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An awesome ff that the author needs to continue updating. I love the Mc and story development. Plz don't drop
really great story..dude got OP really quickly..should have just made him grow real time and not in time dilation. kudos though
The story is good, but when will you write it further. all the other ones are also halted in the middle as well.
I don’t know what to write so I’ll write what I think, I really liked the fanfiction and recommend it to everyone, and I would also like the author to write more and faster, and I think it would also be cool if he traveled to an ordinary parallel earth similar to ours and took one guy and threw him into the Marvel universe and watched what he would do or first "accidentally" kill him and said: I will give you 3 wishes but not strong ones, that’s my idea, I think that’s all
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read 7 chapters and so far it's very good, would recommend 👌 👍 😊 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
I was reading a fanfic called I reap souls in DC, the protagonist a mode above Bankai called shukai is there between chapter two hundred and the last chapter currently released
I'm glad that you have a lot of ideas, but you have a lot of unfinished stories, maybe first from and then new ones.But the idea is certainly great
An awesome ff that the author needs to continue updating. I love the Mc and story development. Plz don't drop
really great story..dude got OP really quickly..should have just made him grow real time and not in time dilation. kudos though
The story is good, but when will you write it further. all the other ones are also halted in the middle as well.
I don’t know what to write so I’ll write what I think, I really liked the fanfiction and recommend it to everyone, and I would also like the author to write more and faster, and I think it would also be cool if he traveled to an ordinary parallel earth similar to ours and took one guy and threw him into the Marvel universe and watched what he would do or first "accidentally" kill him and said: I will give you 3 wishes but not strong ones, that’s my idea, I think that’s all
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read 7 chapters and so far it's very good, would recommend 👌 👍 😊 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
I was reading a fanfic called I reap souls in DC, the protagonist a mode above Bankai called shukai is there between chapter two hundred and the last chapter currently released
I'm glad that you have a lot of ideas, but you have a lot of unfinished stories, maybe first from and then new ones.But the idea is certainly great
Have you truly given up on your hades book