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You guys… I was planning to write a review after the first 10 chapters, but this novel is just SO well written that I binge read 70 chapters before writing this. The author has thought out the story and characters far more than other BL cultivation novels and I’m obsessed. Definitely read this one, you won’t regret it.
These visuals!! 😭😭😫😫 I could stare at them, all day and all night, and I would be satisfied. But I would die happy if I could see them in real life 🫣🫣 With those faces you could trample me to death and I wouldn’t even complain 🤫 Matter of fact, I’d probably roll over to make it easier for you 😓😓
Really good story. Both grammar and plot are amazing. The Grandmaster is really good ML and you can't help but feel connected to MC. I would definitely recommend this to everyone.
Although l just started reading this book it has hae me hooked into the characters the author is doing great
the characters are well described, each having their own unique personality and distinct thoughts. the details are carefully and meticulously accounted for, and the scenes are easy to imagine. the romance is presented rather early in the story so you can expect it right away, and the writing can get very steamy. sometimes too many lines are invested in the details which makes it a bit confusing and harder to understand, but it's a minor issue.
First time trying this genre and I think imma keep reading lol. The author is a writing wizard because nothing else can explain the impeccable writing quality. Not even a single grammatical error. Don't forget the characters, the mc is kinda cute and relatable, poor guy will suffer a lot and I can tell, but I feed on his suffering. World building is incredible, idk how but I'm in the novel without being in it. And oh, I'm so glad the author didn't write too much unnecessary information, straight to the point.A job well done🥳
The story start off quite nicely and effortlessly made me like it. Characters are pretty interesting too! It only has a few chapters for now, but I'm sure the updates will be constant enough for us to get a chappy or two everyday! Keep it up author!
I neeeeed like super neeeeeed more chapters soo much fan service I'm screaming loved it ❤️ 💙 💜 💖 . I'm so super excited for the next chapters and how thier relationship is going to unfold
Amazing first 11 chapters! The writing quality is top notch with no grammatical mistakes. The characters are deep, realistic and fun to see in action. The dynamic between the MC and the grandmaster is so charming even though we haven't seen much of them yet. The chemistry between them feels like an actual relationship. The world building is still in its early steps but its very promising and mysterious enough to keep you hooked to know more. All in all, this book is actually amazing! I'm definetly keeping up with the updates in the future! Keep up the good work, author![img=recommend]
the author looks newbie but I tell you she's a sneaky sneaky ol' writer. so go ahead and try her book without getting scared of unknown content. 🐑🐑🐑
A full five stars from me since it deserves no less. The author has a good grasp of portraying emotions and interactions between characters ,I like that the development isn't rushed, it's realistically paced. I've read right till chapter 12 and I like the subtle drops of mysteries and conflicts that are about to start. I look forward to seeing the romantic development and the angst that will follow. synopsis was a killer one too! best of luck!
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This story so good gosh...!! Please give me more!! More chapters!! They're so tasty! 😭😭😭😭 I love everything from the very start. The emotioons, the narrative, everything !
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first of all, good synopsis. i haven't seen good synopsis these days. next is the start. start is very good and I have very high expectations from this book. i am getting vibes of mo dao zu shi from this. i don't expect this to match it, but I hope author can capitalise this book potential to lead it towards a great end
Alright , standard shameless Author Review. I'm back in the works after a very long time so I'm doing my best to relate this story :), so hopefully it will meet your expectations. The story isnt fast-paced and the romance will take some time to develop as my MC heals from a lot of past trauma. It is also my first time delving into Cultivation but I don't plan to go too indepth into levels and realms and such. The aspect of Cultivation will be a secondary focus in the plot so hopefully that doesn't disappoint you. Please do share your thoughts in the comments with me and ask any questions by replying to this review if you like. ~Thank you[img=Unalived]
You guys… I was planning to write a review after the first 10 chapters, but this novel is just SO well written that I binge read 70 chapters before writing this. The author has thought out the story and characters far more than other BL cultivation novels and I’m obsessed. Definitely read this one, you won’t regret it.
These visuals!! 😭😭😫😫 I could stare at them, all day and all night, and I would be satisfied. But I would die happy if I could see them in real life 🫣🫣 With those faces you could trample me to death and I wouldn’t even complain 🤫 Matter of fact, I’d probably roll over to make it easier for you 😓😓
Really good story. Both grammar and plot are amazing. The Grandmaster is really good ML and you can't help but feel connected to MC. I would definitely recommend this to everyone.
Although l just started reading this book it has hae me hooked into the characters the author is doing great
the characters are well described, each having their own unique personality and distinct thoughts. the details are carefully and meticulously accounted for, and the scenes are easy to imagine. the romance is presented rather early in the story so you can expect it right away, and the writing can get very steamy. sometimes too many lines are invested in the details which makes it a bit confusing and harder to understand, but it's a minor issue.
First time trying this genre and I think imma keep reading lol. The author is a writing wizard because nothing else can explain the impeccable writing quality. Not even a single grammatical error. Don't forget the characters, the mc is kinda cute and relatable, poor guy will suffer a lot and I can tell, but I feed on his suffering. World building is incredible, idk how but I'm in the novel without being in it. And oh, I'm so glad the author didn't write too much unnecessary information, straight to the point.A job well done🥳
The story start off quite nicely and effortlessly made me like it. Characters are pretty interesting too! It only has a few chapters for now, but I'm sure the updates will be constant enough for us to get a chappy or two everyday! Keep it up author!
I neeeeed like super neeeeeed more chapters soo much fan service I'm screaming loved it ❤️ 💙 💜 💖 . I'm so super excited for the next chapters and how thier relationship is going to unfold
Amazing first 11 chapters! The writing quality is top notch with no grammatical mistakes. The characters are deep, realistic and fun to see in action. The dynamic between the MC and the grandmaster is so charming even though we haven't seen much of them yet. The chemistry between them feels like an actual relationship. The world building is still in its early steps but its very promising and mysterious enough to keep you hooked to know more. All in all, this book is actually amazing! I'm definetly keeping up with the updates in the future! Keep up the good work, author![img=recommend]
the author looks newbie but I tell you she's a sneaky sneaky ol' writer. so go ahead and try her book without getting scared of unknown content. 🐑🐑🐑
A full five stars from me since it deserves no less. The author has a good grasp of portraying emotions and interactions between characters ,I like that the development isn't rushed, it's realistically paced. I've read right till chapter 12 and I like the subtle drops of mysteries and conflicts that are about to start. I look forward to seeing the romantic development and the angst that will follow. synopsis was a killer one too! best of luck!
揭示劇透 This story so good gosh...!! Please give me more!! More chapters!! They're so tasty! 😭😭😭😭 I love everything from the very start. The emotioons, the narrative, everything !
揭示劇透 first of all, good synopsis. i haven't seen good synopsis these days. next is the start. start is very good and I have very high expectations from this book. i am getting vibes of mo dao zu shi from this. i don't expect this to match it, but I hope author can capitalise this book potential to lead it towards a great end
Alright , standard shameless Author Review. I'm back in the works after a very long time so I'm doing my best to relate this story :), so hopefully it will meet your expectations. The story isnt fast-paced and the romance will take some time to develop as my MC heals from a lot of past trauma. It is also my first time delving into Cultivation but I don't plan to go too indepth into levels and realms and such. The aspect of Cultivation will be a secondary focus in the plot so hopefully that doesn't disappoint you. Please do share your thoughts in the comments with me and ask any questions by replying to this review if you like. ~Thank you[img=Unalived]