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- 人物形象設計
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Muito bom, gostei do sistema de risco e recompensa,um ponto acertado por na maioria das fic o MC fica forte muito rápido,espero atualização mais rápido, Obrigada
Very good story, the MC is logical but at times his desperation clouds his judgment which gives him more depth. The system is implemented in a reward-based way. Very good story so far (chapter 3)
MC is brain dead or something, he willingly became a slave just because he has a fast metobalism and he gets hungry more quickly, and he got happy seing the dothraki bc Daenerys was going to be with them or something???
Yes! I like this type of system that rewards actions instead of giving everything to the mc! Risk and reward! Not at all some who solely relays on system, this type of system would either kill the mc or make him stronger! Balls and wits!
j'ai depuis longtemps voulu une fanfiction Drogo avec un réincarné, j'espère que le mc prendra pour lui Daeneris et Missandei ! Pitié n'abandonner pas
Muito bom, gostei do sistema de risco e recompensa,um ponto acertado por na maioria das fic o MC fica forte muito rápido,espero atualização mais rápido, Obrigada
Very good story, the MC is logical but at times his desperation clouds his judgment which gives him more depth. The system is implemented in a reward-based way. Very good story so far (chapter 3)
MC is brain dead or something, he willingly became a slave just because he has a fast metobalism and he gets hungry more quickly, and he got happy seing the dothraki bc Daenerys was going to be with them or something???
Yes! I like this type of system that rewards actions instead of giving everything to the mc! Risk and reward! Not at all some who solely relays on system, this type of system would either kill the mc or make him stronger! Balls and wits!
j'ai depuis longtemps voulu une fanfiction Drogo avec un réincarné, j'espère que le mc prendra pour lui Daeneris et Missandei ! Pitié n'abandonner pas