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摘要
The Demon was sealed millennia's ago by the God of the Bible, deemed too dangerous to be left to wander the mortal realm. Even after the God died in the Great War, the seal held strong, the Demon continuing his forceful dream. But centuries passed and the seal started to weaken, until one day the shackles finally surrendered and broke apart. The day that the First Beast was unsealed once again, the deepest pits of Hell screamed in joy and Earth was blanketed in darkness.
"Where are you, old holy geezer?"
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Hello there. This is not exactly my first work, but I certainly hope that it will be far better than my previous attempts, hopefully unknown attempts.
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
By the order of the king, you are to receive a five star review so don't disappoint.
I quite like how this has been going so far 10 chapters in. Grammar is good. Story is a little on the slow side but its not bad. Overall a good story. Hope it stays so and continues. Good job author. 👍
卷 1
- 1 Imprisonment 8 months ago
- 2 Outside 8 months ago
- 3 Settling Down 8 months ago
- 4 Exploration 8 months ago
- 5 Magic 8 months ago
- 6 Worries 8 months ago
- 7 New Face 8 months ago
- 8 Stories of Unnatural 8 months ago
- 9 The Future 8 months ago
- 10 Unknown Path 8 months ago
- 11 Teaching the Young 7 months ago
- 12 The Problems 7 months ago
- 13 Fallen 7 months ago
- 14 Recovery 7 months ago
Frankly speaking it was boring. Idk if I wasted my time reading the 12 chapters released so far but at the moment it surely feels like I did. Writing Quality(4/5): I have a lot of complaints. But that's considering it is supposed to be a fanfic. When talking about an Original piece it's quite decent. Good grammar and a pretty tame vocabulary palette that doesn't overwhelm readers. And thankfully no AI generated jargon and flowery words. Story development (2/5): Because I don't feel like anything developed at all in the 12 chapters I read so far. I honestly see anything that I could classify as "development". Given the background of the MC the author tried to paint, his actual performance has been a let down. Still I quite like the idea of exploring the supernatural more. So there's that. Character design(3/5): Once again it's bad. But I'll keep a neutral view towards it for now. My first complaint would be that the MC is too weak. Then some weak MC lover would judge me and my entire family to the kingdom come because apparently strong MCs ruin every story. Although me wanting a strong MC comes purely from the expectations set by the synopsis and the prologue introduction chapter of the MC (and now he can't really live up to that expectation, which is disappointing). But weak MC lovers won't understand. Updating Stability(5/5): Because it doesn't really matter to me. Idk the author's schedule, since I binge read it, but so long the chapters are worth the wait, who cares if it takes a day more or 2. World background(4/5): As mentioned earlier in the Story development phase, I quite like the idea of the author expanding the supernatural side of the world. Exploring more and more. So, kudos. Overall(3.6/5): Once again the readability is good but overall it was boring for me. It could definitely change in the future as there's been only 12 chapters so far and the foundation hasn't been set yet. I'll probably revisit this after a month and update my review.