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love the story [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I'm really enjoying this fanfic, bro, it's great! But I wanted to know if you will continue with the "Graviton" fanfic, tell me, I'm curious?!
I’ve been reading this fanfic since around the 50th chapter, and I have to say, thank you for not dropping it like so many other writers tend to do. I truly appreciate the effort you’ve put into creating such a wonderful story. I usually forget to leave a review, but today, because I was exhausted from my finals, I ended up taking a nap. When I woke up, I decided to read the latest chapter, including the parts I normally skip. After reading it, I felt compelled to leave a review this time. I hope you continue this fanfic without dropping it. Thank you again for your hard work! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ставлю низкую оценку из-за того, что МС слишком глупый, добрый, такое ощущение, что автор школьник которого в очко ебут. Ну или другого объяснения нет.
Good. It doesn't only follow rimuru throughout the whole story. The author makes the mc a true individual living his own life the way that he wants. The plot is good as well as the 18+ fanservice and doesn't feel overly forced. The MC is not a fanboy since he doesn't of the 'world' before or its anime. He enjoys his time in this new world and lives it up where its fighting or having fun with his women.
Your novel is great. It's worth following every chapter until now. But author, I would like to ask your permission about one thing. That is, I would like permission to have your novel translated into my language. Is that possible? Because I really like your novels and would like to translate your works for others to read.
You should certainly read this fanfic. It is one of the best fanfics I have read I reccomend for others to read it.
La historia es buena, en los primeros capítulos me gustaba la manera en que se relacionaba con otros y su entrenamiento para obtener ciertas habilidades, luego de evolucionar algunas habilidades este entrenamiento se descartó porque podía copiarlas habilidades al instante, hubo algunas cosas extrañas que el autor decidió incluir de imprevisto, se olvidó de algunos personajes, la personalidad del protagonista se volvió algo desagradable, lo había comprado con los protagonistas presentes en fanfiction sobre chat grupales, porque estos al obtener algún tipo de poder sobre otros personajes de anime se vuelven arrogantes, no es que eso impidiera que continuar leyendo, pero luego de llegar Jujutsu Kaisen el protagonista empezó a guiar sus acciones solo por su estado de ánimo, me pareció extraño de repente no le interesará la gente del orfanato que supuestamente fue buena con el o la vida de las demás personas de ese mundo, todo estuvo justificado por si era divertido realizar su experimento. Cuando los personajes empiezan a realizar sus acciones en consideración a su diversión es cuando creo que una historia no es para mí gusto, espero que otros la disfruten porque hay mucho contenido interesante.
Your writing may not be accepted by everyone, but that doesn't mean your work is wrong. Don't stop moving forward.
the story is pretty good one of the better ones of this fandom the only problem would be the first few chapters being a little annoying but it does get better quickly
I don't know what many other reviewers think. In my opinion, the story is really good.
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The story and characters had potential but it’s all lame in the end. And the mc is a freaking beta! Has hot servants in a world where strength is everything and is like “what happens will happen” and then is totally surprised when his servants love him. Like how stupid can an mc be. No backbone. Just like the I don’t kill 10.000 people for their souls, but then kills 30.000 Majins. Nobody told him to just kill a random city, but there are enough armies and enemies. And even if he killed a random town or city. HE IS A DAEMON that’s what they do… but that’s only my opinion. The story had potential, just wasn’t used
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Great story. It’s long but a worthwhile read, I love how consistent you are with the LN’s lore. I wish you picked up the speed of the story a little but that’s just me.
Yes, the story closely follows canon at the start and has a lot of info dumps, but it gets really good after getting past those earlier chapters - its a hidden gem in my opinion. The Info dumps just mean author knows his tensura lore and he really does, which is all the more important for a fic in such a complex universe like tensura. I really enjoy the fic and encourage you to give it a try aswell, past the earlier chapters. PS: i hope we get some quicker chappies for thid review @author <3
Pretty goated story if you give it a chance. The beginning is a bit rough cuz the author is getting their footing and following the original pretty closely, but you can tell once they get comfortable with their groove. Once they take the story into their own hands, the story becomes really enjoyable. They are also one of the most knowledgeable authors when it comes to tensura. My man can explain everything about the world in-depth.
1000/10 Increíble historia. Muy recomendada para que la lean, me encantó. Espero el siguiente capítulo. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yo, dude, lemme tell ya straight—you're just runnin' the same ol' script as the anime plotlines, no twists, no flair. What's the deal with this fanfic, huh? Where's the spice? You gotta throw in some curveballs, make it pop, or else you're just servin' up reheated ramen. Trust me, ain't nobody stickin' around for leftovers when they can get fresh, y'know? Shits lame… —why in the ever-loving hell is your MC goin' 'round flappin' his gums about being from another world? I mean, come on, even in Tensura that was dumb as all get out. I don't care if it's common knowledge or some sci-fi trope—rule numero uno of reincarnating or transmigrating: keep your damn mouth shut! Then he does it in another world. You're just beggin' for trouble, and the sad part is, the author's just as clueless as the MC, so it all slides by without a hitch. Real shame, too, 'cause this had the bones of somethin' great. Instead, we get a trainwreck with a half-baked plot, forced humor (seriously, having him stayin' a woman?), and an MC that’s about as sharp as a beach ball. Makes me wanna coin a new phrase: everyone's got a story in 'em, but that don't mean they should write it.
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It's not the best. But it is the first Slime fan fiction that interested me. MC is alright, that's all I can say.
★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★....................Keep★★★★★★★★★ cooking bro★★★★★★★★★ 😉..........................★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
Utter garbage. Instead of a Fanfic might as well call it a Tensura side story or spin off with a disappointing protagonist with op ability that he can't properly use. Story follows the canon with miniscule change and instead of anything interesting new, you would only get what rimuru did on the canon in a summary. mc is basically a useless side character. so much potential but poor execution. you can barely feel any emotion from the writing. things feel dull like a history book. honestly, most chinese fics are better than this and if you have read chinese fics you will know how bad they are. anyway, I dropped it at chapter 18. idk if author improves
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So many high ratings when the story is not that good, i wonder if the low ratings are erased. Why the hate? at the start it's good but as the story goes it became boring and the plot is very forced. So forced that it force me to drop this tr*sh. There's no difference from original, why read this when you can read the original?
I'll give a brief and truthful description so you won't have to read this garbage, 'A man transmigrates into the world of tensura then co*k rides rimuru.' Honestly that's it.
love the story [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I'm really enjoying this fanfic, bro, it's great! But I wanted to know if you will continue with the "Graviton" fanfic, tell me, I'm curious?!
I’ve been reading this fanfic since around the 50th chapter, and I have to say, thank you for not dropping it like so many other writers tend to do. I truly appreciate the effort you’ve put into creating such a wonderful story. I usually forget to leave a review, but today, because I was exhausted from my finals, I ended up taking a nap. When I woke up, I decided to read the latest chapter, including the parts I normally skip. After reading it, I felt compelled to leave a review this time. I hope you continue this fanfic without dropping it. Thank you again for your hard work! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ставлю низкую оценку из-за того, что МС слишком глупый, добрый, такое ощущение, что автор школьник которого в очко ебут. Ну или другого объяснения нет.
Good. It doesn't only follow rimuru throughout the whole story. The author makes the mc a true individual living his own life the way that he wants. The plot is good as well as the 18+ fanservice and doesn't feel overly forced. The MC is not a fanboy since he doesn't of the 'world' before or its anime. He enjoys his time in this new world and lives it up where its fighting or having fun with his women.
Your novel is great. It's worth following every chapter until now. But author, I would like to ask your permission about one thing. That is, I would like permission to have your novel translated into my language. Is that possible? Because I really like your novels and would like to translate your works for others to read.
You should certainly read this fanfic. It is one of the best fanfics I have read I reccomend for others to read it.
La historia es buena, en los primeros capítulos me gustaba la manera en que se relacionaba con otros y su entrenamiento para obtener ciertas habilidades, luego de evolucionar algunas habilidades este entrenamiento se descartó porque podía copiarlas habilidades al instante, hubo algunas cosas extrañas que el autor decidió incluir de imprevisto, se olvidó de algunos personajes, la personalidad del protagonista se volvió algo desagradable, lo había comprado con los protagonistas presentes en fanfiction sobre chat grupales, porque estos al obtener algún tipo de poder sobre otros personajes de anime se vuelven arrogantes, no es que eso impidiera que continuar leyendo, pero luego de llegar Jujutsu Kaisen el protagonista empezó a guiar sus acciones solo por su estado de ánimo, me pareció extraño de repente no le interesará la gente del orfanato que supuestamente fue buena con el o la vida de las demás personas de ese mundo, todo estuvo justificado por si era divertido realizar su experimento. Cuando los personajes empiezan a realizar sus acciones en consideración a su diversión es cuando creo que una historia no es para mí gusto, espero que otros la disfruten porque hay mucho contenido interesante.
Your writing may not be accepted by everyone, but that doesn't mean your work is wrong. Don't stop moving forward.
the story is pretty good one of the better ones of this fandom the only problem would be the first few chapters being a little annoying but it does get better quickly
I don't know what many other reviewers think. In my opinion, the story is really good.
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The story and characters had potential but it’s all lame in the end. And the mc is a freaking beta! Has hot servants in a world where strength is everything and is like “what happens will happen” and then is totally surprised when his servants love him. Like how stupid can an mc be. No backbone. Just like the I don’t kill 10.000 people for their souls, but then kills 30.000 Majins. Nobody told him to just kill a random city, but there are enough armies and enemies. And even if he killed a random town or city. HE IS A DAEMON that’s what they do… but that’s only my opinion. The story had potential, just wasn’t used
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Great story. It’s long but a worthwhile read, I love how consistent you are with the LN’s lore. I wish you picked up the speed of the story a little but that’s just me.
Yes, the story closely follows canon at the start and has a lot of info dumps, but it gets really good after getting past those earlier chapters - its a hidden gem in my opinion. The Info dumps just mean author knows his tensura lore and he really does, which is all the more important for a fic in such a complex universe like tensura. I really enjoy the fic and encourage you to give it a try aswell, past the earlier chapters. PS: i hope we get some quicker chappies for thid review @author <3
Pretty goated story if you give it a chance. The beginning is a bit rough cuz the author is getting their footing and following the original pretty closely, but you can tell once they get comfortable with their groove. Once they take the story into their own hands, the story becomes really enjoyable. They are also one of the most knowledgeable authors when it comes to tensura. My man can explain everything about the world in-depth.
1000/10 Increíble historia. Muy recomendada para que la lean, me encantó. Espero el siguiente capítulo. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yo, dude, lemme tell ya straight—you're just runnin' the same ol' script as the anime plotlines, no twists, no flair. What's the deal with this fanfic, huh? Where's the spice? You gotta throw in some curveballs, make it pop, or else you're just servin' up reheated ramen. Trust me, ain't nobody stickin' around for leftovers when they can get fresh, y'know? Shits lame… —why in the ever-loving hell is your MC goin' 'round flappin' his gums about being from another world? I mean, come on, even in Tensura that was dumb as all get out. I don't care if it's common knowledge or some sci-fi trope—rule numero uno of reincarnating or transmigrating: keep your damn mouth shut! Then he does it in another world. You're just beggin' for trouble, and the sad part is, the author's just as clueless as the MC, so it all slides by without a hitch. Real shame, too, 'cause this had the bones of somethin' great. Instead, we get a trainwreck with a half-baked plot, forced humor (seriously, having him stayin' a woman?), and an MC that’s about as sharp as a beach ball. Makes me wanna coin a new phrase: everyone's got a story in 'em, but that don't mean they should write it.
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It's not the best. But it is the first Slime fan fiction that interested me. MC is alright, that's all I can say.
★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★....................Keep★★★★★★★★★ cooking bro★★★★★★★★★ 😉..........................★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
Utter garbage. Instead of a Fanfic might as well call it a Tensura side story or spin off with a disappointing protagonist with op ability that he can't properly use. Story follows the canon with miniscule change and instead of anything interesting new, you would only get what rimuru did on the canon in a summary. mc is basically a useless side character. so much potential but poor execution. you can barely feel any emotion from the writing. things feel dull like a history book. honestly, most chinese fics are better than this and if you have read chinese fics you will know how bad they are. anyway, I dropped it at chapter 18. idk if author improves
Lixo qual é a graça de dois reincarnado pó 😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨
So many high ratings when the story is not that good, i wonder if the low ratings are erased. Why the hate? at the start it's good but as the story goes it became boring and the plot is very forced. So forced that it force me to drop this tr*sh. There's no difference from original, why read this when you can read the original?
I'll give a brief and truthful description so you won't have to read this garbage, 'A man transmigrates into the world of tensura then co*k rides rimuru.' Honestly that's it.