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The quality of the translation in this narrative is commendable, clearly the result of careful and skilled human effort rather than machine translation. Despite the presence of minor errors, they are infrequent and do not detract from the overall quality of the text. The translator has done an excellent job, ensuring the language remains clear and engaging, allowing readers to immerse themselves fully in the story. The pacing of the story might be considered slow by some, but this deliberate tempo is one of its greatest strengths. It allows for a deep and rewarding exploration of character development, particularly that of the main character and his students. Iconic characters from the anime make appearances, with some becoming direct disciples of the protagonist. Watching these familiar faces grow and achieve their goals provides a satisfying experience for readers who are patient enough to follow their journeys. The incorporation of a System into the narrative is handled with finesse. Unlike many stories where such mechanisms can become overbearing and disrupt the flow, this fanfic strikes a perfect balance. The System is used judiciously, enhancing the story without overwhelming it. It rewards the main character's hard work without constantly bombarding the reader with stats and updates, maintaining a smooth and immersive reading experience. Interactions between the main character and his students are particularly compelling. While the protagonist initially engages in teaching for the System's rewards, his efforts genuinely improve his students' lives. This dynamic underscores the story's central theme: the value of hard work and the profound impact of dedicated teaching. The protagonist's evolution from a somewhat self-serving individual to a truly influential mentor highlights the transformative power of perseverance and guidance.
10/10 for a translated work. You can almost forget it was originally written in Chinese.
The story is well paced but sometimes gets a bit repetitive. However despite some repetitiveness, the story is is quite enjoyable and shows promise in the upcoming chapter. Hope the auther keeps the consistency
Currently of writing of this review, I've personally read up to chapter 80 and all I got to say is that its decent. It's good however in the later chapters around 50+ you'll feel like its pretty bland and repentant. It's also kind of slow but it is a MTL so beware, this one is slow paced. It is good light reading if you're just looking for something to past the time, then I would recommend this one to read. The translation isn't too bad a few minor mistakes but overall, still good.
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I just wanted to update my review, and say that this translator, is better than the other one, and they erase a lot of the repetition that the author in the original uses. This is truly a exemplary example of how to translate into English. Also the chapters are easy to read, much more clean.
In my opinion this is one of the best Naruto fanfics. The MC is a teacher at the ninja academy and gets stronger through the system through effective teaching as well as by accepting disciples and teaching them. The MC does not get overpowered quickly but slowly develops. Importance is given to the side characters and their thoughts and developments is nicely shown. Even though MC seems like he teaches for system rewards but he does genuinely care for his students going out of his by teaching according to the students levels and also keeping their psychology in mind. MC is truly a great teacher and so far I have not seen any signs of romance. For these reasons i truly recommend this novel for those who want a story with proper character development with a smart MC who is strong and kind.
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Okay, so writing quality is decent and outstanding if one considered this is a translation, CHapter schedule is 1 ch per day which is decent, Story Developement seems a bit slow pace, but overall nice, characters are portrayed close to original, world building is a bit sub par, but other aspects of this novel cover that, overall it barely qualifies as 5 star for me and I honestly enjoyed this fic, waiting for more
Here is mtl name: Ninja School Teacher, I Can Become Stronger By Teaching....,............................................,...,..,..,.,.,..,.,.,..,,.,..,.,
Great story, I just have trouble imagining the protagonist... I don't have any references, the only thing I know is that he has blonde hair!
It's a great book..really enjoyed it.....though ended up jumping to MTL...😅😅😅😅
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I read all 50 chapters in one sitting, it was good. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is a re-write/Translation. The other translator stopped uploading 2 to 3 months ago on chapter 108. I’m happy someone else is picking it up!
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its good......................................................................................................................................................
I think I've read this somewhere before but the translator stopped uploading for a long while
It's Good..............................................................................................................................................
The quality of the translation in this narrative is commendable, clearly the result of careful and skilled human effort rather than machine translation. Despite the presence of minor errors, they are infrequent and do not detract from the overall quality of the text. The translator has done an excellent job, ensuring the language remains clear and engaging, allowing readers to immerse themselves fully in the story. The pacing of the story might be considered slow by some, but this deliberate tempo is one of its greatest strengths. It allows for a deep and rewarding exploration of character development, particularly that of the main character and his students. Iconic characters from the anime make appearances, with some becoming direct disciples of the protagonist. Watching these familiar faces grow and achieve their goals provides a satisfying experience for readers who are patient enough to follow their journeys. The incorporation of a System into the narrative is handled with finesse. Unlike many stories where such mechanisms can become overbearing and disrupt the flow, this fanfic strikes a perfect balance. The System is used judiciously, enhancing the story without overwhelming it. It rewards the main character's hard work without constantly bombarding the reader with stats and updates, maintaining a smooth and immersive reading experience. Interactions between the main character and his students are particularly compelling. While the protagonist initially engages in teaching for the System's rewards, his efforts genuinely improve his students' lives. This dynamic underscores the story's central theme: the value of hard work and the profound impact of dedicated teaching. The protagonist's evolution from a somewhat self-serving individual to a truly influential mentor highlights the transformative power of perseverance and guidance.
10/10 for a translated work. You can almost forget it was originally written in Chinese.
The story is well paced but sometimes gets a bit repetitive. However despite some repetitiveness, the story is is quite enjoyable and shows promise in the upcoming chapter. Hope the auther keeps the consistency
Currently of writing of this review, I've personally read up to chapter 80 and all I got to say is that its decent. It's good however in the later chapters around 50+ you'll feel like its pretty bland and repentant. It's also kind of slow but it is a MTL so beware, this one is slow paced. It is good light reading if you're just looking for something to past the time, then I would recommend this one to read. The translation isn't too bad a few minor mistakes but overall, still good.
More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|More chapters please|
I just wanted to update my review, and say that this translator, is better than the other one, and they erase a lot of the repetition that the author in the original uses. This is truly a exemplary example of how to translate into English. Also the chapters are easy to read, much more clean.
In my opinion this is one of the best Naruto fanfics. The MC is a teacher at the ninja academy and gets stronger through the system through effective teaching as well as by accepting disciples and teaching them. The MC does not get overpowered quickly but slowly develops. Importance is given to the side characters and their thoughts and developments is nicely shown. Even though MC seems like he teaches for system rewards but he does genuinely care for his students going out of his by teaching according to the students levels and also keeping their psychology in mind. MC is truly a great teacher and so far I have not seen any signs of romance. For these reasons i truly recommend this novel for those who want a story with proper character development with a smart MC who is strong and kind.
Muito cativante sua novel ................................................................................................................................. ..
Okay, so writing quality is decent and outstanding if one considered this is a translation, CHapter schedule is 1 ch per day which is decent, Story Developement seems a bit slow pace, but overall nice, characters are portrayed close to original, world building is a bit sub par, but other aspects of this novel cover that, overall it barely qualifies as 5 star for me and I honestly enjoyed this fic, waiting for more
Here is mtl name: Ninja School Teacher, I Can Become Stronger By Teaching....,............................................,...,..,..,.,.,..,.,.,..,,.,..,.,
Great story, I just have trouble imagining the protagonist... I don't have any references, the only thing I know is that he has blonde hair!
It's a great book..really enjoyed it.....though ended up jumping to MTL...😅😅😅😅
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I read all 50 chapters in one sitting, it was good. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is a re-write/Translation. The other translator stopped uploading 2 to 3 months ago on chapter 108. I’m happy someone else is picking it up!
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I think I've read this somewhere before but the translator stopped uploading for a long while
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