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I really like this Marvel novel of yours. May I please have this novel translated into my language?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buen fanfic me gusta como va yendo la historia y ya pero a wanda[img=update][img=update][img=update],..........................................
que necesidad tiene este autor de sacarle lo especial al protagonista haciendo que sus habilidades sean compartidas por los demás personajes?
i like spiderman so im biased. a nice read. if you like "the spider", this is the light hearted version of it. indeed, there are struggles beneath the smiling facade but as mc said, tell a lie enough times, it became a reality. if you like Spiderman but hate the 'parker's luck' where bad things keep happening to peter, this would fulfill your wish in more than one ways. oh yeah... not for anti harem sect and definitely not for anti lemon clan.
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Congrats you did basic character design. Unlike most authors u managed to get the reader to visualise the mc without having to just go off a vague description or no description at all. Well done author.
I really love this story it's all i wanted in a spider man fiction spider man is stronger[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
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At Ch 207. One of The best Spider-Man Fan-Fics I have ever read. I hope this have more than 1000 Chapters. Absolute love the story. How Felicia grew up from her traumas, how Peter helped MJ, Harry's Growth, And Peter Using his god-damn brain. Even tho he does not kill, he has shown that he is ready to break any rule for his loved ones. Honestly, My Biggest reason to like this novel is Peter Parker, He is Happy.[img=coins]
揭示劇透 one of the best............ .............................................................................................................................
This is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc?
Lame,he didn't kill,then what's even the purpose of him being a person who time travelled . He is just being another Peter Parker who just has a bit of future knowledge
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It's very good I enjoy reading it because of how much different it is from all the other Spider-Man ff. It does have the same origin with peters parents dying but that is all it has so many different things about it that it makes the ff more enjoyable at least to me so good work to the author and please keep writing.
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It's a super good Spiderman fanfiction. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. Reading it reminds me of reading some of the actual Spiderman comic books that I've read, too. The author definitely knows what they are doing. Keep up the great work.
To me it's a great story so far and there isn't anything I can get angry about. I like that spiderman is using his genius in creative ways and relying on others before the weight on his shoulders gets too heavy. Others may think he is too strong or always winning but I disagree sometimes he is prepared or he just trains. And I love that there is still so much story to build on. Thanks for the story and continue the great work 👍😁
after reading 140 chapters, I want to say that fan fiction is generally not bad, the author is good at building relationships between characters, and the world does not seem empty, even the main character is not too OP and has a positive morality. One of the disadvantages is that the main character contradicts himself. For example, he says that he will not kill anyone, while he is a genius, but he still decided to destroy the USSR, which still exists in his universe. Although such an intelligent person should have calculated all the consequences of this action. In our history, after the collapse of the USSR, many people died both from banditry and from two wars that provoked the collapse. That is, Peter decided not to kill a few people who are guilty of experimenting on humans, but instead to kill thousands of innocent people. That's pretty smart of him.
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The story itself is really good. I've read better ones, but it´s worth a try. What bothers me about the story is how much time is wasted during childhood. I'm on chapter 46 right now and Peter and Gwen are both only 15 years old. Personally, I'm not really interested in the backstory and it seems to me to drag on forever. There are also really stupid things in the story, like Peter and Gwen having to go to the toilet because they have to save someone. What's the point of police, fire departments and rescue services when teenage superheroes have to do everything?
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It is an incredible story full of cultural references and excellent quips. The flow is amazing, and the story progress real builds up. While harems are not my thing, I still like this makingof a spider family team, and honestly it's had to just stick to one of the girls. Having to choose a "best girl" is not a hill an author wants to die on.
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Great story along side character development . The interaction between character makes the story fun to read . The character of Peter is so in line with original that I sometimes forget it's an reincarnation story. Just make it that Peter uses the past life knowledge more often.
I really like this Marvel novel of yours. May I please have this novel translated into my language?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buen fanfic me gusta como va yendo la historia y ya pero a wanda[img=update][img=update][img=update],..........................................
que necesidad tiene este autor de sacarle lo especial al protagonista haciendo que sus habilidades sean compartidas por los demás personajes?
i like spiderman so im biased. a nice read. if you like "the spider", this is the light hearted version of it. indeed, there are struggles beneath the smiling facade but as mc said, tell a lie enough times, it became a reality. if you like Spiderman but hate the 'parker's luck' where bad things keep happening to peter, this would fulfill your wish in more than one ways. oh yeah... not for anti harem sect and definitely not for anti lemon clan.
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Congrats you did basic character design. Unlike most authors u managed to get the reader to visualise the mc without having to just go off a vague description or no description at all. Well done author.
I really love this story it's all i wanted in a spider man fiction spider man is stronger[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
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At Ch 207. One of The best Spider-Man Fan-Fics I have ever read. I hope this have more than 1000 Chapters. Absolute love the story. How Felicia grew up from her traumas, how Peter helped MJ, Harry's Growth, And Peter Using his god-damn brain. Even tho he does not kill, he has shown that he is ready to break any rule for his loved ones. Honestly, My Biggest reason to like this novel is Peter Parker, He is Happy.[img=coins]
揭示劇透 one of the best............ .............................................................................................................................
This is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc?
Lame,he didn't kill,then what's even the purpose of him being a person who time travelled . He is just being another Peter Parker who just has a bit of future knowledge
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It's very good I enjoy reading it because of how much different it is from all the other Spider-Man ff. It does have the same origin with peters parents dying but that is all it has so many different things about it that it makes the ff more enjoyable at least to me so good work to the author and please keep writing.
AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!!
It's a super good Spiderman fanfiction. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. Reading it reminds me of reading some of the actual Spiderman comic books that I've read, too. The author definitely knows what they are doing. Keep up the great work.
To me it's a great story so far and there isn't anything I can get angry about. I like that spiderman is using his genius in creative ways and relying on others before the weight on his shoulders gets too heavy. Others may think he is too strong or always winning but I disagree sometimes he is prepared or he just trains. And I love that there is still so much story to build on. Thanks for the story and continue the great work 👍😁
after reading 140 chapters, I want to say that fan fiction is generally not bad, the author is good at building relationships between characters, and the world does not seem empty, even the main character is not too OP and has a positive morality. One of the disadvantages is that the main character contradicts himself. For example, he says that he will not kill anyone, while he is a genius, but he still decided to destroy the USSR, which still exists in his universe. Although such an intelligent person should have calculated all the consequences of this action. In our history, after the collapse of the USSR, many people died both from banditry and from two wars that provoked the collapse. That is, Peter decided not to kill a few people who are guilty of experimenting on humans, but instead to kill thousands of innocent people. That's pretty smart of him.
揭示劇透 The story itself is really good. I've read better ones, but it´s worth a try. What bothers me about the story is how much time is wasted during childhood. I'm on chapter 46 right now and Peter and Gwen are both only 15 years old. Personally, I'm not really interested in the backstory and it seems to me to drag on forever. There are also really stupid things in the story, like Peter and Gwen having to go to the toilet because they have to save someone. What's the point of police, fire departments and rescue services when teenage superheroes have to do everything?
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It is an incredible story full of cultural references and excellent quips. The flow is amazing, and the story progress real builds up. While harems are not my thing, I still like this makingof a spider family team, and honestly it's had to just stick to one of the girls. Having to choose a "best girl" is not a hill an author wants to die on.
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Great story along side character development . The interaction between character makes the story fun to read . The character of Peter is so in line with original that I sometimes forget it's an reincarnation story. Just make it that Peter uses the past life knowledge more often.