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Like most readers of this fanfic, I believe this is a translation. Or maybe it's a reup of some work that fell through. Most of the work is good, however, there are some errors in both names and information, such as Karp (Garp), Roy (Bronts), Drogo (Dragon), etc. There is also the role of the MC in this story. He became a government dog and that was extremely irritating.
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The beginning was really good but the chapters like 30 plus should have just been a time skip to Luffy era
I like this fanfic very much it doesn’t celebrate piracy and as transmigration leaves in era of peace you would be more inclined towards order even if has corruption better than chaos which happened in this novel more the mc gets to navigate politics and dirty secrets this way to be able to make a change in future but i really wished if there was some sub romance in the novel that’s it
I like it very much to be honest especially his the mc collaboration with dr.vegapunk many people said the mc became a wg dog but I see that he isn’t he is waiting training understand that wg cannot be destroyed easily any way I like the novel very much
It’s a great story even though there are some grammar mistakes they are only really prevalent in the beginning. The author has gotten much better as the story has progressed. The MC is a very interesting character to be sure. While he does go the typical marine route a lot of reincarnaters take in these fics he does things in a way that reading it doesn’t feel like repetition of other stories. It is definitely worth a read.
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It's a well written fic. Which makes it even sadder that I'm dropping it. I gave it a try even after reading comments hating on the mc. I reached ch 45 and just couldn't ignore it anymore.
i like the story and the writing is good and all but for how much longer is he going to be the governments lap dog for? so far he hasn’t changed a single thing about canon just letting everything play out the same, so why was he even born back before canon if all he is going to do is be a good lap dog and not even change anything ?
it's a good story, easy to read and no grammar mistakes. on the other hand the main character is lacking a lot. in the beginning it was fun read, challenges, becoming stronger and so on.. but he has no ambition, his conquerer haki makes no sense because he is just being obedient. yeah he might say he is against it but still does what he is told. no ambition, no direction. I read until 90 chapter hoping it would get better but no change. good luck author
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MC who is so good at the beginning is now a dog on a leash despite him already achieving Admiral rank and now to ensure that the three admiral is the as canon Author remove MC's admiral position in the one of the most idiotic way and what annoy is that author didn't even hint if MC will make a comeback on his own or is MC waiting for the leash that the five elder has on him loosen so he can be an admiral again MC for now has lost power on the marine and his only consolation is that he can hear five elder's meeting which is con than pro if he retain his rank and maybe only regain power when canon start which means Author probably can't think of any creative ideas anymore
The pacing and writing is good is just too bad that the MC is a pushover, a loser, an hypocrite and a lapdog.
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The work is good, it was well developed and was reaching very good condition. But from chapter 48 something changes that was super unnecessary, this error made me want to stop reading it. The story had a lot of potential, and since the author did not correct that error, this must be a translation and not an original.
its pretty good. the writing feels a little weird, pretty sure its gone through an ai or grammar program. the fights are fun to read, and i personally like the lightning devil fruit even though some find it generic. id read if ur bored, the only problem i see really is the author messes up some characters and the timeline. but its not horrible.
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Want to see the battle between MC and everyone!!!!!!!!!!
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This novel is not bad, but feels not authentic or like AI written. It was good at start but as i read the way it was written made it awkward to read for me. The character also feels very shallow and rigid.
finally a fanfic that i really want, I really want a op fanfic that was at the marine and the same batch as akainu and kizaru, please don't drop and keep updating, I'll be rooting for this work
The novel seems to be promising, I liked it. Can’t wait for more chapters!!!
Like most readers of this fanfic, I believe this is a translation. Or maybe it's a reup of some work that fell through. Most of the work is good, however, there are some errors in both names and information, such as Karp (Garp), Roy (Bronts), Drogo (Dragon), etc. There is also the role of the MC in this story. He became a government dog and that was extremely irritating.
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The beginning was really good but the chapters like 30 plus should have just been a time skip to Luffy era
I like this fanfic very much it doesn’t celebrate piracy and as transmigration leaves in era of peace you would be more inclined towards order even if has corruption better than chaos which happened in this novel more the mc gets to navigate politics and dirty secrets this way to be able to make a change in future but i really wished if there was some sub romance in the novel that’s it
I like it very much to be honest especially his the mc collaboration with dr.vegapunk many people said the mc became a wg dog but I see that he isn’t he is waiting training understand that wg cannot be destroyed easily any way I like the novel very much
It’s a great story even though there are some grammar mistakes they are only really prevalent in the beginning. The author has gotten much better as the story has progressed. The MC is a very interesting character to be sure. While he does go the typical marine route a lot of reincarnaters take in these fics he does things in a way that reading it doesn’t feel like repetition of other stories. It is definitely worth a read.
揭示劇透 It's a well written fic. Which makes it even sadder that I'm dropping it. I gave it a try even after reading comments hating on the mc. I reached ch 45 and just couldn't ignore it anymore.
i like the story and the writing is good and all but for how much longer is he going to be the governments lap dog for? so far he hasn’t changed a single thing about canon just letting everything play out the same, so why was he even born back before canon if all he is going to do is be a good lap dog and not even change anything ?
it's a good story, easy to read and no grammar mistakes. on the other hand the main character is lacking a lot. in the beginning it was fun read, challenges, becoming stronger and so on.. but he has no ambition, his conquerer haki makes no sense because he is just being obedient. yeah he might say he is against it but still does what he is told. no ambition, no direction. I read until 90 chapter hoping it would get better but no change. good luck author
🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️🌩️
MC who is so good at the beginning is now a dog on a leash despite him already achieving Admiral rank and now to ensure that the three admiral is the as canon Author remove MC's admiral position in the one of the most idiotic way and what annoy is that author didn't even hint if MC will make a comeback on his own or is MC waiting for the leash that the five elder has on him loosen so he can be an admiral again MC for now has lost power on the marine and his only consolation is that he can hear five elder's meeting which is con than pro if he retain his rank and maybe only regain power when canon start which means Author probably can't think of any creative ideas anymore
The pacing and writing is good is just too bad that the MC is a pushover, a loser, an hypocrite and a lapdog.
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The work is good, it was well developed and was reaching very good condition. But from chapter 48 something changes that was super unnecessary, this error made me want to stop reading it. The story had a lot of potential, and since the author did not correct that error, this must be a translation and not an original.
its pretty good. the writing feels a little weird, pretty sure its gone through an ai or grammar program. the fights are fun to read, and i personally like the lightning devil fruit even though some find it generic. id read if ur bored, the only problem i see really is the author messes up some characters and the timeline. but its not horrible.
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Want to see the battle between MC and everyone!!!!!!!!!!
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This novel is not bad, but feels not authentic or like AI written. It was good at start but as i read the way it was written made it awkward to read for me. The character also feels very shallow and rigid.
finally a fanfic that i really want, I really want a op fanfic that was at the marine and the same batch as akainu and kizaru, please don't drop and keep updating, I'll be rooting for this work
The novel seems to be promising, I liked it. Can’t wait for more chapters!!!
Low rate because it's AI and has no emotion at all reading this