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author where have you been, its been along time between updates, great that you are back, This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops 👍
Overall pretty well written,not much has happened so far everything is fine but I do have gripe with this work and some of your other ones which is when you introduce impregnation as a way to get points and then the main characters wrote it off I could see this making sense in a normal world with 50/50 gender proportions but like the story has been written as there are few males and if anything the mcs impregnating as many women as possible is not only possible morally but more on the hood side since well reproduction is necessary. Sorry for the long rant the whole impregnation issue isn’t really important but it’s my only gripe I have so far.
This is a really nice book, and I highly recommend it. On that note, you guys should check out my book 'Just like a dream'. You'll definitely love it.
Hello to all my cultured readers, from the synopsis, I'm sure you already have a good idea about the book, so dive in; I'm sure it'll be worth your time. If you have any questions about the book, feel free to ask under this review, I'll do my best to answer.
author where have you been, its been along time between updates, great that you are back, This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops 👍
Overall pretty well written,not much has happened so far everything is fine but I do have gripe with this work and some of your other ones which is when you introduce impregnation as a way to get points and then the main characters wrote it off I could see this making sense in a normal world with 50/50 gender proportions but like the story has been written as there are few males and if anything the mcs impregnating as many women as possible is not only possible morally but more on the hood side since well reproduction is necessary. Sorry for the long rant the whole impregnation issue isn’t really important but it’s my only gripe I have so far.
This is a really nice book, and I highly recommend it. On that note, you guys should check out my book 'Just like a dream'. You'll definitely love it.
Hello to all my cultured readers, from the synopsis, I'm sure you already have a good idea about the book, so dive in; I'm sure it'll be worth your time. If you have any questions about the book, feel free to ask under this review, I'll do my best to answer.