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I think the world building has a lot of potential. I especially love the nuances to magic and aura in this novel. The characters are ok, but nother really new so far. Still, I'm not sure if I can keep reading much longer. For the love of all that is unholy, please get an editor or at least use grammarly or something to check your grammar and word usage. There are so many mistakes that it's hard to read. I have definitely seen worse, such as in mtl'd content, but it's still pretty bad.
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揭示劇透
looks good, looking forward to more chapters, so I can read the pillagerigd version 😆🤣. (don't worry I'll throw my stones on you)
I read all the available chapters and I gotta say, it was quite underwhelming. Perhaps if the story was some what more serious it would be enjoyable. The main character is very airheaded and childish for his actual age which in turn has the reader wondering whether to continue reading or not. It’s more of a slice of life/ shounen story. I don’t see the main character getting stronger than his past self at the rate the story is going. The world building albeit slow is getting there I think? Overall though it’s written well but it lacks interest and gets boring fast. It’s just the normal same old reincarnation and head to magic school to do nothing story. I do hope the story progresses well over time but it lacks a reason to keep reading. We know nothing of the main characters skills and traits beside his soul gear. Even the side characters have more depth than him lol I hoped to see more swordsmen skills displayed in the early chapters since that’s what makes or breaks a story. Fine idea but airheaded main characters kinda ruin it.
Not bad, But i hope it Doesn't become too focused on harem and become too fast paced.
I have read all the updated chapters, and i think, this book is worth reading, because it is a very interesting novel with a good concept.i hope to see new updates soon in this novel.
It's hard to judge a book with such a few chapters, but it think that it's definitely worth reading. The grammar is sometimes faulty, but I think it's going to be better later on, so I'm definitely waiting for new chapters.
A book worth reading, I specially like the premise and protagonist's cheat initially that's foreshadowed but as we read it's become clearer. finish reading all the chapters waiting for more .
Interesting idea, I approve of this book. I will say some of the grammar was a little spotty, but it wasn't horrible. The idea is the same old reincarnation jig, but it has a little bit of a different spin than all the rest and it seems like maybe it's going to be heavily action based? Anyways, keep writing Author 😜
A good novel. even thought it was the same as other reincarnation , become stronger. harem maybe. etc. it is quite good. i just hope that future writing become good and the story evolve to become more wow.
I love the storyline and the character template. Please keep it up author
not bad it was quite interesting till now and I will gladly take my time with the same good stuff . so keep up the good work author.
I think the world building has a lot of potential. I especially love the nuances to magic and aura in this novel. The characters are ok, but nother really new so far. Still, I'm not sure if I can keep reading much longer. For the love of all that is unholy, please get an editor or at least use grammarly or something to check your grammar and word usage. There are so many mistakes that it's hard to read. I have definitely seen worse, such as in mtl'd content, but it's still pretty bad.
Hello everyone, I created a server for this novel. if your interested you can add me. Tanvir9216
揭示劇透 looks good, looking forward to more chapters, so I can read the pillagerigd version 😆🤣. (don't worry I'll throw my stones on you)
I read all the available chapters and I gotta say, it was quite underwhelming. Perhaps if the story was some what more serious it would be enjoyable. The main character is very airheaded and childish for his actual age which in turn has the reader wondering whether to continue reading or not. It’s more of a slice of life/ shounen story. I don’t see the main character getting stronger than his past self at the rate the story is going. The world building albeit slow is getting there I think? Overall though it’s written well but it lacks interest and gets boring fast. It’s just the normal same old reincarnation and head to magic school to do nothing story. I do hope the story progresses well over time but it lacks a reason to keep reading. We know nothing of the main characters skills and traits beside his soul gear. Even the side characters have more depth than him lol I hoped to see more swordsmen skills displayed in the early chapters since that’s what makes or breaks a story. Fine idea but airheaded main characters kinda ruin it.
Not bad, But i hope it Doesn't become too focused on harem and become too fast paced.
I have read all the updated chapters, and i think, this book is worth reading, because it is a very interesting novel with a good concept.i hope to see new updates soon in this novel.
It's hard to judge a book with such a few chapters, but it think that it's definitely worth reading. The grammar is sometimes faulty, but I think it's going to be better later on, so I'm definitely waiting for new chapters.
A book worth reading, I specially like the premise and protagonist's cheat initially that's foreshadowed but as we read it's become clearer. finish reading all the chapters waiting for more .
Interesting idea, I approve of this book. I will say some of the grammar was a little spotty, but it wasn't horrible. The idea is the same old reincarnation jig, but it has a little bit of a different spin than all the rest and it seems like maybe it's going to be heavily action based? Anyways, keep writing Author 😜
A good novel. even thought it was the same as other reincarnation , become stronger. harem maybe. etc. it is quite good. i just hope that future writing become good and the story evolve to become more wow.
I love the storyline and the character template. Please keep it up author
not bad it was quite interesting till now and I will gladly take my time with the same good stuff . so keep up the good work author.