Era of Pet Monsters: I Can See Their Evolution Routes!

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kaeeeee

i apologize in advance if there are mistakes or errors within my chapters. if you spot any, please let me know, and I'll fix them asap. thanks for helping! ^^

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Hardy1j

A beast-taming book with no-harem and the same old starting plot? You bet, I am in!

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kaeeeee

feel free to ask any questions about the novel here, and I'll respond as quickly as possible : )

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Lunatic_Lucifer_13

After reading almost half of the chapters published till now (chapter 41) here are some of the observations that I have made. The writing quality is average. It could have been better but I've read far worst. Till now, there's very little known about the world. Other than the basic setting, in everything is unknown. The story is really slow paced. Author goes back on his own words and logics when it suits him without caring about what he himself said a few chapters ago. I guess that the author has already addressed the pacing issue but it's vague at best. The MC (supposedly) hates social interaction but is overly enthusiastic when interacting with others. The dialogues feels like they were written by someone who is into playing SIM games. The interaction between characters feel unrealistic. It's like the Author doesn't know normal interaction is like. It is good to be kind and polite with others but everytime the MC interacts with others he either comes off as "Goody-two-shoes" or a flirt. That or the MC is simply very, very optimistic. There are sometimes things that don't make sense about the MC's behaviour. There is the same issue with the other characters too.

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Rusted

Great beast taming story. Good pace and very chill so far with no big flaws in the story as of currently. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

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3ddy

check it out .... .................