7評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Great History.............................................................................................................................................
The protagonist is simple but intelligent, the story is also quite unique. I just hope you don't drop it and disappear midway in the story,
I mean, its creative. Let's just hope you build up the verse well since well most of the characters seems to have a different backstory (based on how much I've seen). Just improve the writing quality and that's it, I guess.
I like what's going on in the story, the protagonist is simple but intelligent, I identify with him.
5 stars for winc est! But please tell there will be no yuri. I hate that stuff
Author, I think you should edit the summary and eliminate or black out words like r*pe s*x inc*st ect, lately many novels are being deleted in webnovel and I think it is because of these words or similar things, although maybe I am wrong. Maybe you should have a copy of the chapters in case the novel is deleted in the end, you can upload it again but removing those words.
Write your review below, imma read it, learn from it and try to write based on how you guys want it. Also later on a lot of this chapters are gonna get re-written.
Great History.............................................................................................................................................
The protagonist is simple but intelligent, the story is also quite unique. I just hope you don't drop it and disappear midway in the story,
I mean, its creative. Let's just hope you build up the verse well since well most of the characters seems to have a different backstory (based on how much I've seen). Just improve the writing quality and that's it, I guess.
I like what's going on in the story, the protagonist is simple but intelligent, I identify with him.
5 stars for winc est! But please tell there will be no yuri. I hate that stuff
Author, I think you should edit the summary and eliminate or black out words like r*pe s*x inc*st ect, lately many novels are being deleted in webnovel and I think it is because of these words or similar things, although maybe I am wrong. Maybe you should have a copy of the chapters in case the novel is deleted in the end, you can upload it again but removing those words.
Write your review below, imma read it, learn from it and try to write based on how you guys want it. Also later on a lot of this chapters are gonna get re-written.