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after 295 chapters this story has made 0 progress so that's 1 star on the story development bar. This story is good in every other category except the main freaking one. This story has no goal and no plot. This is litteraly just "I'm a teacher in Naruto". That is litteraly it. Nothing else.Fight? Nope. War? Nope. Super evil plan? Nope.Any plan at all? Nope.Read this if you wanna see someone teach ur favorite characters.(-_-).This story needs a 0 star in development unfortunately the lowest is 1.I will now stop reading this story after 295 chapters guess what hes doing? Going to teach students at the Konoha academy and guess how long he's been doing this? Since chapter 1. This story has nothing going for it and I mean that in the literal of literalist senses you can imagine.
Literally the best naruto fanfiction I've ever read. The beginning there's a bit of repeating but after tha the story sky rockets. My favorite part is the justice done for Might Duy. Really give it a fair chance and i promise you wont be disappointed.
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I genuinely really like this novel. Kudos to the og author and to the translator for doing an amazing work!
Ok wow, this is actually pretty good. Very slow-paced, but to be fair the story isn't all about the MC becoming strong, rather it's also about his bonds with his students and how everyone changes compared to their canon selves. The translation quality also isn't bad, and it helps that the MC isn't one of those toxic, arrogant types that's normally seen in Chinese novels. One thing that also stands out is that even side characters actually have chances to shine in the novel, since the author doesn't seem to neglect them. Time will tell if this continues though since, again, the story is very slow-paced.
after 295 chapters this story has made 0 progress so that's 1 star on the story development bar.This story is good in every other category except the main freaking one.This story has no goal and no plot.This is litteraly just "I'm a teacher in Naruto".That is litteraly it.Nothing else.Fight? Nope.War?Nope.Super evil plan? Nope.Any plan at all?Nope.Read this if you wanna see someone teach ur favorite characters.(-_-).This story needs a 0 star in development unfortunately the lowest is 1.I will now stop reading this story after 295 chapters guess what hes doing?Going to teach students at the Konoha academy and guess how long he's been doing this? Since chapter 1. This story has nothing going for it and I mean that in the literal of literalist senses you can imagine.
Great work, having a blast reading this, hopefully this will go far in the future, congratulations, probably one of The must fun to read in this place
best Naruto fanfic I have, The Mc is calculative and sincere at the same time and other other character resemble their actual personality in the series
It is too repetitive the entire story up to chapter228 is recycled. The premise could have been much more but it focus all about training no real conflict and recycles class competition for like the first 100+ chapter.
Story development absolute zero.If I could label it as less than 1 star I would.This is a fun read no doubt but progression wise?Trash.He does get stronger yes that is a fact but he does not use his strength in anyway shape or form.132 tught now I think or 136 in chapters and so far the third shinobi war has started and he's focused on teaching students rather than being out there fighting.I understand the need for power but at the end of the day he's had 0 fights and has 0 experience so it's all just useless.You can master anything you want but if you don't know how to properly apply it, I mean what's the point.Ill keep reading but for now this story is about a shinobi teaching kids and getting powers from it but not needing to use them.This so far has gone absolutely no where.You have the power why u still teaching.Ill read this completely today and if you still see this rating then unfortunately that means that this is a fruitless story about a strong shinobi who likes to teach and never stops teaching.
A great fanfic. Only problem I feel is that it is very difficult to wait for new chapters. PLease update faster.
-100 Karma for not mentioning this is not your original work, original author name, and not stated as translation.....................................
I'm currently at chapter 136, and I have failed to notice any effect of [Return Favor in Apprenticeship] reflect on the panel. [Return Favor in Apprenticeship] : When Disciple gains x chakra, Master gains (Trust_Level*x) chakra. Location : Chapter 3 No other complaints
揭示劇透
Really good Naruto Fan Fic, characters are well fleshed out, and I like the dynamic between mc and minato. One gripe is that sometimes it can be really slow, I just wish the story had progressed faster. it's been only still less than a year in the story at 250 chapters.
Novela muy entretenida, la cual no recae en la exageracion del poder y del desarrollo de personajes, sino con un ritmo de forma realista, muy recomendado y esperando los siguientes capítulos.
揭示劇透
I really like this mc, not where mc who suddenly becomes op who can defeat their opponent in one moves, the story also describe how his strength growth through the fights and this is one of the most normal growth mc compared to the other ff which basically the system rewards give something that can make him abnormally op. The interaction between the students is really cute when he starting to become like brother even though he's their sensei. I hope to see more of this as I can't read the mtl version 😔
I’ve seen this fic translated two times before this version, and neither of them held a candle to this one. It has a surprisingly thought out plot with actual development: something most CN fics severely lack. This might just be in my top five CN translations of all time, not that there was much competition to begin with.
This is a really really great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 Definitely one of my favourite Naruto fanfiction.. It have a very great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too.. I love how you not make MC/Mutsuki an OP from the start author sama.. And make him strong by reward from teaching and have disciple is interesting and very good, he only get 1 reward each day from each disciple by teaching or give something is very good idea, it make him strong day by day not just in short time.. I like his interaction with others (student, disciple, friends.. It so funny 😂) I love he got teaching and cooking skill, it's very useful skill 😍 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
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Great start, becomes mediocre as the story progresses. It has some really nice moments at the beginning, but the later chapters are extremely repetitive, training diary.
Gotta say, this is currently my favorite novel to read! It has great fights, and the story is pretty good. It's kind of a slow burner in the mid-beginning, but I never found it hard to read. The only thing is that I find the world building to be a bit lacking, but that's to be expected since it's based on an already existing world. It's still good when it comes to refreshing the reader's mind about the world of Naruto though! Overall, I would recommend it!
Very unique for a Naruto fanfic, but it’s quickly becoming my second favorite after Wind Calamity. Love how it’s going so far, especially the most recent chapters. Very well written in terms of the character motivations and interactions, and the progression of strength for the MC is fast while not making him absurdly overpowered. Thank you for the great fic!
I'm Actually surprised it's a good book. Usually I don't read translations because they are mostly(99% times) Sh it. But it's good enough so you can try it.
Just amazing, been look for a new fanfic to read as I waited for the others to update. Didn't expect to find this gem.
Merece mais do que tem, ótimo desenvolvimento de personagens, apenas tem um lento progresso de história, mais focado e ficar forte...........
loving this book. I won't keep following it on webnovel since I'm 50 chapters ahead on your patreon. Best isekai I've found/read in a long while. I do wish the chapters were longer, but maybe they are a respectable length, and I'm just that impatient...
the translation quality is so good it makes you forget the original is a Chinese novel however the novel has some issues SLICE OF LIFE tag should be here i read 75 and it's just, slice of life not a bit of action and i don't think there would be any major focus on action either. the story development is EXCRUCIATINGLY SLOW.
this story isn't going anywhere, it's just repeating all over again and again
I won't waste my time and your time in writing a recommendation, just know that it's worth it. Go ahead it's good 👍. Anything I'm writing now is just for word count.
Development is nonexistent. 300 chapters of No enemy No danger No pressure MC just smiling and teaching while getting supper OP and no one has any clue it is happening. In other stories when there is a year or more of time skip, if anyone is wondering what might be happening in the time skip itself that makes the characters stronger. Read this and you will get an idea. There is a reason for time skips to exist. And that reason is this novel itself. Still, while there is hardly any real action the interactions of the disciples is interesting and fun, and sometimes the situations are so emotional they can even make you cry. I only hope the MC won't be hiding until Madara is reborn to finally do something with all his power.
after 295 chapters this story has made 0 progress so that's 1 star on the story development bar. This story is good in every other category except the main freaking one. This story has no goal and no plot. This is litteraly just "I'm a teacher in Naruto". That is litteraly it. Nothing else.Fight? Nope. War? Nope. Super evil plan? Nope.Any plan at all? Nope.Read this if you wanna see someone teach ur favorite characters.(-_-).This story needs a 0 star in development unfortunately the lowest is 1.I will now stop reading this story after 295 chapters guess what hes doing? Going to teach students at the Konoha academy and guess how long he's been doing this? Since chapter 1. This story has nothing going for it and I mean that in the literal of literalist senses you can imagine.
Literally the best naruto fanfiction I've ever read. The beginning there's a bit of repeating but after tha the story sky rockets. My favorite part is the justice done for Might Duy. Really give it a fair chance and i promise you wont be disappointed.
揭示劇透 I genuinely really like this novel. Kudos to the og author and to the translator for doing an amazing work!
Ok wow, this is actually pretty good. Very slow-paced, but to be fair the story isn't all about the MC becoming strong, rather it's also about his bonds with his students and how everyone changes compared to their canon selves. The translation quality also isn't bad, and it helps that the MC isn't one of those toxic, arrogant types that's normally seen in Chinese novels. One thing that also stands out is that even side characters actually have chances to shine in the novel, since the author doesn't seem to neglect them. Time will tell if this continues though since, again, the story is very slow-paced.
after 295 chapters this story has made 0 progress so that's 1 star on the story development bar.This story is good in every other category except the main freaking one.This story has no goal and no plot.This is litteraly just "I'm a teacher in Naruto".That is litteraly it.Nothing else.Fight? Nope.War?Nope.Super evil plan? Nope.Any plan at all?Nope.Read this if you wanna see someone teach ur favorite characters.(-_-).This story needs a 0 star in development unfortunately the lowest is 1.I will now stop reading this story after 295 chapters guess what hes doing?Going to teach students at the Konoha academy and guess how long he's been doing this? Since chapter 1. This story has nothing going for it and I mean that in the literal of literalist senses you can imagine.
Great work, having a blast reading this, hopefully this will go far in the future, congratulations, probably one of The must fun to read in this place
best Naruto fanfic I have, The Mc is calculative and sincere at the same time and other other character resemble their actual personality in the series
It is too repetitive the entire story up to chapter228 is recycled. The premise could have been much more but it focus all about training no real conflict and recycles class competition for like the first 100+ chapter.
Story development absolute zero.If I could label it as less than 1 star I would.This is a fun read no doubt but progression wise?Trash.He does get stronger yes that is a fact but he does not use his strength in anyway shape or form.132 tught now I think or 136 in chapters and so far the third shinobi war has started and he's focused on teaching students rather than being out there fighting.I understand the need for power but at the end of the day he's had 0 fights and has 0 experience so it's all just useless.You can master anything you want but if you don't know how to properly apply it, I mean what's the point.Ill keep reading but for now this story is about a shinobi teaching kids and getting powers from it but not needing to use them.This so far has gone absolutely no where.You have the power why u still teaching.Ill read this completely today and if you still see this rating then unfortunately that means that this is a fruitless story about a strong shinobi who likes to teach and never stops teaching.
A great fanfic. Only problem I feel is that it is very difficult to wait for new chapters. PLease update faster.
-100 Karma for not mentioning this is not your original work, original author name, and not stated as translation.....................................
I'm currently at chapter 136, and I have failed to notice any effect of [Return Favor in Apprenticeship] reflect on the panel. [Return Favor in Apprenticeship] : When Disciple gains x chakra, Master gains (Trust_Level*x) chakra. Location : Chapter 3 No other complaints
揭示劇透 Really good Naruto Fan Fic, characters are well fleshed out, and I like the dynamic between mc and minato. One gripe is that sometimes it can be really slow, I just wish the story had progressed faster. it's been only still less than a year in the story at 250 chapters.
Novela muy entretenida, la cual no recae en la exageracion del poder y del desarrollo de personajes, sino con un ritmo de forma realista, muy recomendado y esperando los siguientes capítulos.
揭示劇透 I really like this mc, not where mc who suddenly becomes op who can defeat their opponent in one moves, the story also describe how his strength growth through the fights and this is one of the most normal growth mc compared to the other ff which basically the system rewards give something that can make him abnormally op. The interaction between the students is really cute when he starting to become like brother even though he's their sensei. I hope to see more of this as I can't read the mtl version 😔
I’ve seen this fic translated two times before this version, and neither of them held a candle to this one. It has a surprisingly thought out plot with actual development: something most CN fics severely lack. This might just be in my top five CN translations of all time, not that there was much competition to begin with.
This is a really really great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 Definitely one of my favourite Naruto fanfiction.. It have a very great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too.. I love how you not make MC/Mutsuki an OP from the start author sama.. And make him strong by reward from teaching and have disciple is interesting and very good, he only get 1 reward each day from each disciple by teaching or give something is very good idea, it make him strong day by day not just in short time.. I like his interaction with others (student, disciple, friends.. It so funny 😂) I love he got teaching and cooking skill, it's very useful skill 😍 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
揭示劇透 Great start, becomes mediocre as the story progresses. It has some really nice moments at the beginning, but the later chapters are extremely repetitive, training diary.
Gotta say, this is currently my favorite novel to read! It has great fights, and the story is pretty good. It's kind of a slow burner in the mid-beginning, but I never found it hard to read. The only thing is that I find the world building to be a bit lacking, but that's to be expected since it's based on an already existing world. It's still good when it comes to refreshing the reader's mind about the world of Naruto though! Overall, I would recommend it!
Very unique for a Naruto fanfic, but it’s quickly becoming my second favorite after Wind Calamity. Love how it’s going so far, especially the most recent chapters. Very well written in terms of the character motivations and interactions, and the progression of strength for the MC is fast while not making him absurdly overpowered. Thank you for the great fic!
I'm Actually surprised it's a good book. Usually I don't read translations because they are mostly(99% times) Sh it. But it's good enough so you can try it.
Just amazing, been look for a new fanfic to read as I waited for the others to update. Didn't expect to find this gem.
Merece mais do que tem, ótimo desenvolvimento de personagens, apenas tem um lento progresso de história, mais focado e ficar forte...........
loving this book. I won't keep following it on webnovel since I'm 50 chapters ahead on your patreon. Best isekai I've found/read in a long while. I do wish the chapters were longer, but maybe they are a respectable length, and I'm just that impatient...
the translation quality is so good it makes you forget the original is a Chinese novel however the novel has some issues SLICE OF LIFE tag should be here i read 75 and it's just, slice of life not a bit of action and i don't think there would be any major focus on action either. the story development is EXCRUCIATINGLY SLOW.
this story isn't going anywhere, it's just repeating all over again and again
I won't waste my time and your time in writing a recommendation, just know that it's worth it. Go ahead it's good 👍. Anything I'm writing now is just for word count.
Development is nonexistent. 300 chapters of No enemy No danger No pressure MC just smiling and teaching while getting supper OP and no one has any clue it is happening. In other stories when there is a year or more of time skip, if anyone is wondering what might be happening in the time skip itself that makes the characters stronger. Read this and you will get an idea. There is a reason for time skips to exist. And that reason is this novel itself. Still, while there is hardly any real action the interactions of the disciples is interesting and fun, and sometimes the situations are so emotional they can even make you cry. I only hope the MC won't be hiding until Madara is reborn to finally do something with all his power.