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Loving the Author's take on a video game from the perspective of someone not the original MC of the game.
This work dares to do what few other works dare. Which is actions having actual effect on the story and progression in the universe. The author doesn't skimp on the little details of world building and you can easily see how he tries every thought experiment possible to construct a scene. Alex acts as a beacon of light that influences everyone around him, changing the usual "grim dark" nature of cyberpunk and NC to something along the lines of a wish fulfillment fanfic. Calling it wish fullfillment feels wrong though because it is in no way cheap, undeserved or thoughtless. It just feels like the second coming of christ to cyberpunk lol. Mc isn't op, he world's hard and has limitations, but they are well explained and satisfying in the rewards he should have if he overcomes them, like a pure human body. The only problem I have (apart from wanting more chapters ASAP 😂) is the major arcana. Those sections are boring and they take protagonism away from the characters I love. But as of rn they are completely optional and skippable. I'll cut the author some slack since tarot magic is Canon and if Alex keeps growing he would eventually have to delve into it, but I'd rather it take a backseat. This novel also took a painfully underutilized and full of potential character from the lore and gave him a solid role in the story (RCHBTMS) One of my fav novels as of right now, in terms of video game novels it's in my top 2.
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Pretty interesting read and a step away from the usual fics. At the time I’m reading this (Chapter 95), this dude refuses to get cyberware which I haven’t seen before and still manages to make it fun to read. Good stuff so far.
揭示劇透
great, great, great story. the world building is great, I love how the story progresses, and it doesn't fall for a lot of the issues that you see in more slow paced stories. there isn't much of a dull moment as each chapter unravels more about the characters and the plot. Note that this is not your usual fast-paced cyberpunk story, and it can be hard to tell from the cover, so don't expect constant action. if I were to critique the story, I would say it is a little slow, and the author takes his time making chapters, but I do not wish for quality to be sacrificed for quantity. I like this story. please don't drop.
I really like this story and characters. I like reading stories like that, showing how a character you know from game or movies have a different life and encounters, leading to a better ending.
Sounds like he is writing from ttrpg campaign he did using 2077 and edgerunners. Eager for more chapters.
I read a few chapters and I'm really enjoying the writing. We experienced readers know how to distinguish between children's writing that appears to have been written by a child and mature writing that was done by an experienced or talented writer. In this fic it is the second, 5 star writing quality.
I really enjoyed reading all 50 chapters that are currently available. I think the characters are deep and relationships are well build something out of the norm in this platform. I hope you keep up with the good work and provides us with more chapters!
I like it. Of course, this story isn't without its flaws. For example, a very slow tempo and a chapter release that doesn't correspond to such a tempo. But I don't want to put up with it if the author will end his story.
One of the better ones in fanfiction in terms of writing. Bit on the slow side might say, but the worldbuilding covers up this slowness and keeps the story interesting. What makes it iffy for me is that some important story developments are being breeze through and just being told in a narration. Thus somehow in my opinion the story sometimes leans more like a biography or a diary. Though it feels like the story is still being set up in the 20+ chapters I have read and might be improved later. Overall, its worth a try in reading!
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I mean it's okay. A bit slow...too slow fo cyberpunk story in my opinion. Like it's going against what is cyberpunk all about. And that's not like a big problem, but ya know, it's not that intresting either.
One of the few good cyberpunk novels that actually get updated. PS author thank you
this is one of the few fanfics that so far I have no complaints of. great work hope you keep it up, I am looking forward to how canon is changed with him and any possible interactions between him, V and silverhand.
Cyberpunk stories are few and far between such well written ones are even rarer. I’m enjoying this a lot just please please don’t fall into the trap of trying to please others with your stories direction. Don’t end up like Snail rewritting or dropping it’s your story write how you want. Rant over. Love what your doing so far.
At the time of writing this review, I've read 17 chapters. I highly recommend it. Besides the fact that there are few cyberpunk fanfics on webnovels, this one is exceptionally well-written. The only thing that might puzzle readers is the specific cyberpunk "universe" the protagonist inhabits and what events will unfold in the future, but I hope the author will elaborate on this in upcoming chapters.
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Thank you for your work! I need more cyberpunk ! Waiting new part ! ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Is this really a fanfic or a well-written novel? Haven't seen such cool dialogues in a long time) Anyway, I like it. Looking forward to more chapters.
Really well done, keep it up and don't drop the story, with enough chapters thus will blow up for sure.
I'm a huge fan of cyberpunk, so I was thrilled to find this fanfic. Moreover, I was genuinely amazed at how well-written it is, a kind of breath of fresh air amidst all the systems and 'three wishes' stuff.
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Attention: Disclaimer! 1) This work steers clear of gratuitous grimness and all related themes. If you relish reading about others' sufferings elevated to the extreme, do not even attempt to start this piece. Seriously, it's not for you. 2) The story is set in the game world, incorporating certain lore elements from Cyberpunk "2020", "2077", and "Blade Runner". Most of the information can be found on wikis, but it's not the gospel truth, so be mindful of the author's creative liberties.
Loving the Author's take on a video game from the perspective of someone not the original MC of the game.
This work dares to do what few other works dare. Which is actions having actual effect on the story and progression in the universe. The author doesn't skimp on the little details of world building and you can easily see how he tries every thought experiment possible to construct a scene. Alex acts as a beacon of light that influences everyone around him, changing the usual "grim dark" nature of cyberpunk and NC to something along the lines of a wish fulfillment fanfic. Calling it wish fullfillment feels wrong though because it is in no way cheap, undeserved or thoughtless. It just feels like the second coming of christ to cyberpunk lol. Mc isn't op, he world's hard and has limitations, but they are well explained and satisfying in the rewards he should have if he overcomes them, like a pure human body. The only problem I have (apart from wanting more chapters ASAP 😂) is the major arcana. Those sections are boring and they take protagonism away from the characters I love. But as of rn they are completely optional and skippable. I'll cut the author some slack since tarot magic is Canon and if Alex keeps growing he would eventually have to delve into it, but I'd rather it take a backseat. This novel also took a painfully underutilized and full of potential character from the lore and gave him a solid role in the story (RCHBTMS) One of my fav novels as of right now, in terms of video game novels it's in my top 2.
揭示劇透 Pretty interesting read and a step away from the usual fics. At the time I’m reading this (Chapter 95), this dude refuses to get cyberware which I haven’t seen before and still manages to make it fun to read. Good stuff so far.
揭示劇透 great, great, great story. the world building is great, I love how the story progresses, and it doesn't fall for a lot of the issues that you see in more slow paced stories. there isn't much of a dull moment as each chapter unravels more about the characters and the plot. Note that this is not your usual fast-paced cyberpunk story, and it can be hard to tell from the cover, so don't expect constant action. if I were to critique the story, I would say it is a little slow, and the author takes his time making chapters, but I do not wish for quality to be sacrificed for quantity. I like this story. please don't drop.
I really like this story and characters. I like reading stories like that, showing how a character you know from game or movies have a different life and encounters, leading to a better ending.
Sounds like he is writing from ttrpg campaign he did using 2077 and edgerunners. Eager for more chapters.
I read a few chapters and I'm really enjoying the writing. We experienced readers know how to distinguish between children's writing that appears to have been written by a child and mature writing that was done by an experienced or talented writer. In this fic it is the second, 5 star writing quality.
I really enjoyed reading all 50 chapters that are currently available. I think the characters are deep and relationships are well build something out of the norm in this platform. I hope you keep up with the good work and provides us with more chapters!
I like it. Of course, this story isn't without its flaws. For example, a very slow tempo and a chapter release that doesn't correspond to such a tempo. But I don't want to put up with it if the author will end his story.
One of the better ones in fanfiction in terms of writing. Bit on the slow side might say, but the worldbuilding covers up this slowness and keeps the story interesting. What makes it iffy for me is that some important story developments are being breeze through and just being told in a narration. Thus somehow in my opinion the story sometimes leans more like a biography or a diary. Though it feels like the story is still being set up in the 20+ chapters I have read and might be improved later. Overall, its worth a try in reading!
-. .. -.-. . / ..-. .- -. ..-. .. -.-. / .. / .-.. .. -.- . / -- -.-. / --..-- / -... ..- - / - .... . / .--. .- -.-. .. -. --. / .. ... / .- / .-.. .. - - .-.. . / ... .-.. --- .--
I mean it's okay. A bit slow...too slow fo cyberpunk story in my opinion. Like it's going against what is cyberpunk all about. And that's not like a big problem, but ya know, it's not that intresting either.
One of the few good cyberpunk novels that actually get updated. PS author thank you
this is one of the few fanfics that so far I have no complaints of. great work hope you keep it up, I am looking forward to how canon is changed with him and any possible interactions between him, V and silverhand.
Cyberpunk stories are few and far between such well written ones are even rarer. I’m enjoying this a lot just please please don’t fall into the trap of trying to please others with your stories direction. Don’t end up like Snail rewritting or dropping it’s your story write how you want. Rant over. Love what your doing so far.
At the time of writing this review, I've read 17 chapters. I highly recommend it. Besides the fact that there are few cyberpunk fanfics on webnovels, this one is exceptionally well-written. The only thing that might puzzle readers is the specific cyberpunk "universe" the protagonist inhabits and what events will unfold in the future, but I hope the author will elaborate on this in upcoming chapters.
Need more sci-fi fanfics! Need more sci-fi fanfics! Need more sci-fi fanfics! Need more sci-fi fanfics! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Thank you for your work! I need more cyberpunk ! Waiting new part ! ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Is this really a fanfic or a well-written novel? Haven't seen such cool dialogues in a long time) Anyway, I like it. Looking forward to more chapters.
Really well done, keep it up and don't drop the story, with enough chapters thus will blow up for sure.
I'm a huge fan of cyberpunk, so I was thrilled to find this fanfic. Moreover, I was genuinely amazed at how well-written it is, a kind of breath of fresh air amidst all the systems and 'three wishes' stuff.
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Attention: Disclaimer! 1) This work steers clear of gratuitous grimness and all related themes. If you relish reading about others' sufferings elevated to the extreme, do not even attempt to start this piece. Seriously, it's not for you. 2) The story is set in the game world, incorporating certain lore elements from Cyberpunk "2020", "2077", and "Blade Runner". Most of the information can be found on wikis, but it's not the gospel truth, so be mindful of the author's creative liberties.