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寫檢討
this is not rimuru in marvel, this is someone with rimurus looks and some of his abilities as a human, most of his abilities got taken away/nerfed, she doesnt act like rimuru because she is a human/slime hybrid and for some reason she new about marvel then the "god" that put her into the universe started taking her memories, this was a good idea but very badly done
It seems like an alright fanfic; the only problem I found was Rimuru being a girl. though to each there own. . . . . . . . bruh why did they add a word count.
this is not rimuru in marvel, this is someone with rimurus looks and some of his abilities as a human, most of his abilities got taken away/nerfed, she doesnt act like rimuru because she is a human/slime hybrid and for some reason she new about marvel then the "god" that put her into the universe started taking her memories, this was a good idea but very badly done
It seems like an alright fanfic; the only problem I found was Rimuru being a girl. though to each there own. . . . . . . . bruh why did they add a word count.
Its alright. Keep going. You can do it. K