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The story Is Funny and If you came here in depression, this can definitely make you 100% stand straight and make you go on and on. Evil_Dao, What a Man!! The story is good and you seemed to be experienced like a lot!!! Lucky Bro, to enjoy such a life in reality which you have written in novel. Not many could experience such a thing in their life!! I heard that AIDS treatment requires some money ranging around 20 to 30 Grand. No matter, what happens to you, you are the Earth's 21st Generation Harem King in the hearts of the readers. I saw your castles BTW!!! Even I feel like burning money right now! Gonna burn a few grands today all for the process of ********. (Cough, Cough, I think everyone can understand, what I mean!) 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈
Overall good book but feel like around chapter 90-115 a bunch of new characters/skills get added to story and new skills to the MC that could use more explaining because it gets confusing. Maybe I’m missing something but I got confused there. Other than that great book!
My only real criticism is that it ended a little abruptly, I felt it had and could have gone on longer. But I enjoyed the writing and end, justs wish i could of learned more of this writer's wonderful world. Also, some nice hussies...
Great story, well developed characters, and a very creative power system that makes this story stand out from many other works I've read.
the novel's extremely good, but I have one problem with the novel and, it's the fact that the mc faces no real problems and that's a problem with all the author's other novel too no real challenges. for example if something unexpected happens the mc either handles right away with no difficulty or just straight up don't care and another problem is the fact that every character in the novel is either extremely beautiful or extremely handsome the is no average looking characters in there are old looking characters in the novel but that's just some 1 billion year old guy that doesn't care about his looks but if the guy wants to he can also look extremely handsome if he wants. and that's in like every novel for the author but with all that said and done I still very much like the novel.
Great for the mens of culture Its quite good to read, i like the flow of the story one of the better novels i have read
But what if he's surrounded by 5 big black men? Is it really a good thing to be reborn as an aphrodisiac? I think it's literally the worst thing that can happen to you.
I have a question! I wrote a book with ¡ncest in it and guidelines say it is against the rule. I just want to know: can I get a contract with it? Please do tell me!! As for your book, is there a need to say anything? It's great as it is...
SPOILER ! READ OR REGRET NOT TOUCHING IT!!! i like big harem......which is here i hate yuri.........which is not here i like win CEST. .....which is here i like ruthless mc ...which is here i like good plot...... which is here i like romance ......which is here i like good character development ........which is here so I Dont need any more reasons to give 4.8 stars just chapters release rate is slow 😞🦥🦥🦥
Author I really like your book. The story is creative, it has enough lemons while Stile having a funny story line. So Prost for that! But I also notice that you implement new ideas into the story without checking if these are consistent with the already written story. Like who the MCs and his Sisters parents are. There are a lot of holes once this gets revealed.
only read till chapter 18 and this is a good dgen novel. I will be real with you, if Evil dao wasn't spamming gachapon at this novel, wouldn't even have consider reading this but this one was pretty solid.
Exactly my type of book. Till now there has been no issues for me the MC is great too and i believe in author to make the story even more interesting. Loved the first vol. I rarely give any reviews but i felt like this one deserved the praise. Keep doing the good work author and people of culture are with you all the way.
Amazing work, filled with lots of love and potential and must read for all gentlemen in this app. Nobody will regret reading it. May this novel last for a very good while.
The synopsis sounds good but I have a question, what secret is the MC hiding? What can grant immortality with its organs? What's wrong with that? Just live normally and no one will want to eat your organs, It sounds like a forced plot if someone wants to eat your organs when it's not a world of cannibals or a world of zombies, No one alive wants to eat your organs brother, don't force the plot, I haven't read this yet, I'm only commenting on it because it's ridiculous.
It's good, with a unique power system, a new and different story. I find the pace of the story to my liking. In simple words, it's a gem 💎.
The story seems to be moving really fast, other than that 5/5. The characters are great and the combat scenes are really good. And of course the most important part, the lemons are also pretty good.
A novel for degenerates for sure, its really good, he mc is pretty cool and story is great too
WARNING : HIGH LEVELS OF CULTURE This is one of the most amazing books I have the plea sure to read. Awesome girls, interesting world building, unique cultivation powers and tiers...And oh at last MC. You will love him from the start. Writing quality is superb, its not author's first rodeo so you can be sure of this work's quality and abiliti to grab your attention. Story development, its not a slog fest with 5 chapters of carriage ride or 1 volume worth tournaments. Its not too fast paced either, more like you read getting all needed informations and the flow feels natural. You will run out of chapters very soon, thats the worst part here. Character desing is unique and with deep background. I can clown with culture and the rest, but harem building is not rushed at all. Everyone have thier goals and backstory - wait till you learn about mc's dream haha. Relations dont feel forced and at the same time not a lot of cliche... How to say it, some of them are natural in a crazy man's world. Its awesome and fun, thats the gist of it. Update stability, the usual here. 1 or 2 chaps a day. Im sure author can pump them daily as he does right now. Give this books some love and support and I dont see hum stopping. World background, its weird in the best description of that world. Do you like sect's or big ancient families? How about theocracies with priests and pristess willing to do anything for their Gods...even betraying them... Lots of potential there. We are still very early in the story, so we have only part of knowlegde anout the whole setup. There is some info about the power stucture at the end of Vol 1, but I ll spare you the spoilers. Now important stuff. IF you read the synopsis you know its a cultured work without yuri and ntr. Dont worry about leaving mc's girls afther some fun, till this point mc "cares" about all of them. Well we have some good girls and bad girls... The "care" looks the same in both, but one gets it way more intense...😎. If you guys just found about this book, give it a go and drop some support here. Im giving you my word it is worth it for sure, and I know something about culture! Mommy and sister is hot AF....
The story Is Funny and If you came here in depression, this can definitely make you 100% stand straight and make you go on and on. Evil_Dao, What a Man!! The story is good and you seemed to be experienced like a lot!!! Lucky Bro, to enjoy such a life in reality which you have written in novel. Not many could experience such a thing in their life!! I heard that AIDS treatment requires some money ranging around 20 to 30 Grand. No matter, what happens to you, you are the Earth's 21st Generation Harem King in the hearts of the readers. I saw your castles BTW!!! Even I feel like burning money right now! Gonna burn a few grands today all for the process of ********. (Cough, Cough, I think everyone can understand, what I mean!) 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈
Overall good book but feel like around chapter 90-115 a bunch of new characters/skills get added to story and new skills to the MC that could use more explaining because it gets confusing. Maybe I’m missing something but I got confused there. Other than that great book!
My only real criticism is that it ended a little abruptly, I felt it had and could have gone on longer. But I enjoyed the writing and end, justs wish i could of learned more of this writer's wonderful world. Also, some nice hussies...
Great story, well developed characters, and a very creative power system that makes this story stand out from many other works I've read.
the novel's extremely good, but I have one problem with the novel and, it's the fact that the mc faces no real problems and that's a problem with all the author's other novel too no real challenges. for example if something unexpected happens the mc either handles right away with no difficulty or just straight up don't care and another problem is the fact that every character in the novel is either extremely beautiful or extremely handsome the is no average looking characters in there are old looking characters in the novel but that's just some 1 billion year old guy that doesn't care about his looks but if the guy wants to he can also look extremely handsome if he wants. and that's in like every novel for the author but with all that said and done I still very much like the novel.
Great for the mens of culture Its quite good to read, i like the flow of the story one of the better novels i have read
But what if he's surrounded by 5 big black men? Is it really a good thing to be reborn as an aphrodisiac? I think it's literally the worst thing that can happen to you.
I have a question! I wrote a book with ¡ncest in it and guidelines say it is against the rule. I just want to know: can I get a contract with it? Please do tell me!! As for your book, is there a need to say anything? It's great as it is...
SPOILER ! READ OR REGRET NOT TOUCHING IT!!! i like big harem......which is here i hate yuri.........which is not here i like win CEST. .....which is here i like ruthless mc ...which is here i like good plot...... which is here i like romance ......which is here i like good character development ........which is here so I Dont need any more reasons to give 4.8 stars just chapters release rate is slow 😞🦥🦥🦥
Author I really like your book. The story is creative, it has enough lemons while Stile having a funny story line. So Prost for that! But I also notice that you implement new ideas into the story without checking if these are consistent with the already written story. Like who the MCs and his Sisters parents are. There are a lot of holes once this gets revealed.
only read till chapter 18 and this is a good dgen novel. I will be real with you, if Evil dao wasn't spamming gachapon at this novel, wouldn't even have consider reading this but this one was pretty solid.
Exactly my type of book. Till now there has been no issues for me the MC is great too and i believe in author to make the story even more interesting. Loved the first vol. I rarely give any reviews but i felt like this one deserved the praise. Keep doing the good work author and people of culture are with you all the way.
Amazing work, filled with lots of love and potential and must read for all gentlemen in this app. Nobody will regret reading it. May this novel last for a very good while.
The synopsis sounds good but I have a question, what secret is the MC hiding? What can grant immortality with its organs? What's wrong with that? Just live normally and no one will want to eat your organs, It sounds like a forced plot if someone wants to eat your organs when it's not a world of cannibals or a world of zombies, No one alive wants to eat your organs brother, don't force the plot, I haven't read this yet, I'm only commenting on it because it's ridiculous.
It's good, with a unique power system, a new and different story. I find the pace of the story to my liking. In simple words, it's a gem 💎.
The story seems to be moving really fast, other than that 5/5. The characters are great and the combat scenes are really good. And of course the most important part, the lemons are also pretty good.
A novel for degenerates for sure, its really good, he mc is pretty cool and story is great too
WARNING : HIGH LEVELS OF CULTURE This is one of the most amazing books I have the plea sure to read. Awesome girls, interesting world building, unique cultivation powers and tiers...And oh at last MC. You will love him from the start. Writing quality is superb, its not author's first rodeo so you can be sure of this work's quality and abiliti to grab your attention. Story development, its not a slog fest with 5 chapters of carriage ride or 1 volume worth tournaments. Its not too fast paced either, more like you read getting all needed informations and the flow feels natural. You will run out of chapters very soon, thats the worst part here. Character desing is unique and with deep background. I can clown with culture and the rest, but harem building is not rushed at all. Everyone have thier goals and backstory - wait till you learn about mc's dream haha. Relations dont feel forced and at the same time not a lot of cliche... How to say it, some of them are natural in a crazy man's world. Its awesome and fun, thats the gist of it. Update stability, the usual here. 1 or 2 chaps a day. Im sure author can pump them daily as he does right now. Give this books some love and support and I dont see hum stopping. World background, its weird in the best description of that world. Do you like sect's or big ancient families? How about theocracies with priests and pristess willing to do anything for their Gods...even betraying them... Lots of potential there. We are still very early in the story, so we have only part of knowlegde anout the whole setup. There is some info about the power stucture at the end of Vol 1, but I ll spare you the spoilers. Now important stuff. IF you read the synopsis you know its a cultured work without yuri and ntr. Dont worry about leaving mc's girls afther some fun, till this point mc "cares" about all of them. Well we have some good girls and bad girls... The "care" looks the same in both, but one gets it way more intense...😎. If you guys just found about this book, give it a go and drop some support here. Im giving you my word it is worth it for sure, and I know something about culture! Mommy and sister is hot AF....