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Dropped at ch 70. This novel is too slow, like the Chinese manhwa. The novel starts with the mc with a very mysterious past, and the hope of knowing about his past is what made me read till ch 70. but there is not even slightest progression on the mystery. Story progression is also very slow and there is no interesting character or plot point.
One of the most original and well written stories I've seen in this app, build up is slow but worth it, you should read it.
Hey author-san, can you tell me why is there so many main characters? and who is the real mc and why so many mc???
This world is very mysterious but we do not know the background story of the protoganist but gods are against him from the start And we do not know anything about Gaia and why there is an obsession for him But this is just the starting
really enjoyable story, greatly recommend it to anyone who might take an interest in it. ....................................................................
Good novel for now. I'm thinking thats may have potential to be top novel if author play his cards well. It's hard to say anything until it will have 100/150 chapters about characters, but for now they are simple and not deep. Zephyr is loyal like old samurai, so it's likable and fact that's he was rescued by MC giving us some thoughts why, but I think peoples are donating all lives and reincarnations only for that. Well we will see.
the premise is good and makes us anticipate about the future chapters. Looking forward to the next chapters and also past of Raven as what led him to kill all gods
Dislike the protagonist, he judges entire nations on a few people, and on his biases. He judges others while being a hypocrite himself, and mainly only on his own circumstances. None of the characters seem wise at all, and seem dumb. They do things only on impulse. The author never explains the protagonists ‘obsession’ so how are we supposed to know if we are supposed to root for him? It’s been over 110 chapters, still no clue about his so called ‘obsession’. Slow, and so many things happen for no discernible reason, and in a way, it’s boring, there is no connection or need for the readers to be invested in the protagonist at all. Writing is ok, not the best, and can sometimes be seen as rigid dialogue, and cliche Chinese writing but it’s better than any real Chinese dialogue.
Dropped at ch 70. This novel is too slow, like the Chinese manhwa. The novel starts with the mc with a very mysterious past, and the hope of knowing about his past is what made me read till ch 70. but there is not even slightest progression on the mystery. Story progression is also very slow and there is no interesting character or plot point.
One of the most original and well written stories I've seen in this app, build up is slow but worth it, you should read it.
Hey author-san, can you tell me why is there so many main characters? and who is the real mc and why so many mc???
This world is very mysterious but we do not know the background story of the protoganist but gods are against him from the start And we do not know anything about Gaia and why there is an obsession for him But this is just the starting
really enjoyable story, greatly recommend it to anyone who might take an interest in it. ....................................................................
Good novel for now. I'm thinking thats may have potential to be top novel if author play his cards well. It's hard to say anything until it will have 100/150 chapters about characters, but for now they are simple and not deep. Zephyr is loyal like old samurai, so it's likable and fact that's he was rescued by MC giving us some thoughts why, but I think peoples are donating all lives and reincarnations only for that. Well we will see.
the premise is good and makes us anticipate about the future chapters. Looking forward to the next chapters and also past of Raven as what led him to kill all gods
Dislike the protagonist, he judges entire nations on a few people, and on his biases. He judges others while being a hypocrite himself, and mainly only on his own circumstances. None of the characters seem wise at all, and seem dumb. They do things only on impulse. The author never explains the protagonists ‘obsession’ so how are we supposed to know if we are supposed to root for him? It’s been over 110 chapters, still no clue about his so called ‘obsession’. Slow, and so many things happen for no discernible reason, and in a way, it’s boring, there is no connection or need for the readers to be invested in the protagonist at all. Writing is ok, not the best, and can sometimes be seen as rigid dialogue, and cliche Chinese writing but it’s better than any real Chinese dialogue.