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Quick update review after the author changed some of the chapters order or made them into flashbacks, there are some spelling mistakes and wrong grammar it's not a lot by what I noticed and I think the author corrects them when noticed, there have been more updates and it's more consistent now which I'm grateful i was dying of curiosity! Now the story development is where the author improved a lot since I read before they updated to a new version! The changes were very good the pacing got so much better and the character development too. I can't wait to read more! Thank you author! You're doing a great job. [img=recommend]
Cool story! Many thanks to the author. The beginning is intriguing. It’s very interesting, will the story be told from the general’s point of view or from the princess’s point of view? I'm really looking forward to the continuation.
Originally I was going to rate this higher but it went from 13 chapters back to 2 without any warning from the author. If the author is reading this please let us know if you are going to remove chapters. As to the book itself I'm really enjoying it but I have a feeling that your synopsis made have put the goal of the story before the meat of the story itself. This is my opinion from the first 13 chapters before they were removed.
I'm loving the story so far, I'm very curious about how everything is going to lead to the arranged marriage and I know the authors has other novels as I read some of them as well but I hope this story keeps getting updated as well ❤️
A história é bem interessante apesar dos poucos capítulos, a escrita é muito boa para mim, já que leio em português então a tradução fica perfeita, recomendo ler também as outras histórias desse autor, são ótimas 👍🏼
I made this book in hopes I can make two girls fall in love again and mostly for my financial issues D: I hope everyone can love these girls the way that I do. I'm going to work hard continuing this book. Hope you enjoy, everyone.
Quick update review after the author changed some of the chapters order or made them into flashbacks, there are some spelling mistakes and wrong grammar it's not a lot by what I noticed and I think the author corrects them when noticed, there have been more updates and it's more consistent now which I'm grateful i was dying of curiosity! Now the story development is where the author improved a lot since I read before they updated to a new version! The changes were very good the pacing got so much better and the character development too. I can't wait to read more! Thank you author! You're doing a great job. [img=recommend]
Cool story! Many thanks to the author. The beginning is intriguing. It’s very interesting, will the story be told from the general’s point of view or from the princess’s point of view? I'm really looking forward to the continuation.
Originally I was going to rate this higher but it went from 13 chapters back to 2 without any warning from the author. If the author is reading this please let us know if you are going to remove chapters. As to the book itself I'm really enjoying it but I have a feeling that your synopsis made have put the goal of the story before the meat of the story itself. This is my opinion from the first 13 chapters before they were removed.
I'm loving the story so far, I'm very curious about how everything is going to lead to the arranged marriage and I know the authors has other novels as I read some of them as well but I hope this story keeps getting updated as well ❤️
A história é bem interessante apesar dos poucos capítulos, a escrita é muito boa para mim, já que leio em português então a tradução fica perfeita, recomendo ler também as outras histórias desse autor, são ótimas 👍🏼
I made this book in hopes I can make two girls fall in love again and mostly for my financial issues D: I hope everyone can love these girls the way that I do. I'm going to work hard continuing this book. Hope you enjoy, everyone.