4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
As for now, it's quite good! Anticipating what would happen! And also the name of the MC!
Hello, I've created a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Shameless Author here rating his own book! I just wanted to say that if you have any questions abt the story or some ideas that you wanted to be point out, you can comment here! 😁
Going past those archaic english is hard lol. Still, after the Flood, the characters finally talks normal so there's that.
揭示劇透 As for now, it's quite good! Anticipating what would happen! And also the name of the MC!
Hello, I've created a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Shameless Author here rating his own book! I just wanted to say that if you have any questions abt the story or some ideas that you wanted to be point out, you can comment here! 😁
Going past those archaic english is hard lol. Still, after the Flood, the characters finally talks normal so there's that.
揭示劇透