Reviews of Inheriting a Lost Bloodline, My First Task is to have heirs?! by Yoru14 - Webnovel

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maxreader123next

as interesting as it is, it would have been better for the switch back to a 3rd person POV. for reading it in 1stP POV is like reading a diary or autobiography. i check the other chapters and their all the same. it ok if its to change perspective for a part/episode of the story chapter but definitely not entirely of the narrative plot. 2ndP POV might have been better though its less commonly used in novels.

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JordanHarlow

I usually don’t mind reading reverse harem but wouldn’t recommend this. Mostly because of the way the main character acts. I’m all for a flirty and bold MC but she acts like a man. She doesn’t seem to really care how the resonance thingy effects the the first ML. She ignore the fact that men feel it more than women and when she found out that the Ml was in a vunurable state she considers taking advantage of him knowing the implications this could have on him. Also the paragraphs were long as hell. This is just my personal opinion.

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Sharon_Anagotae

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Heba_Coul_way

That's so good, I was searching for novel of the same type so I'm happy with what I got here 🤭🤭🤭

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Dgirlblusky

hi ,I'm your partner for the sprint.i couldn't reach you on discord

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maja9126

it's good. I hope for regular updates. .

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queen_ovhearts

You're doing a great job [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

6mth
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bonnie0909766

i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further

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favour_omoregbe_4429

So amazing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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maxreader123next

as interesting as it is, it would have been better for the switch back to a 3rd person POV. for reading it in 1stP POV is like reading a diary or autobiography. i check the other chapters and their all the same. it ok if its to change perspective for a part/episode of the story chapter but definitely not entirely of the narrative plot. 2ndP POV might have been better though its less commonly used in novels.

2h
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JordanHarlow

I usually don’t mind reading reverse harem but wouldn’t recommend this. Mostly because of the way the main character acts. I’m all for a flirty and bold MC but she acts like a man. She doesn’t seem to really care how the resonance thingy effects the the first ML. She ignore the fact that men feel it more than women and when she found out that the Ml was in a vunurable state she considers taking advantage of him knowing the implications this could have on him. Also the paragraphs were long as hell. This is just my personal opinion.

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2mth
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Sharon_Anagotae

I lost about $545,000 USDT to a fake MT5 trading platform few months back after I got lured into the trading platform with an intent of earning 5% profit daily trading on the platform. This period was a hell of a time for me as I could hardly pay my bills and get my feeding routine done. I had to confide in my close friend who then introduced me to the best crypto recovery team with the best recovery software at ASSETSRECLAIM (@)Gmail C0m. WHATSAPP +1 (603) 702 ( 4335 ) I contacted them and they were able to completely recover my stolen digital assets with ease using their tech prowess. It was indeed an amazing service, this will forever be the best service I got on the internet. I strongly recommend this team to anyone going through similar situation with their investment or fund theft to speedily lookup this team for the best appropriate solution so as to avoid getting burnt by other fake recovery agents. Send your complaint now!!!

3mth
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Heba_Coul_way

That's so good, I was searching for novel of the same type so I'm happy with what I got here 🤭🤭🤭

4mth
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Dgirlblusky

hi ,I'm your partner for the sprint.i couldn't reach you on discord

4mth
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maja9126

it's good. I hope for regular updates. .

6mth
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queen_ovhearts

You're doing a great job [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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bonnie0909766

i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further

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favour_omoregbe_4429

So amazing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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