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Embark on an epic journey with Luke Ashburn as he enters the Main God Space, a convergence of worlds teeming with unique challenges. Follow Luke's odyssey through diverse realms, witnessing his quest for strength and self-discovery as he travels from one world to another, completing missions that propel him towards unparalleled power.
World:
1. The Asterisk War (From Chapter 1-53)
2. Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? (Danmachi) (From Chapter 53 - XXX)
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寫檢討If we talk about writing quality, it's quite good if we talk WN standard. But if we talk about the plot ,we're thrust into the story with no explanation of the mc or the so-called main hod space . There's too many things we don't know about the mc, which is a major problem. There's not much depth to character interaction. I hope to know much more about the mc and his surrounding people in the upcoming chapter . Update stability is good for now but not sure about the future.
its pretty hard to understand the begning of the story it just confusing asf... and the author goes with the whole chineseish spin on his writing and if u expect a thrilling spin of the cannon stories .. well ur wrong its all oc he just borrows the names of the places and makes up his own story its good but not what i was after i came for a fanfic not some original novel with some names and characters that are the same... and back to the chinese thingy.. he joins a specific group in asterisk war world where they all talk like chinese cultivators so if its not to ur liking you should stay away it was truly hard for me to read thru all this imo i hate chinese styled writing.... it just sounds stupid and their saying just makes me want to die ... anyways i dident bother to read more then 30 chapters and i had to really force myself to do it .. the dialouge was really har with the wuxia style xD anyways its not all bad , the author writes really really well its not just my cup of tea !
Pretty decent animeverse fic. If the details regarding the main god space and why the MC can traverse was meshed out from the beginning then the World Background would be more solid but its still good. The 'golden finger' gives me Terror Infinity vibes. Overall its a nice fic, would definitely recommend.
The Mc is Very weak despite having trained before and all. Really weak pathetic, what a way to ruin the story 😡💢. Slow growth so nothing special This is my review for Danmachi chapters.
Люблю истории в которых главный герой путешествует в разные миры. Надеюсь в будущем главный герой попадëт в мир Блич, так как он мечник. Для Мечников мир Блич это рай. Плюс сила манипулировать и убивать души очень сильна в любом мире. Спасибо автору за интересную историю и частые обновления. ❤
The fanfic is well written, I liked it. Thanks to the author, I even remembered War Asterick and refreshed my memory, but special thanks for the good writing of the work, especially in the part about Danmachi. It's not often you come across a good fanfic about Danmachi.
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Explanation - is all that fanfic have. Boredom - is all i feel. Narrative - is what author doesn't know. Mtl it is. . .
To be honest, it's kind of ambivalent, on the one hand it's not bad, on the other hand it's not clear. I mean the interaction of Luke with the rest, there are whole chapters in which Luke just sighs and that's it. the feeling that he is mute, and can not talk, I would like to interact with other characters. Another point is that a lot of “water”, that is, a lot of unnecessary words, what the author wrote in previous chapters, he repeats the same in subsequent chapters, I do not mind the explanation, but he has it too detailed and unnecessary, the plot is interesting, romance is not yet clear, so I'm waiting for better writing, unless of course the author does not abandon it.
Writing quality is decent and the plot seems not bad but I regret Asterix arc is a bit short and lack backstory(10 years is mentoned for ser veresta it seems strange to me the big sister didn't seem so much older than ayato but I can be wrong and I don't remember an overwelming 'immortal' like his master) The Danmachi arc is slow paced but MC backstory is still blank. It's nethertheless a pleasant read.
揭示劇透One of the most enjoyable DanmachiXAsterisk crossover mercenary isekai fanfic I've come across in a while. The fanfic is by no means 'unique' nor 'the best', since it has a pretty much cliche and straightforward plot of any Mary Sue type of MC isekai-ed to animeverse. However, the execution of the storyline and fighting scenes are definitely outstanding and pleasantly enjoyable to read. With excellent writing, minimal error, and smooth grammar, it is no wonder I have a great time reading this work to the point I can't stop reading it. On another note, the entire experience is extremely similar to another fanfic I've read: Illimitable until death. In plot, MC, and vibe. I almost imagined the MC to be the same person if not because the stark difference in skillset. 😂 Overall, if you're looking for an enjoyable Danmachi/Asterisk fanfic, you won't regret reading this work.
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