3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Author review here. please use ask any questions you have here and I'll do my best to answer to answer as soon as humanly possible .I'm leaving this review here just so you know what to expect while reading the novel .MC: The main Character is a boy who is soon to turn seventeen and faces some serious mental trauma at his young age, he may be kind a few times but he makes sure to return to people two times the amount of pain they give him. But he grows to become seriously cold-hearted.World background: The story although it's set before common era is in a whole different world different from ours.updating stability: For now I'll try to update ten chapters each week.World Building: I world build using the mental descriptions of the characters and so you'll only be seeing what the characters are seeing. imagine knowing that a monster is creeping up behind a character is creeping up from behind a character and he/she hasn't even realized it.Story Development: Although the story has a slightly dark start, it slowly brightens up as the story moves on.There are many reasonable explanations for the harem tag, and of course I've heard many of you complain about harem stories being repetitive, but from my observations it mostly happens when harem becomes a main focus of the story. My story's harem will just be a few girls who the MC goes through some kind of mind-blowing life and death situation, and after risking his life to see that they come out of the situation alive, they slowly start to develop feelings for him.No one is falling for him because of his looks, only his feat will define how other characters act towards him and sometimes his look as well ( but in a more negative way)The harem will progress along with the story, and there will be slight romance, but action and adventure are the story's main focus so you'll be seeing more of that than anything else.I hope this helps you along this amazing journey and I hope you enjoy it, and be sure to savor every moment of the MC's suffering.I hope you enjoy the story and make sure to support with everything you can.Please forgive my english. from your noob author.
This is the author here with another account. I lost my device and somehow forgot my account password so I'll be continuing the book on this account, be sure to check it out by next week. I'm really sorry for causing you all the trouble but if found the story that intriguing then feel free to swing by. That's not all though cause this time you'll get to enjoy the story along with the sequel and prequel although I'm not sure yet if that's a very good idea. Follow Illius, Harry, and Hyami on their journey as we rise to greatness. Thanks for reading.🙏🙏🙏
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Author review here. please use ask any questions you have here and I'll do my best to answer to answer as soon as humanly possible .I'm leaving this review here just so you know what to expect while reading the novel .MC: The main Character is a boy who is soon to turn seventeen and faces some serious mental trauma at his young age, he may be kind a few times but he makes sure to return to people two times the amount of pain they give him. But he grows to become seriously cold-hearted.World background: The story although it's set before common era is in a whole different world different from ours.updating stability: For now I'll try to update ten chapters each week.World Building: I world build using the mental descriptions of the characters and so you'll only be seeing what the characters are seeing. imagine knowing that a monster is creeping up behind a character is creeping up from behind a character and he/she hasn't even realized it.Story Development: Although the story has a slightly dark start, it slowly brightens up as the story moves on.There are many reasonable explanations for the harem tag, and of course I've heard many of you complain about harem stories being repetitive, but from my observations it mostly happens when harem becomes a main focus of the story. My story's harem will just be a few girls who the MC goes through some kind of mind-blowing life and death situation, and after risking his life to see that they come out of the situation alive, they slowly start to develop feelings for him.No one is falling for him because of his looks, only his feat will define how other characters act towards him and sometimes his look as well ( but in a more negative way)The harem will progress along with the story, and there will be slight romance, but action and adventure are the story's main focus so you'll be seeing more of that than anything else.I hope this helps you along this amazing journey and I hope you enjoy it, and be sure to savor every moment of the MC's suffering.I hope you enjoy the story and make sure to support with everything you can.Please forgive my english. from your noob author.
This is the author here with another account. I lost my device and somehow forgot my account password so I'll be continuing the book on this account, be sure to check it out by next week. I'm really sorry for causing you all the trouble but if found the story that intriguing then feel free to swing by. That's not all though cause this time you'll get to enjoy the story along with the sequel and prequel although I'm not sure yet if that's a very good idea. Follow Illius, Harry, and Hyami on their journey as we rise to greatness. Thanks for reading.🙏🙏🙏