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Я не люблю смотреть на дерьмо собаки, никто не любит, ломание 4 стены? Реально? Перечитал комиксы? История развивается слишком быстро, автор отказывается от своей истории уже в новой главе. ....................................................................................
its a good story with a good writing style, nothing to complain, good job author 👍🏼
I'm enjoying it so far. I'm here to pass time, and this novel does a good job.
ok , so the writing quality i don’t know man i don’t have much experience with it but i’m comfortable reading it so it’s very good in my opinion , as for updating stability it’s like 3 to 4 chapters a week if not more so very good , for the story in my opinion it’s also good but it need more chapters to get to know the MC in my opinion he is funny and a little bit childish at first be he will grow up so keep reading and childish doesn’t mean dumb for anyone, he is smart and use his knowledge to make himself more powerful and use his powers very good , for harem or no , i think it’s a no harem type (i don’t remember sorry but it’s more towards no harem) i’ve just came from chap 32 so i didn’t check the previous chaps for this review, character design is very go till now i will not talk about it since if you read the story you know MC is likeble , as for world background it’s mixed there’s x-men (from movie?) and it’s marvel so yea, there’s wakanda for spoiler sake i will go no further, but overall i recommend any of you to give it a shot cuz i really like the novel.i’m no professional reviewer i just write what is on my mind.
till now 4.5 to me interesting concept let's see how it will continue👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really like the idea of the story but I find that mc is growing to fast. I also have not really see him do anything interesting with the forces.
The pacing is not good, character interactions seems a bit off. The 4th wall breaking for first few chapters were annoying but author changed it, so it's good.Not my cup of tea, good luck tho.
Your way of writing doesn't convince me very much in updates we are buying well because they are every day so far in the development of the story we start with revenge but the mc is being quite soft although it could be because of the x men but it doesn't completely suit me stars 2/5/1/1/3
Breaking of the fourth wall. Immature style of writing where he talks to me like I'm some pledge at a frat. Horribly boring story with no pacing or forward motion. He goes to Xavier school to study and work and get stronger. Yet, he spends a bunch of his time just f****** around with other classmates. I don't want to see a fan Fic about somebody going to school in Marvel. Basically, it's a rip-off deadpool without the semi immortality.
I don't know why this story is getting such a low rating because I've seen 4.8 stories that were full of grammar mistakes and the direction was all over the place (like a kid on a sugar high). I didn't see that with this story. While is has several cliched moments its at least a fun read.
AI-generated work. Give it a read and see for yourself. The author just copy pasted it with a slight adjustment, but he made a very common mistake. Just read, you will notice it.
Hello guys, Author here!The first 4 chs contain wall breaks(people hate them😭😭😭😭) so they are a hit or miss(not gonna fix them Im too lazy.....FOR THE LOVE OF GOD GO PAST 10 CHS BEFORE JUDGINGI hope that I will continue this fanfic till I reach the apexCyq
Mediocre. The author notes are obnoxious and don't make it clear when they start and end, so you randomly get thrown out of the story by the author notes. Story is pretty mediocre, nothing special. Proof reading is desperately needed
pretty much a wattpad fanfic, ain't nothing special but interesting concept. I couldn't be bothered to endure more than 2 chapters so maybe you'll beat my record.
Minimum node 4.7👍👍👍👍👍.✨✨👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
interesting keep uploading man or maam ```````````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~````````````````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
5 stars coz it is interesting to read but hope AUTHOR can also make the GRAND COMPLETION OF THE STORY.
If I wanted to read something with a character that can 4th wall break I would directly read the deadpool comics instead of a knockkoff... heck rick sanchez from rick and morty can do a 4th wall break but they dont do it becuase it is already overplayed. Only deadpool can make it work and make it fun.
I'm liking the story, It's a bit of a slow burn in some areas and fast in others, but it's done in a way that keeps the story interesting. The update stability is solid, really can't complain there and I haven't come across anything bad in the grammar department. The MC is pretty funny and seems to have a mind of his own and isn't simply a yes man plus he's smart so you won't feel like you're having a brain aneurysm from stupidity. As for world background. That's part of where it feels like a slow burn. But it's done in a way that I personally like. Note for the Author. "Keep up the good work, I'm sure someone out there is proud of you"
Я не люблю смотреть на дерьмо собаки, никто не любит, ломание 4 стены? Реально? Перечитал комиксы? История развивается слишком быстро, автор отказывается от своей истории уже в новой главе. ....................................................................................
its a good story with a good writing style, nothing to complain, good job author 👍🏼
I'm enjoying it so far. I'm here to pass time, and this novel does a good job.
ok , so the writing quality i don’t know man i don’t have much experience with it but i’m comfortable reading it so it’s very good in my opinion , as for updating stability it’s like 3 to 4 chapters a week if not more so very good , for the story in my opinion it’s also good but it need more chapters to get to know the MC in my opinion he is funny and a little bit childish at first be he will grow up so keep reading and childish doesn’t mean dumb for anyone, he is smart and use his knowledge to make himself more powerful and use his powers very good , for harem or no , i think it’s a no harem type (i don’t remember sorry but it’s more towards no harem) i’ve just came from chap 32 so i didn’t check the previous chaps for this review, character design is very go till now i will not talk about it since if you read the story you know MC is likeble , as for world background it’s mixed there’s x-men (from movie?) and it’s marvel so yea, there’s wakanda for spoiler sake i will go no further, but overall i recommend any of you to give it a shot cuz i really like the novel.i’m no professional reviewer i just write what is on my mind.
till now 4.5 to me interesting concept let's see how it will continue👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really like the idea of the story but I find that mc is growing to fast. I also have not really see him do anything interesting with the forces.
The pacing is not good, character interactions seems a bit off. The 4th wall breaking for first few chapters were annoying but author changed it, so it's good.Not my cup of tea, good luck tho.
Your way of writing doesn't convince me very much in updates we are buying well because they are every day so far in the development of the story we start with revenge but the mc is being quite soft although it could be because of the x men but it doesn't completely suit me stars 2/5/1/1/3
Breaking of the fourth wall. Immature style of writing where he talks to me like I'm some pledge at a frat. Horribly boring story with no pacing or forward motion. He goes to Xavier school to study and work and get stronger. Yet, he spends a bunch of his time just f****** around with other classmates. I don't want to see a fan Fic about somebody going to school in Marvel. Basically, it's a rip-off deadpool without the semi immortality.
I don't know why this story is getting such a low rating because I've seen 4.8 stories that were full of grammar mistakes and the direction was all over the place (like a kid on a sugar high). I didn't see that with this story. While is has several cliched moments its at least a fun read.
AI-generated work. Give it a read and see for yourself. The author just copy pasted it with a slight adjustment, but he made a very common mistake. Just read, you will notice it.
Hello guys, Author here!The first 4 chs contain wall breaks(people hate them😭😭😭😭) so they are a hit or miss(not gonna fix them Im too lazy.....FOR THE LOVE OF GOD GO PAST 10 CHS BEFORE JUDGINGI hope that I will continue this fanfic till I reach the apexCyq
Mediocre. The author notes are obnoxious and don't make it clear when they start and end, so you randomly get thrown out of the story by the author notes. Story is pretty mediocre, nothing special. Proof reading is desperately needed
pretty much a wattpad fanfic, ain't nothing special but interesting concept. I couldn't be bothered to endure more than 2 chapters so maybe you'll beat my record.
Minimum node 4.7👍👍👍👍👍.✨✨👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
interesting keep uploading man or maam ```````````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~````````````````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
5 stars coz it is interesting to read but hope AUTHOR can also make the GRAND COMPLETION OF THE STORY.
If I wanted to read something with a character that can 4th wall break I would directly read the deadpool comics instead of a knockkoff... heck rick sanchez from rick and morty can do a 4th wall break but they dont do it becuase it is already overplayed. Only deadpool can make it work and make it fun.
I'm liking the story, It's a bit of a slow burn in some areas and fast in others, but it's done in a way that keeps the story interesting. The update stability is solid, really can't complain there and I haven't come across anything bad in the grammar department. The MC is pretty funny and seems to have a mind of his own and isn't simply a yes man plus he's smart so you won't feel like you're having a brain aneurysm from stupidity. As for world background. That's part of where it feels like a slow burn. But it's done in a way that I personally like. Note for the Author. "Keep up the good work, I'm sure someone out there is proud of you"