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Author will you be posting chapters again ? if so how many have you thought 💭🤔
Add all female relatives to the harem like his mother and if he has children in the future he should only have daughters !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue I love the novel and I wanna see what happens next with Song-yi and Jin-ah
THIS IS PEAK FICTION!! The r@** part is written very well that I had goosepbumps[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I m from Russia, hi, milklover Your fanfic the best, bro. More sadistic scenes, more... And no thots and no Yuri in bed-scenes, please)
[img=update][img=update] No chapter today too[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Oh Author, I need more. This is soo good[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Are you posting copy from S-hub? or are you the same person?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hi, Author. Giving 5 stars just demanding one thing - Plz kill that Rose with as much torture as MC can 👿👿👿 And plz upload a lot [img=update]
Dear Sir The story so far is going awesome but as you name suggests you love milk and so do I and as a fellow lover I have noticed no indication of the MC getting some milk in the future I hope you have some plans for that if not then consider it please. I am sure it will be greatly appreciated. A fellow milk lover
[img=update][img=update]Отличный фанфикшен. Ваша книга и System COTE книга - единственное, благодаря чему я жив. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Now what should I say... My previous msg got deleted so here.............................................................................................................................................................................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Came from Scriblehub. Man, why is here so many chapters? Why arn't you posting there? Why do I have to write a lot before the 'post' option is visible?
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Umm pls tell....u removed yaoi..good..but wut about ntr....pls tell there is no ntr as well 🙂
man you have to go save lee joohee besides being super beautiful she is a healer if she loses her traumas and focuses on using her skills she can heal and give buffs it will make the protagonist and the future harem stronger besides she had a crush for jin woo if you save her and make her your girl jin woo will be even more jealous if you get her and his sister it will be 2 more factors for him to stay with you i.e. it will be better for you to save lee joohee
HAREM: Cha Hae-In Lee Ju-Hee Sung Jin-Ah Querehsha Kanae Tawata Akari Shimizu Yoo Soohyun Yoo Jinhee Park Heejin Esil Radiru Gina Laura Mari Ishida....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
this would be great read, if he is not evil a more hardcore than almightyskydxddy version. I don't know why he act like that as his past life was not enough reason to treat women and others like a trash toy, maybe he was born insane psychopath with sadistic nature that enjoys treating others like his personal toy and watch their suffering, or maybe an evil for the sake of being evil, who knows. I won't even be surprised if he is like that till the end and r*pe each character of this story, a being who doesn't have a character development which is just heartless inhuman, that is tiring to read a person with same persona till the end.
so he will go after sun jin woo's sister and make her his girl then he will go after the hunter gina and do the same to her then he will go to other girls that appeared in the manga and finally cha hae stealing her from jin woo to being his girl will he go after the forgotten demon girl she is very beautiful and shy it will also be a harem with all the beautiful girls in the manhwa I bet jin woo will be super jealous
Oh, yeah. Forgot to leave review... It's good. I mean, my tastes become too twisted because of a webnovel... So, yeah. Better just read about villains with screwe loses... At least they are not simping and trying to help everyone around them...Look,you imbecile, no one asked for you help. Can you like mind you own business, smartass? Oh, right. You don't have "you business" ,because you don't want anything. and you character is null...How sad. ...What was I talking about?
Trate de que me gustara pero tu sentido del humor no me llego literal tratar de hacer gracioso cualquier meme de anime no lo hace gracioso claro aparte de eso sus comentarios que quitan lo inmersivo a él fic
More!! Please I Need 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😅 make More Chapters (ALL That Smileys Because Need 140 )
good language, easy to understand, but I don't like MC's evil personality, thank you for writing this novel.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
It's morally disgusting[img=faceslap]! And that's why I like it![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This Chaotic style of writing is Damn![img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Read the Synopsis before reading:) Remember do not compare reality to fiction. If you're as trashy as me then enjoy the work. If you're a snowflake then kindly leave.
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Author will you be posting chapters again ? if so how many have you thought 💭🤔
Add all female relatives to the harem like his mother and if he has children in the future he should only have daughters !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue I love the novel and I wanna see what happens next with Song-yi and Jin-ah
THIS IS PEAK FICTION!! The r@** part is written very well that I had goosepbumps[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I m from Russia, hi, milklover Your fanfic the best, bro. More sadistic scenes, more... And no thots and no Yuri in bed-scenes, please)
[img=update][img=update] No chapter today too[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Oh Author, I need more. This is soo good[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Are you posting copy from S-hub? or are you the same person?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hi, Author. Giving 5 stars just demanding one thing - Plz kill that Rose with as much torture as MC can 👿👿👿 And plz upload a lot [img=update]
Dear Sir The story so far is going awesome but as you name suggests you love milk and so do I and as a fellow lover I have noticed no indication of the MC getting some milk in the future I hope you have some plans for that if not then consider it please. I am sure it will be greatly appreciated. A fellow milk lover
[img=update][img=update]Отличный фанфикшен. Ваша книга и System COTE книга - единственное, благодаря чему я жив. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Now what should I say... My previous msg got deleted so here.............................................................................................................................................................................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Came from Scriblehub. Man, why is here so many chapters? Why arn't you posting there? Why do I have to write a lot before the 'post' option is visible?
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Umm pls tell....u removed yaoi..good..but wut about ntr....pls tell there is no ntr as well 🙂
man you have to go save lee joohee besides being super beautiful she is a healer if she loses her traumas and focuses on using her skills she can heal and give buffs it will make the protagonist and the future harem stronger besides she had a crush for jin woo if you save her and make her your girl jin woo will be even more jealous if you get her and his sister it will be 2 more factors for him to stay with you i.e. it will be better for you to save lee joohee
HAREM: Cha Hae-In Lee Ju-Hee Sung Jin-Ah Querehsha Kanae Tawata Akari Shimizu Yoo Soohyun Yoo Jinhee Park Heejin Esil Radiru Gina Laura Mari Ishida....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
this would be great read, if he is not evil a more hardcore than almightyskydxddy version. I don't know why he act like that as his past life was not enough reason to treat women and others like a trash toy, maybe he was born insane psychopath with sadistic nature that enjoys treating others like his personal toy and watch their suffering, or maybe an evil for the sake of being evil, who knows. I won't even be surprised if he is like that till the end and r*pe each character of this story, a being who doesn't have a character development which is just heartless inhuman, that is tiring to read a person with same persona till the end.
so he will go after sun jin woo's sister and make her his girl then he will go after the hunter gina and do the same to her then he will go to other girls that appeared in the manga and finally cha hae stealing her from jin woo to being his girl will he go after the forgotten demon girl she is very beautiful and shy it will also be a harem with all the beautiful girls in the manhwa I bet jin woo will be super jealous
Oh, yeah. Forgot to leave review... It's good. I mean, my tastes become too twisted because of a webnovel... So, yeah. Better just read about villains with screwe loses... At least they are not simping and trying to help everyone around them...Look,you imbecile, no one asked for you help. Can you like mind you own business, smartass? Oh, right. You don't have "you business" ,because you don't want anything. and you character is null...How sad. ...What was I talking about?
Trate de que me gustara pero tu sentido del humor no me llego literal tratar de hacer gracioso cualquier meme de anime no lo hace gracioso claro aparte de eso sus comentarios que quitan lo inmersivo a él fic
More!! Please I Need 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😅 make More Chapters (ALL That Smileys Because Need 140 )
good language, easy to understand, but I don't like MC's evil personality, thank you for writing this novel.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
It's morally disgusting[img=faceslap]! And that's why I like it![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This Chaotic style of writing is Damn![img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Read the Synopsis before reading:) Remember do not compare reality to fiction. If you're as trashy as me then enjoy the work. If you're a snowflake then kindly leave.