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Otro protagonista señor del borde, imbécil psicópata y resentido, de los que les gusta a los tontos con impulsos de cólera y déficit en el control de las emociones
The best prologue but the regular chapters is average in overall aspects. The characters practically only has the main character and the system in the earlier chapters. Side characters are only consumables. The technicalities like grammar is not that good. Nonetheless, the plot is pretty normal so you may try it and see it for yourselves.
Keep going author, I am loving it. On that note, you guys should check out my book 'My journey with a succubus'. You guys will definitely love it.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
was okay till he broke my off limit with Laily with his clones, so it's a big no for me. I can understand the farm plan with the clones for lust points, but Laily was my limit+ too much nonsense tbh. too many strategies against humans, and the easiest is for internal conflicts to annihilate them. no need to bother with all that shit. anyways, gl to those that chance upon my comment!
Otro protagonista señor del borde, imbécil psicópata y resentido, de los que les gusta a los tontos con impulsos de cólera y déficit en el control de las emociones
The best prologue but the regular chapters is average in overall aspects. The characters practically only has the main character and the system in the earlier chapters. Side characters are only consumables. The technicalities like grammar is not that good. Nonetheless, the plot is pretty normal so you may try it and see it for yourselves.
Keep going author, I am loving it. On that note, you guys should check out my book 'My journey with a succubus'. You guys will definitely love it.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
was okay till he broke my off limit with Laily with his clones, so it's a big no for me. I can understand the farm plan with the clones for lust points, but Laily was my limit+ too much nonsense tbh. too many strategies against humans, and the easiest is for internal conflicts to annihilate them. no need to bother with all that shit. anyways, gl to those that chance upon my comment!