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I enjoy this book. It's simply unique in the way it presents the story, especially as a Danmachi Fanfic. Although one criticism would be that the writing is reliant on a lot of descriptions surrounding emotions so sometimes I'm lost, especially at the beginning as to what is happening and where the character is located. Overall, it's an engaging story and very unique to other danmachi fanfics i've read.
I enjoy this book. It's simply unique in the way it presents the story, especially as a Danmachi Fanfic. Although one criticism would be that the writing is reliant on a lot of descriptions surrounding emotions so sometimes I'm lost, especially at the beginning as to what is happening and where the character is located. Overall, it's an engaging story and very unique to other danmachi fanfics i've read.