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A true gem among gems. At first, I was not planning to read it because of the harem tag, but I'm glad that I did. The story is fun and easy to read, and the humor in the latest chapters makes me clutch my stomach each time I read them. Overall it's a great story that makes me look forward to more updates
I've read the first 154 chapters , and here's what I think: Right now, I don't have any criticisms to dedicate to this novel, because in my opinion, it's proceeding at a good pace that doesn't easily bore the reader. There are small hints of inspiration from other novels, but they are small enough to overlook. The main character is intelligent and interesting, as are the side characters of the novel. The plot is interesting and quite unique in its genre. Also, regarding the world-building, for this number of chapters, I would say it's quite good.In conclusion: it's a novel worth spending time on, and it's good enough for me to spend some money to read the private chapters (which honestly I've only done with just 2 novels so far).P.S. Of course, I don't expect everyone to agree with me on the points listed above, as it is also a matter of taste.
MC is a huge hypocrite talking about how he hates what fate does to villains and cannon fodder but then turns around and attempts to break the mind of some of the people fate screws with the most which are heros.
At about chapter 30. Story is ok and well written, but suffers from a know it all protagonist. While he is not that much of a jerk he is prepared for everything and faces little in terms challenge and very little potential for character emotional growth. The story has potential, but it could very easily be better if emotions were realistically described. It is what it and I have definitely seen way way worse, but at the end of the day it does not really have anything that is worth more of my time.
I'm in love with this novel is just great, it got everything the I love in a story from comedy to action, the development of the characters is not in depth but enough that they waste you time reading about a person the will no be important in future.
I've been following Elyon since RWTSS and he hasn't disappointed his readers even once since then. The Strongest Necromancer of Heaven's Gate, Strongest Warlock and now this one are all freaking masterpieces. I was very intrigued and excited when I read the synopsis that a System will be the mc this time. It's just a breath of fresh air and absolutely brilliant. You won't find a problem with the writing quality or his updating stability. The characters are extremely well written and are in no way one dimensional. The world building is incredible as always. I think unless you don't read his works, you will not be able to appreciate the sheer amount of thought, care, love and hard work our beloved author has put in every damn time. Now stop reading my review and go read the novel lol. P.S. Elyon bro, please create a discord server for us readers to engage.
Vandalieu in the Shadow slave-like world.One thing I can't feel in this novel is the power levels. The first volume already showcased powerful characters up to Rank 9 and even one deity. I can't get a feel as to how powerful they truly are because the MC ended up defeating a Rank 9 while being 7 years old. So what does that leave the rest of the novel? The endgame is defeating a God, but how would the novel go from there if the MC already defeated one of the apex powerhouses just from one volume of the novel? All in all, this is a good read
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Great story with real characters. I can't find the Discord server for this novel, is there any?
I am enjoying this novel so far I love all your novels billion stars ✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Author, I understand that you have a complex of a boy who has never had a girlfriend, but this is already too much. Throughout the entire novel, GG did not hit or humiliate a single girl. Of course, it is clear that you have grown as a writer; before there were only harems. It's better now, much better, but Holy. seriously? It's not even funny
1. I have a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked
This story is about a system being turned into a “captor of fate and gods machinations” by the creator of systems, Dues Ex Machina. The story is very engaging and interesting. The system is up against a very petty and bitter god that is bent on making his life hard. I would recommend this story to others that don’t mind the MC constantly having no control over their life. Personally, I stopped reading at the point where the first awakening occurred. Three issues popped up for me. The first was including the 7 year old and not just 13 year olds. It seems the god of this world “the one” is ok with the system god’s constant interference. Second, how the other 13 year olds actually make it back alive is very confusing. They just have to make it to a gate without any support? But don’t forget that the land is massive and they can run into things tier 1 to tier 9 along their journey. The kids can’t kill the tier 1 without weapons, but that’s against the “one” god’s rules. this lasts 1 day, 1 week, 1 year, 10 years, who knows what happens with time limits. Three, I realized the awakening is just a gimmick of the world to kill humans and whittle down the human race on Pangea to allow the take over of the monsters from the other world. With the one gods rules and the awakening randomness, you can never convince me otherwise.
I love how you will never ever find a 2 or 3 star review in any of Elyons novel. While master class novels like shadow slave and Lord of myserties also have dozens of bad review, but not in any of Elyons novel through some "Miracle"
writing quality is without question good, Eylon is known for it. overall everything is good, but I have some issues with it. currently at chapter 73 and the number of things that feel "inspired" by shadow slave...is a lot. dream gate/dimension gate; echos/avatars; first nightmare/first wandering (they even occur on the same day-winter solstice, longest night of the year); beast cores/soul cores (specifically the manor in which they are used to rank up); initial location for first wandering - hellhole that no one/almost no one survives, with everyone trying to find a way out/complete a quest to leave. pulling ideas from other writing is not bad and relatively normal, it's just the amount and seemingly sole source in such a small amount of chapters makes it feel very blatant.
Since this fantasy story doesn't have Harem tag its not my cup of tea to read sadly, as it seems focus more on friendship stuff, and from looks of it author throw out his Harem fan readers base from his last 2 successful novels, so it's understandable tjis novel doesn't have the same success 8n golden ranking or other rankings like his previous novels. and that's sad.
This is the best book I have ever read I feel like it is difficult to find something like that
I don't know what to say but this book is just soooooo great,,can't wait to brag to my friends whom I just introduced to start reading it. I'm. curious if only Elyon could give us a tinsy bit of how its gonna be later on ill appreciate. I kinda like spoilers.
The works from this auther keeps on getting better with each new novel. Highly recommend reading system's pov.
dude just stop breaking hearts every now and then and you will live a long life, or else your fans will come nocking on your door😊
Mixed feelings about this novel. It should be good, as the premise should be interesting, but it’s not (for me). I just can’t take the story seriously. Too many immersion breaks, too many „basic“ jokes, like tf is a “copyright god” and the “mafia boys”. Weird language sometimes, like you read in a instagram section. You feel like a 10th grader wrote this sometimes. The villains are two-dimensional, like always the monarchs and gods are stupid and only the MC came up with the most basic of solution and that makes him a genius. You just can’t feel anything for the characters.
just began reading it after finishing necromancer and just to ask which chapter does lux meet with thirteen? So far Elyon's books are the greatest I've read and big up to yah
it was really good story . I like the character ,if you like system novels you must to read that because different from others this time we look story in system eyes. it was touching sometimes I really really like story please give a try:) ( sorry for my English I try my best to write this) [img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
can anyone explain why the privilege tiers are way more expensive than other novels.
who thinks that if therteen had to decide between his family and christopher, he will choose christopher, like im thinking that thirteen will become his bootlicker by the end.yeah I know I'm number 1 christopher hater
Time for the third running book Read the last two and they were beautiful, hope this too
I don't want to brag, but let me start bragging right now. This, ladies, and gents, is one of the most, if not the most amazing novel that you will read this year. I won't say anything else because this refined, elegant, and charismatic author, is bound to give you another epic tale, which would make you fall in love with reading novels, all over again.
A true gem among gems. At first, I was not planning to read it because of the harem tag, but I'm glad that I did. The story is fun and easy to read, and the humor in the latest chapters makes me clutch my stomach each time I read them. Overall it's a great story that makes me look forward to more updates
I've read the first 154 chapters , and here's what I think: Right now, I don't have any criticisms to dedicate to this novel, because in my opinion, it's proceeding at a good pace that doesn't easily bore the reader. There are small hints of inspiration from other novels, but they are small enough to overlook. The main character is intelligent and interesting, as are the side characters of the novel. The plot is interesting and quite unique in its genre. Also, regarding the world-building, for this number of chapters, I would say it's quite good.In conclusion: it's a novel worth spending time on, and it's good enough for me to spend some money to read the private chapters (which honestly I've only done with just 2 novels so far).P.S. Of course, I don't expect everyone to agree with me on the points listed above, as it is also a matter of taste.
MC is a huge hypocrite talking about how he hates what fate does to villains and cannon fodder but then turns around and attempts to break the mind of some of the people fate screws with the most which are heros.
At about chapter 30. Story is ok and well written, but suffers from a know it all protagonist. While he is not that much of a jerk he is prepared for everything and faces little in terms challenge and very little potential for character emotional growth. The story has potential, but it could very easily be better if emotions were realistically described. It is what it and I have definitely seen way way worse, but at the end of the day it does not really have anything that is worth more of my time.
I'm in love with this novel is just great, it got everything the I love in a story from comedy to action, the development of the characters is not in depth but enough that they waste you time reading about a person the will no be important in future.
I've been following Elyon since RWTSS and he hasn't disappointed his readers even once since then. The Strongest Necromancer of Heaven's Gate, Strongest Warlock and now this one are all freaking masterpieces. I was very intrigued and excited when I read the synopsis that a System will be the mc this time. It's just a breath of fresh air and absolutely brilliant. You won't find a problem with the writing quality or his updating stability. The characters are extremely well written and are in no way one dimensional. The world building is incredible as always. I think unless you don't read his works, you will not be able to appreciate the sheer amount of thought, care, love and hard work our beloved author has put in every damn time. Now stop reading my review and go read the novel lol. P.S. Elyon bro, please create a discord server for us readers to engage.
Vandalieu in the Shadow slave-like world.One thing I can't feel in this novel is the power levels. The first volume already showcased powerful characters up to Rank 9 and even one deity. I can't get a feel as to how powerful they truly are because the MC ended up defeating a Rank 9 while being 7 years old. So what does that leave the rest of the novel? The endgame is defeating a God, but how would the novel go from there if the MC already defeated one of the apex powerhouses just from one volume of the novel? All in all, this is a good read
揭示劇透 Great story with real characters. I can't find the Discord server for this novel, is there any?
I am enjoying this novel so far I love all your novels billion stars ✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Author, I understand that you have a complex of a boy who has never had a girlfriend, but this is already too much. Throughout the entire novel, GG did not hit or humiliate a single girl. Of course, it is clear that you have grown as a writer; before there were only harems. It's better now, much better, but Holy. seriously? It's not even funny
1. I have a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked
This story is about a system being turned into a “captor of fate and gods machinations” by the creator of systems, Dues Ex Machina. The story is very engaging and interesting. The system is up against a very petty and bitter god that is bent on making his life hard. I would recommend this story to others that don’t mind the MC constantly having no control over their life. Personally, I stopped reading at the point where the first awakening occurred. Three issues popped up for me. The first was including the 7 year old and not just 13 year olds. It seems the god of this world “the one” is ok with the system god’s constant interference. Second, how the other 13 year olds actually make it back alive is very confusing. They just have to make it to a gate without any support? But don’t forget that the land is massive and they can run into things tier 1 to tier 9 along their journey. The kids can’t kill the tier 1 without weapons, but that’s against the “one” god’s rules. this lasts 1 day, 1 week, 1 year, 10 years, who knows what happens with time limits. Three, I realized the awakening is just a gimmick of the world to kill humans and whittle down the human race on Pangea to allow the take over of the monsters from the other world. With the one gods rules and the awakening randomness, you can never convince me otherwise.
I love how you will never ever find a 2 or 3 star review in any of Elyons novel. While master class novels like shadow slave and Lord of myserties also have dozens of bad review, but not in any of Elyons novel through some "Miracle"
writing quality is without question good, Eylon is known for it. overall everything is good, but I have some issues with it. currently at chapter 73 and the number of things that feel "inspired" by shadow slave...is a lot. dream gate/dimension gate; echos/avatars; first nightmare/first wandering (they even occur on the same day-winter solstice, longest night of the year); beast cores/soul cores (specifically the manor in which they are used to rank up); initial location for first wandering - hellhole that no one/almost no one survives, with everyone trying to find a way out/complete a quest to leave. pulling ideas from other writing is not bad and relatively normal, it's just the amount and seemingly sole source in such a small amount of chapters makes it feel very blatant.
Since this fantasy story doesn't have Harem tag its not my cup of tea to read sadly, as it seems focus more on friendship stuff, and from looks of it author throw out his Harem fan readers base from his last 2 successful novels, so it's understandable tjis novel doesn't have the same success 8n golden ranking or other rankings like his previous novels. and that's sad.
This is the best book I have ever read I feel like it is difficult to find something like that
I don't know what to say but this book is just soooooo great,,can't wait to brag to my friends whom I just introduced to start reading it. I'm. curious if only Elyon could give us a tinsy bit of how its gonna be later on ill appreciate. I kinda like spoilers.
The works from this auther keeps on getting better with each new novel. Highly recommend reading system's pov.
dude just stop breaking hearts every now and then and you will live a long life, or else your fans will come nocking on your door😊
Mixed feelings about this novel. It should be good, as the premise should be interesting, but it’s not (for me). I just can’t take the story seriously. Too many immersion breaks, too many „basic“ jokes, like tf is a “copyright god” and the “mafia boys”. Weird language sometimes, like you read in a instagram section. You feel like a 10th grader wrote this sometimes. The villains are two-dimensional, like always the monarchs and gods are stupid and only the MC came up with the most basic of solution and that makes him a genius. You just can’t feel anything for the characters.
just began reading it after finishing necromancer and just to ask which chapter does lux meet with thirteen? So far Elyon's books are the greatest I've read and big up to yah
it was really good story . I like the character ,if you like system novels you must to read that because different from others this time we look story in system eyes. it was touching sometimes I really really like story please give a try:) ( sorry for my English I try my best to write this) [img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
can anyone explain why the privilege tiers are way more expensive than other novels.
who thinks that if therteen had to decide between his family and christopher, he will choose christopher, like im thinking that thirteen will become his bootlicker by the end.yeah I know I'm number 1 christopher hater
Time for the third running book Read the last two and they were beautiful, hope this too
I don't want to brag, but let me start bragging right now. This, ladies, and gents, is one of the most, if not the most amazing novel that you will read this year. I won't say anything else because this refined, elegant, and charismatic author, is bound to give you another epic tale, which would make you fall in love with reading novels, all over again.