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Love your fic so far. Your grammar and writing is great. Really hoping you give a happy ending to Ben too though, since I still have a slight soft spot for him as the OG MC
Anyone who knows Ben's/ Nova's parents occupation? I'm writing my own Fanfic, and was too lazy and scared (if u know what I mean) to re-read the original..
Just to be sure, I hope there is no n*r because The Ordinary S*x Life of Ben story s*cked because of the n*r...........................................................
Love your fic so far. Your grammar and writing is great. Really hoping you give a happy ending to Ben too though, since I still have a slight soft spot for him as the OG MC
Anyone who knows Ben's/ Nova's parents occupation? I'm writing my own Fanfic, and was too lazy and scared (if u know what I mean) to re-read the original..
Just to be sure, I hope there is no n*r because The Ordinary S*x Life of Ben story s*cked because of the n*r...........................................................
Can we get a comeback on this? Or does anyone know another OSL fanfic?