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One of the few mtl that has so many free chapters. I don’t understand how Webnovel can charge money for machine translations. Wrong words, sentences/paragraphs/scenes cut out.There are plenty of translators out there, hire them. It is extremely frustrating to be asked to pay real money for incomplete content. Smh, do better Webnovel
Updates stopped in the beginning of March 2024 on chapter 287. Check if there is more updates before you start reading. I liked story 😔
Amazing story from male point of view. A rare romance and business management novel which does not have harem or annoying charecters who feel forced. Realistic and refreshing. 9/10 would reccomend
Loving it!! The story, Characters and the developement is quite interesting and lovely. A must read if you are bored with Harem and OP and want to read a slow paced slice-of-life kinda story.
Tier 5 simp right here bro failed at simping the first time and did it again
I did read with my brain turned off. Meh, honestly the entire slight 'pedo' idealism ruined it for me. (because the male lead goes back to the past and keeps sniffing the young fl's 'sweet youthful scent') Translation's decent, could be better. Very Shallow but "cute" interactions between main leads, good for braindead reading.
awesome.[img=Feeling it] some of the best romance novel. really love the main leads. wholesome [img=More pls][img=Loving it] there is charecter development for fmc too.[img=Smug]
Standard reincarnated MC who had died after being cucked by his female LI. Reborn into his 18yr old self he immediately cuts off his original LI and chooses the future Miss rich billionaire from his class so she can provide for him. Standard development since he knows the future, he takes the opportunity to invest and grow to earn money fast and furious. Becomes a novelist by plagarising future novels and releases those stories on the web as his own to make money as well. It is an interesting read, tho the MC is rather abusive to his original LI which I do find abhorrent as technically she has done no wrong at that point in time and he was a pathetic little simp to her originally. I just feel he could have handled the breakup with this girl in a better manner, but no he straight up abuses and demeans her at every opportunity he gets when he comes across her. I understand he has a lot of negativity from his future self, yet he has not the emotional maturity to consider his actions. Future LI became a rich CEO lady and now current time future LI becomes an actress to try and get his attention again. Yet somehow the MC doesn’t realise he has changed the timeline and everything that had happened to him, now never did eventuate. Yeh, he is now just a manipulative guy turning everything to his betterment. (Which I imagine anyone would do if they were in his shoes, though I’d hope they be more in control of themselves) Now my main gripe with this novel is that many chapters are shortened. You get half a chapter and the rest are lost so you lose the flow when you go to the next chapter. It being a free read you could overlook it “maybe” but it is particularly nasty/interesting when something happens and then go to the new chapter and you have no idea what just happened? So this is probably a major issue that needs fixing. But anyways, it is a good read for the most part if you can ignore the issues mentioned. Is still scored it high as it does tick all the boxes for the review.
i don't how can someone become licking like protagonist [img=Speechless][img=Speechless]
For the genre its a masterpiece! MC is smart and intelligent after he reincarnates. He uses what he learned and executes plans to make up for being stupid in the past. FML is adorable and their relationship grows and becomes better over time MC and FML talk things through, confide in each other and dont let misunderstandings happen. Other novels make misunderstandings but not here,they both talk it out and support each other. What sucks is that there arent other novels like this with Male lead as the point of view. The ones which have it have stupid systems with 10,000 times return and are pretty idiotic. There is no system here so its more realistic and not absurd.
first time reading a ROMANCE novel.... .. now I wonder why did I stay away from this genre_ this is really good.
The author get a great job. Love the humor in the book. Especially when describing how one gets paid for writing books.
Quite a lovely story. I love the easy going romance vibes it gives. The female lead is just too cute and shy 🤗and I simply love the mc's character development. Very nice read, I recommend it to all
Great book love the novel but so far seems two chaqpters are missing there content chap 67 and 72 so far but otherwise worth a read.
i like this storyline . sweet, slow and steady. this ML character is mischievous but sweet. Recommended to everyone to read it
I really like this story so far. Really funny. It's a nice change that the romance is written from a boy's perspective.
This is the sweetest story I have read in the recent times. And honestly I'll recommend it to everybody as I have read it till chapter 58 and still want the translator to upload more so that I can enjoy this cute story. And while the ML does have a brilliant mind which is a good thing but him not really behaving like 30 year old is a very big plus one from me. And while it does look like he is grooming that girl but if you see their interaction and judge them all accordingly than you'll find that's not the case here. And he just wants his future to be bright. And the only thing I didn't like about this book was it's story devlopment speed cause the plots are progressing too slowly.
i love it, the mc isn't a perfect guy. although i love our fmc more, she's so lovable
‼️This novel even though it is a bit generic still has a clear distinction from its counterparts giving it a fresh feel . ‼️In conclusion a good read for someone who is bored or wants to pass time.(❕writer bro I hope u keep up the good work 👍🏼❕)
I like it so far but is chapter 48 and 49 supposed to be only 6 pages long and on top of that if so when the next chapter starts it so confusing i mean i can some what pick it up but i would like to know more
The translation is good, the plot less so. This reads as a story of an unlikable older bully who grooms a younger girl into being his exact perfect girl, whether she is conscious about it or not. The final straw for me was when another guy became interested in her randomly and he started beating him without warning, then basically said no one would believe you over me because I'm so perfect. The girl he was obsessed with before traveling back in time, who he rejected in the new timeline is so stereotypically self absorbed as to be seen as dumb enough to not be able to breathe and walk at the same time. There is no character development until the dumb one finally decides he's not coming back to her, and instead of chasing him (again) she stops because she realizes she lost him for good. Don't know what chapter I got up to. The translation is good. That's about all it has going for it.
I liked this story very much in the beginning and loved to read, but even after 900 chapters the story goes nowhere. Its just the repitation of the same things again and again.. making money, having lots of girls fancing the male lead as if no one exists in the world.. If u have free passes read it, else waste of money
One of the few mtl that has so many free chapters. I don’t understand how Webnovel can charge money for machine translations. Wrong words, sentences/paragraphs/scenes cut out.There are plenty of translators out there, hire them. It is extremely frustrating to be asked to pay real money for incomplete content. Smh, do better Webnovel
Updates stopped in the beginning of March 2024 on chapter 287. Check if there is more updates before you start reading. I liked story 😔
Amazing story from male point of view. A rare romance and business management novel which does not have harem or annoying charecters who feel forced. Realistic and refreshing. 9/10 would reccomend
Loving it!! The story, Characters and the developement is quite interesting and lovely. A must read if you are bored with Harem and OP and want to read a slow paced slice-of-life kinda story.
Tier 5 simp right here bro failed at simping the first time and did it again
I did read with my brain turned off. Meh, honestly the entire slight 'pedo' idealism ruined it for me. (because the male lead goes back to the past and keeps sniffing the young fl's 'sweet youthful scent') Translation's decent, could be better. Very Shallow but "cute" interactions between main leads, good for braindead reading.
awesome.[img=Feeling it] some of the best romance novel. really love the main leads. wholesome [img=More pls][img=Loving it] there is charecter development for fmc too.[img=Smug]
Standard reincarnated MC who had died after being cucked by his female LI. Reborn into his 18yr old self he immediately cuts off his original LI and chooses the future Miss rich billionaire from his class so she can provide for him. Standard development since he knows the future, he takes the opportunity to invest and grow to earn money fast and furious. Becomes a novelist by plagarising future novels and releases those stories on the web as his own to make money as well. It is an interesting read, tho the MC is rather abusive to his original LI which I do find abhorrent as technically she has done no wrong at that point in time and he was a pathetic little simp to her originally. I just feel he could have handled the breakup with this girl in a better manner, but no he straight up abuses and demeans her at every opportunity he gets when he comes across her. I understand he has a lot of negativity from his future self, yet he has not the emotional maturity to consider his actions. Future LI became a rich CEO lady and now current time future LI becomes an actress to try and get his attention again. Yet somehow the MC doesn’t realise he has changed the timeline and everything that had happened to him, now never did eventuate. Yeh, he is now just a manipulative guy turning everything to his betterment. (Which I imagine anyone would do if they were in his shoes, though I’d hope they be more in control of themselves) Now my main gripe with this novel is that many chapters are shortened. You get half a chapter and the rest are lost so you lose the flow when you go to the next chapter. It being a free read you could overlook it “maybe” but it is particularly nasty/interesting when something happens and then go to the new chapter and you have no idea what just happened? So this is probably a major issue that needs fixing. But anyways, it is a good read for the most part if you can ignore the issues mentioned. Is still scored it high as it does tick all the boxes for the review.
i don't how can someone become licking like protagonist [img=Speechless][img=Speechless]
For the genre its a masterpiece! MC is smart and intelligent after he reincarnates. He uses what he learned and executes plans to make up for being stupid in the past. FML is adorable and their relationship grows and becomes better over time MC and FML talk things through, confide in each other and dont let misunderstandings happen. Other novels make misunderstandings but not here,they both talk it out and support each other. What sucks is that there arent other novels like this with Male lead as the point of view. The ones which have it have stupid systems with 10,000 times return and are pretty idiotic. There is no system here so its more realistic and not absurd.
first time reading a ROMANCE novel.... .. now I wonder why did I stay away from this genre_ this is really good.
The author get a great job. Love the humor in the book. Especially when describing how one gets paid for writing books.
Quite a lovely story. I love the easy going romance vibes it gives. The female lead is just too cute and shy 🤗and I simply love the mc's character development. Very nice read, I recommend it to all
Great book love the novel but so far seems two chaqpters are missing there content chap 67 and 72 so far but otherwise worth a read.
i like this storyline . sweet, slow and steady. this ML character is mischievous but sweet. Recommended to everyone to read it
I really like this story so far. Really funny. It's a nice change that the romance is written from a boy's perspective.
This is the sweetest story I have read in the recent times. And honestly I'll recommend it to everybody as I have read it till chapter 58 and still want the translator to upload more so that I can enjoy this cute story. And while the ML does have a brilliant mind which is a good thing but him not really behaving like 30 year old is a very big plus one from me. And while it does look like he is grooming that girl but if you see their interaction and judge them all accordingly than you'll find that's not the case here. And he just wants his future to be bright. And the only thing I didn't like about this book was it's story devlopment speed cause the plots are progressing too slowly.
i love it, the mc isn't a perfect guy. although i love our fmc more, she's so lovable
‼️This novel even though it is a bit generic still has a clear distinction from its counterparts giving it a fresh feel . ‼️In conclusion a good read for someone who is bored or wants to pass time.(❕writer bro I hope u keep up the good work 👍🏼❕)
I like it so far but is chapter 48 and 49 supposed to be only 6 pages long and on top of that if so when the next chapter starts it so confusing i mean i can some what pick it up but i would like to know more
The translation is good, the plot less so. This reads as a story of an unlikable older bully who grooms a younger girl into being his exact perfect girl, whether she is conscious about it or not. The final straw for me was when another guy became interested in her randomly and he started beating him without warning, then basically said no one would believe you over me because I'm so perfect. The girl he was obsessed with before traveling back in time, who he rejected in the new timeline is so stereotypically self absorbed as to be seen as dumb enough to not be able to breathe and walk at the same time. There is no character development until the dumb one finally decides he's not coming back to her, and instead of chasing him (again) she stops because she realizes she lost him for good. Don't know what chapter I got up to. The translation is good. That's about all it has going for it.
I liked this story very much in the beginning and loved to read, but even after 900 chapters the story goes nowhere. Its just the repitation of the same things again and again.. making money, having lots of girls fancing the male lead as if no one exists in the world.. If u have free passes read it, else waste of money