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so it was a Chinese translation so lower your expectation. Then you read it and it missing spaces to separate the words and some of the word are broken when they shouldn't
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As a Author I think you should know that is my responsibility to tell this Fanfic is Chinese translation of 120+useless chapter will with stupidity so from or after 20th chapter will be written by me and all fanfic will End at 90chap or 100 at max .
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so it was a Chinese translation so lower your expectation. Then you read it and it missing spaces to separate the words and some of the word are broken when they shouldn't
As a Author I think you should know that is my responsibility to tell this Fanfic is Chinese translation of 120+useless chapter will with stupidity so from or after 20th chapter will be written by me and all fanfic will End at 90chap or 100 at max .