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although the concept is good. the way the author makes the mc a retard of not even knowing his own ability despite having it for a year and the subsequent hints about luffy and zoro progress never makes him even less bit suspicious that something is going on and thoroughly inspect his system, makes me want to stop reading.
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One of the best OP fanfic on this platform, the system (golden finger) blends perfectly with the pirate world's settings. The execution went quite well, each crew member got powers that suited them. I hope the author won't stop translating this good fanfic.
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It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It interesting and unique to see MC/Logan power.. How every member or non member of Strawhats Pirates go into Manga world and get a power up, and MC get the same power up is too broken/OP I think (I usually not like story where MC get strong without training/easily got strong, but I don't know why but it's interesting me too see this story until now).. But why Logan doesn't get notification about Vivi since Alabasta?? The others get stronger but she isn't?? Is she so busy that she doesn't have a time to read manga?? And it will be interesting to see how the story now that so many change than in original story.. Like Barto is Zoro fan and not Luffy, what happen to BW who make the Strawhats Fleets, what happen to Thriller Bark victims now, what happen to Camie, Pappug, and Hachi if Strawhats not meet them, what happens to Law now, don't they make alliance with Law now, etc... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama.. Love your story 😁👍😍😍
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Para uma tradução chinesa eu achei bom, não tem racismo ou bobagem que outros tradutores não tiram das suas traduções, o MC não pensa com o pau, recomendo que leiam
Отличный перевод! Оригинал написан китайцем, но написан качественно, без множества присущи им гиперболизаций. История развивается достаточно ровно, не смотря на то, что герои быстро становятся сильными. Рекомендую к прочтению.
GREAT STORY! GOOD JOB! [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Very good story in my opinion. I had already tried to read this novel several months ago but the first chapters did not catch my attention, finally about two weeks ago I resumed reading and I am happy to have given it another chance. I hope the author continues with this story.
it could be great but author decision to make mc gain others abilities is just dumb... wasted ff dont recomend...,.....................................
[img=recommend]This is the best one piece fanfiction I've ever seen in my entire life. No chinese translated is very good. I love there are all happy ending and exciting scenes especially the latest chapter (215). Thanks for this masterpiece[img=update]
Honestly, the story is very interesting, the grammar however makes you feel this was written by a 6th grader
I like the story idea and route it taken but I hate the pairing with all my heart. Won't be continuing but this is good fanfic nonetheless
Very unique ideas, God awful character writing, on all accounts. MC has a drop down tab he literally never checks that could solve every issue, and that's just the cherry on top for how dumb they made the MC. Typical Chinese translation problems, Luffy talks like he's a young master. Overall, could have been good but it's not worth the time
I really enjoyed the story and it felt like everything came together in the end
although the concept is good. the way the author makes the mc a retard of not even knowing his own ability despite having it for a year and the subsequent hints about luffy and zoro progress never makes him even less bit suspicious that something is going on and thoroughly inspect his system, makes me want to stop reading.
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One of the best OP fanfic on this platform, the system (golden finger) blends perfectly with the pirate world's settings. The execution went quite well, each crew member got powers that suited them. I hope the author won't stop translating this good fanfic.
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It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It interesting and unique to see MC/Logan power.. How every member or non member of Strawhats Pirates go into Manga world and get a power up, and MC get the same power up is too broken/OP I think (I usually not like story where MC get strong without training/easily got strong, but I don't know why but it's interesting me too see this story until now).. But why Logan doesn't get notification about Vivi since Alabasta?? The others get stronger but she isn't?? Is she so busy that she doesn't have a time to read manga?? And it will be interesting to see how the story now that so many change than in original story.. Like Barto is Zoro fan and not Luffy, what happen to BW who make the Strawhats Fleets, what happen to Thriller Bark victims now, what happen to Camie, Pappug, and Hachi if Strawhats not meet them, what happens to Law now, don't they make alliance with Law now, etc... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama.. Love your story 😁👍😍😍
揭示劇透 Para uma tradução chinesa eu achei bom, não tem racismo ou bobagem que outros tradutores não tiram das suas traduções, o MC não pensa com o pau, recomendo que leiam
Отличный перевод! Оригинал написан китайцем, но написан качественно, без множества присущи им гиперболизаций. История развивается достаточно ровно, не смотря на то, что герои быстро становятся сильными. Рекомендую к прочтению.
GREAT STORY! GOOD JOB! [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Very good story in my opinion. I had already tried to read this novel several months ago but the first chapters did not catch my attention, finally about two weeks ago I resumed reading and I am happy to have given it another chance. I hope the author continues with this story.
it could be great but author decision to make mc gain others abilities is just dumb... wasted ff dont recomend...,.....................................
[img=recommend]This is the best one piece fanfiction I've ever seen in my entire life. No chinese translated is very good. I love there are all happy ending and exciting scenes especially the latest chapter (215). Thanks for this masterpiece[img=update]
Honestly, the story is very interesting, the grammar however makes you feel this was written by a 6th grader
I like the story idea and route it taken but I hate the pairing with all my heart. Won't be continuing but this is good fanfic nonetheless
Very unique ideas, God awful character writing, on all accounts. MC has a drop down tab he literally never checks that could solve every issue, and that's just the cherry on top for how dumb they made the MC. Typical Chinese translation problems, Luffy talks like he's a young master. Overall, could have been good but it's not worth the time
I really enjoyed the story and it felt like everything came together in the end