Dc: start in Young Justice

LV 6

Kilaske

Sorry but this novel has too low of a rating for this level of writing. It's not that bad to be a 3 star. Seriously. I've read worse. Maybe not 5 star, but definitely not 3. Yes at the early chapters the writing seems a little bit confusing, but the later chapters were smooth to read. Was a little put off that MC actually was getting too close with the kids, but he did later say that it won't let him impede what he's going to do in the future. Also those saying he's being too biased and hating the League too much is the one being weird. MC doesn't really hate the League members too much; he even says that he looked up to them when he was a kid, but now that he's actually living in that world, you can kinda see where it gets a little bit hypocritical and understand MC's views. Was also getting kinda nervous when he was getting close to the doctor, but thankfully he didn't fully commit and the relationship is still okay. So again, for those who are turned off by the review and rating, give this novel a chance, since it's not that as bad as people are claiming. Those people are exaggerating.

LV 4

Hidden_Wrath

I came back so its's actually a harem which automatically makes this low tier trash ONLY suitable for babies who laugh at keys because they make noise honestly it was a good read until the author decided to go down the path of harem which made all and any effort he put in useless. I'm even more annoyed by the fact that he didn't put harem in the tag i legit wouldn't be complaining if I didn't read it

LV 5

YangRen

what a trashy attitude MC that's all I can say, just the same attitude that almost all people in the real world have right now.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

DaoistH7599X

probably a work of a teenager, "look how cool i am" and "how not edgy i am edgyness"

LV 5

_VOIDLESS_

You have started out pretty good to be honest, But the narrative is all over the place makes me feel like mc is a chaotic neutral being. But the rest is pretty much fine can't wait for more updates

LV 1

GodOfLight

The story is good, but the forced plots that the author does are starting to irritate me a little, which disappoints me, so I will give a slightly low rating this time, but will not remove the 5 star from another review

LV 1

Binge_Reader69

mc is all over the place, the story is boring

LV 4

YourDad_

What the f, man. Why this book has so many bad reviews. It's not the best there is, writing needs huge improvements - Character & story can be developed a bit more perfectly - BUT Still it's good. I don't even know how people in this platform thinks🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

LV 4

KIKOwoods_gaming

great job so far and hope you continue to make this story.

LV 1

cfif_ybrekby

really like! completely different from others and gives variety! Usually everyone is a hero/vigilante/villain, but this one is just neutral! Also strong and smart! This is how an MC should be! The wishes are chosen very cleverly and without “inexplicable” protection, which should not be there! the pedigree of Doomsday and the Martian is simply Imba and why has no one written about it? traveling through the worlds is just the icing on the cake!

LV 4

merocamero

A good story where MC explores the world and doesn't turn into a superhero or idiotic edge lord. In fact, it's almost unique in the sense that dude simply says that he has more important things to do and just making a profit while having fun along the way.

LV 4

The_Twins_6816

did the Author quite the story I hope he didn't it is a real good story

LV 11

Aces223

Boring, had to skim the first 6 chapters because he just talks about his powers and potential plans the whole time

LV 1

NeaCambelt

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LV 4

LastGod

author tries to be funny. and author fails spectacularly. TRASH NOVEL DO NOT READ.

LV 13

Ming_Ching_6071

Literally just a tap session I don’t know why the author just writes in run on sentences all the time, instead of reading a book it’s like reading the authors thoughts about how the characters act and how they should act

LV 4

Ayden12g

The grammar is pretty dreadful along with having nonsensical plot points which makes it a pretty ruff read.

LV 1

GodOfLight

I liked the story and mc as well as his choice of wishes, the grammar is not super good but not super bad either, overall I liked everything but not the romance, it feels kind of forced and I don't think romance is appropriate for this story

LV 5

samflin

Everything about this fan-fiction is superb but updating of this fan-fiction is too slow . So please look into this matter kindly .

LV 4

LayEraser

An exellent read, too bad for the inconsistent uploads and late notes.