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Essa história é incrível, esplêndida!!! Amei cada capítulo! E claro, a parte negativa para mim seria talvez ter que esperar a continuação, por conta de ter andiedade♡♡
to be honest down care if it ai it good to ME so keep uploading for the the people who care cause if u Wright a book u are going to get criticize so down watch that
Interesting concept. However it is AI generated and therefore unreadable as far as I’m concerned.
It's quite funny how this has 4.6 stars because I'm 100% sure this AI generated chapters. The chapters are short, and here the author wants us to pay for Patreon to read this kind of small chapters. Is this author stupid or something?
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the story would be good it it actually had length to it right now the chapters get over before they start. I won't say for sure this is ai generated stuff but this is close as it gets . the least you could do is copy paste 2 responses together to double the length
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The work of an ia, the guy is so lazy that he doesn't even make chapters longer than an ia response, he does nothing but not make an effort.
The concept is great but the chapters are incredibly short. Like two scrolls and your done with the chapter. The development of the story is really slow because of it's short chapters.
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It's quite funny how this has 4.6 stars because I'm 100% sure this AI generated chapters. The chapters are short, and here the author wants us to pay for Patreon to read this kind of small chapters. Is this author stupid or something?
i like the idea but this is stupid this ai generated novel and the chapters are to short ________________________________________________________
really great idea and from the first few chapters the gramar is pretty good too.
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Amazing. There is not much dialogue, but it fits the theme of a godlike entity blessing the land.
Essa história é incrível, esplêndida!!! Amei cada capítulo! E claro, a parte negativa para mim seria talvez ter que esperar a continuação, por conta de ter andiedade♡♡
to be honest down care if it ai it good to ME so keep uploading for the the people who care cause if u Wright a book u are going to get criticize so down watch that
Interesting concept. However it is AI generated and therefore unreadable as far as I’m concerned.
It's quite funny how this has 4.6 stars because I'm 100% sure this AI generated chapters. The chapters are short, and here the author wants us to pay for Patreon to read this kind of small chapters. Is this author stupid or something?
揭示劇透 the story would be good it it actually had length to it right now the chapters get over before they start. I won't say for sure this is ai generated stuff but this is close as it gets . the least you could do is copy paste 2 responses together to double the length
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The work of an ia, the guy is so lazy that he doesn't even make chapters longer than an ia response, he does nothing but not make an effort.
The concept is great but the chapters are incredibly short. Like two scrolls and your done with the chapter. The development of the story is really slow because of it's short chapters.
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It's quite funny how this has 4.6 stars because I'm 100% sure this AI generated chapters. The chapters are short, and here the author wants us to pay for Patreon to read this kind of small chapters. Is this author stupid or something?
i like the idea but this is stupid this ai generated novel and the chapters are to short ________________________________________________________
really great idea and from the first few chapters the gramar is pretty good too.
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Amazing. There is not much dialogue, but it fits the theme of a godlike entity blessing the land.
Is this dropped hdhfudhdhxhdh