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This is not a proper review, just want to ask a question will write one if this ff is for me. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan?
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!! I like it!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translate.. I like the idea of Gluttony seal (can absorb his enemy soul and any seal), it make the MC strong (not from the start), but he must beat stronger enemy if he want to be more stronger.. I like he help Hotaru, Anko, Karin (although for his benefit),, he still kind enough.. I don't mind a harem, but please not too much (no to "he take all beautiful women").. And please no Sakura, Ino, and Hinata to his harem.. Tenten and Shizune is ok, maybe Kurenai and Yugao too 🤔🤔 It will be so much different story with MC/Kuzo kill Orochimaru and Kabuto from this early.. I can't wait to see he kill Danzo as soon as posible (he's the top must kill list for me.. His evil deeds can't be forgiven : He help Hanzo kill Yahiko, he kill Shisui and make Itachi kill all his clan/Uchiha genocide, I'm sure he's the one responsible for Sakumo suicide, spread Naruto secret as jinchuriki Kyubi, etc.. So he must be dead as soon as posible) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍
the writing quality is pretty good, and the updates are also good, but the character/mc is based around is absolutely trash to the point, making him better as character development just dosent help
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if i don't see a jjk fic by the end of the week your FIRED jkjk but this is gonna be good enjoy it its got top notch writing and has quite good diallage and thats kinda all u need
I almost gave up on the story because I was a bit prejudiced in the first three chapters, but my curiosity prevailed and I continued. I'm glad I continued because the story started to get very gripping.This author somehow manages to create a situation in his stories that will leave the reader in conflict, but if I leave my personal tastes aside, I think the story is of very high quality. I'm off to the Chainsawman fanfiction from here~
brother you hurt me with this , you make a new masterpiece and forget to invite us in the chainsaws man fic, I only found this by accident looking at your profile, عيب عليك مفكرتناش
Knowing the author I will give this fanfic a five-star review since the quality is all about guaranteed, I will just cross my fingers and hope he will finish this one and not drop it in the middle like he did to some of his other work. Good luck!!
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There was a portly marine mammal called Mr. Moe who terrorized humans with his fear of the deepfakes. But the one thing that he really loved was bears, because bears had the greatest love of all natural animals and even Jesus himself. But the one thing that he loved even more than bears was the shark because the shark loved even more than Jesus himself. His physical size was quite literally the biggest. He was approximately fourteen foot tall and weighed around eighteen pounds. In his prime he terrorized poodle enthusiasts. He was known to be quite physically active. His spats were quite a spurt as he grew older. They spurt a lot, spurt a lot. He’d spurt a lot, spurt a lot. It was said that he only spurt when he had squirrel spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt… spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurtspurt Spurtspurt Spurtspurt SPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPurspin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin… Spin Spin Spinspin spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin spin spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin turn [SINGLE EYE]
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I was disappointed by the lack of gluttony. And it could have been more clear from the start his powerset was going to be soul-collecting and not eating related. The draw aside it's a bit meh. Could've been something with the Shinobi family he was born into, but it's clear the author isn't giving that directed focus. (If the author was just going slow developing towards these things let me know.)
揭示劇透As soon as I saw who the author was, I immediately downloaded it and I was not disappointed at all, the story is pretty good and I like the MC'S character and so far(chapter 9) I think he's gaining power at an okay rate
Sooo does this novel have lemons this time? Come on man… ⠀⠀⠀⢀⡴⠋⠉⢉⠍⣉⡉⠉⠉⠉⠓⠲⠶⠤⣄⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⢀⠎⠀⠪⠾⢊⣁⣀⡀⠄⠀⠀⡌⠉⠁⠄⠀⢳ ⠀⣰⠟⣢⣤⣐⠘⠛⣻⠻⠭⠇⠀⢤⡶⠟⠛⠂⠀⢌⢷⡀ ⢸⢈⢸⠠⡶⠬⣉⡉⠁⠀⣠⢄⡀⠀⠳⣄⠑⠚⣏⠁⣪⠇ ⠀⢯⡊⠀⠹⡦⣼⣍⠛⢲⠯⢭⣁⣲⣚⣁⣬⢾⢿⠈⡜⠀ ⠀⠀⠙⡄⠀⠘⢾⡉⠙⡟⠶⢶⣿⣶⣿⣶⣿⣾⣿⠀⡇ ⠀⠀⠀⠙⢦⣤⡠⡙⠲⠧⠀⣠⣇⣨⣏⣽⡹⠽⠏⠀⡇ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠙⠦⢕⡋⠶⠄⣤⠤⠤⠤⠤⠂⡠⠀⡇ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠑⠒⠦⠤⣄⣀⣀⣀⣠⠔⠁
I love this novel please don't leave that novels wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow
will this fanfic continue i really liked it but it's been a long while since it's been updated. ............
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This is not a proper review, just want to ask a question will write one if this ff is for me. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan?
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!! I like it!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translate.. I like the idea of Gluttony seal (can absorb his enemy soul and any seal), it make the MC strong (not from the start), but he must beat stronger enemy if he want to be more stronger.. I like he help Hotaru, Anko, Karin (although for his benefit),, he still kind enough.. I don't mind a harem, but please not too much (no to "he take all beautiful women").. And please no Sakura, Ino, and Hinata to his harem.. Tenten and Shizune is ok, maybe Kurenai and Yugao too 🤔🤔 It will be so much different story with MC/Kuzo kill Orochimaru and Kabuto from this early.. I can't wait to see he kill Danzo as soon as posible (he's the top must kill list for me.. His evil deeds can't be forgiven : He help Hanzo kill Yahiko, he kill Shisui and make Itachi kill all his clan/Uchiha genocide, I'm sure he's the one responsible for Sakumo suicide, spread Naruto secret as jinchuriki Kyubi, etc.. So he must be dead as soon as posible) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍
the writing quality is pretty good, and the updates are also good, but the character/mc is based around is absolutely trash to the point, making him better as character development just dosent help
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if i don't see a jjk fic by the end of the week your FIRED jkjk but this is gonna be good enjoy it its got top notch writing and has quite good diallage and thats kinda all u need
I almost gave up on the story because I was a bit prejudiced in the first three chapters, but my curiosity prevailed and I continued. I'm glad I continued because the story started to get very gripping.This author somehow manages to create a situation in his stories that will leave the reader in conflict, but if I leave my personal tastes aside, I think the story is of very high quality. I'm off to the Chainsawman fanfiction from here~
brother you hurt me with this , you make a new masterpiece and forget to invite us in the chainsaws man fic, I only found this by accident looking at your profile, عيب عليك مفكرتناش
Knowing the author I will give this fanfic a five-star review since the quality is all about guaranteed, I will just cross my fingers and hope he will finish this one and not drop it in the middle like he did to some of his other work. Good luck!!
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There was a portly marine mammal called Mr. Moe who terrorized humans with his fear of the deepfakes. But the one thing that he really loved was bears, because bears had the greatest love of all natural animals and even Jesus himself. But the one thing that he loved even more than bears was the shark because the shark loved even more than Jesus himself. His physical size was quite literally the biggest. He was approximately fourteen foot tall and weighed around eighteen pounds. In his prime he terrorized poodle enthusiasts. He was known to be quite physically active. His spats were quite a spurt as he grew older. They spurt a lot, spurt a lot. He’d spurt a lot, spurt a lot. It was said that he only spurt when he had squirrel spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt… spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt spurt spurt Spurt spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurt Spurtspurt Spurtspurt Spurtspurt SPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPURSPurspin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin… Spin Spin Spinspin spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin spin spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin Spin turn [SINGLE EYE]
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I was disappointed by the lack of gluttony. And it could have been more clear from the start his powerset was going to be soul-collecting and not eating related. The draw aside it's a bit meh. Could've been something with the Shinobi family he was born into, but it's clear the author isn't giving that directed focus. (If the author was just going slow developing towards these things let me know.)
揭示劇透As soon as I saw who the author was, I immediately downloaded it and I was not disappointed at all, the story is pretty good and I like the MC'S character and so far(chapter 9) I think he's gaining power at an okay rate
Sooo does this novel have lemons this time? Come on man… ⠀⠀⠀⢀⡴⠋⠉⢉⠍⣉⡉⠉⠉⠉⠓⠲⠶⠤⣄⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⢀⠎⠀⠪⠾⢊⣁⣀⡀⠄⠀⠀⡌⠉⠁⠄⠀⢳ ⠀⣰⠟⣢⣤⣐⠘⠛⣻⠻⠭⠇⠀⢤⡶⠟⠛⠂⠀⢌⢷⡀ ⢸⢈⢸⠠⡶⠬⣉⡉⠁⠀⣠⢄⡀⠀⠳⣄⠑⠚⣏⠁⣪⠇ ⠀⢯⡊⠀⠹⡦⣼⣍⠛⢲⠯⢭⣁⣲⣚⣁⣬⢾⢿⠈⡜⠀ ⠀⠀⠙⡄⠀⠘⢾⡉⠙⡟⠶⢶⣿⣶⣿⣶⣿⣾⣿⠀⡇ ⠀⠀⠀⠙⢦⣤⡠⡙⠲⠧⠀⣠⣇⣨⣏⣽⡹⠽⠏⠀⡇ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠙⠦⢕⡋⠶⠄⣤⠤⠤⠤⠤⠂⡠⠀⡇ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠑⠒⠦⠤⣄⣀⣀⣀⣠⠔⠁
I love this novel please don't leave that novels wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow
will this fanfic continue i really liked it but it's been a long while since it's been updated. ............