personal—I love it. However, please use QuillBot or Grammerly to fix errors. I use QuillBot, which is the cheapest out there but very helpful. You will definitely love it. The fight and story progression are good too. But what I want to see is that the author can finish the story. There are so many abandoned stories on this platform. They have lost their masters. Please keep up the hope and keep writing till the end. Cheers!
One word. Potential. This work could really go places. It's themes, characters and power system are top tier. I would highly recommend picking this up.
The idea and plot is complicated but you made it easy to understand. Kudos. It's like a pokemon but they used AI. Waiting for the next chapter.
I love AI and I think the writing style is cool the way you put things in brackets. I don't have much experience reading wn but I got so many ideas reading this. thank you sm captain! keep updating, the story is good.
C'est vraiment une histoire unique, c'est sûr. Cela lui donne de la profondeur et une touche agréable qui semble juste, eh bien. Vous avez un excellent style d'écriture et le rythme de l'histoire est également bon. Continuez votre travail !
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The plot is eye catching and I love it! Even the narration which is unique to me and keeps me turning the page. The start at the first chapter also makes this novel a booking story!
I'm thrilled with the captivating sci-fi elements, intriguing characters, and plot twists in the story! It's always exciting when a story keeps the readers on the edge of the seat. And thank you for the kind words about the grammar and overall quality. I really appreciate your good work, definitely keep up the good work! 😄📚
The story has potential , looking for further developments as story is unique keep up the work.👍
It's really a unique story for sure. It gives it depth and nice touch that just seem right yk. You have great writing style and the pace of the story is good as well. Keep up the workk!
loved the synopsis and the genre seemed right up my alley and im loving this so far.♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ I cant explain how much I am OBSESSED with this book. I love the character development and the story depth is amazing, you can tell this book is written thoughtfully and with care!!
The plot of the novel has potential, the grammar is good, as for the writing style, my humble opinion is that if you want the story to be more fluid you should try to shorten the paragraphs and sentences a little, they are well written but sometimes it is difficult. the feeling that the story has not just started, not because of what happens but because of the format. Overall a good job that needs to grow and improve
Using A.I. as the central idea was a very fresh one. I loved how the story gives off a Pokémon vibe. I am a fan, so you know! The writing style is very nice too. Casual and personal—I love it. However, please use QuillBot or Grammerly to fix errors. I use QuillBot, which is the cheapest out there but very helpful. You will definitely love it. The fight and story progression are good too. But what I want to see is that the author can finish the story. There are so many abandoned stories on this platform. They have lost their masters. Please keep up the hope and keep writing till the end. Cheers!
One word. Potential. This work could really go places. It's themes, characters and power system are top tier. I would highly recommend picking this up.
The idea and plot is complicated but you made it easy to understand. Kudos. It's like a pokemon but they used AI. Waiting for the next chapter.
I love AI and I think the writing style is cool the way you put things in brackets. I don't have much experience reading wn but I got so many ideas reading this. thank you sm captain! keep updating, the story is good.
C'est vraiment une histoire unique, c'est sûr. Cela lui donne de la profondeur et une touche agréable qui semble juste, eh bien. Vous avez un excellent style d'écriture et le rythme de l'histoire est également bon. Continuez votre travail !
揭示劇透 The plot is eye catching and I love it! Even the narration which is unique to me and keeps me turning the page. The start at the first chapter also makes this novel a booking story!
I'm thrilled with the captivating sci-fi elements, intriguing characters, and plot twists in the story! It's always exciting when a story keeps the readers on the edge of the seat. And thank you for the kind words about the grammar and overall quality. I really appreciate your good work, definitely keep up the good work! 😄📚
The story has potential , looking for further developments as story is unique keep up the work.👍
It's really a unique story for sure. It gives it depth and nice touch that just seem right yk. You have great writing style and the pace of the story is good as well. Keep up the workk!
loved the synopsis and the genre seemed right up my alley and im loving this so far.♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ I cant explain how much I am OBSESSED with this book. I love the character development and the story depth is amazing, you can tell this book is written thoughtfully and with care!!
The plot of the novel has potential, the grammar is good, as for the writing style, my humble opinion is that if you want the story to be more fluid you should try to shorten the paragraphs and sentences a little, they are well written but sometimes it is difficult. the feeling that the story has not just started, not because of what happens but because of the format. Overall a good job that needs to grow and improve