Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King

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UREGO

Hello 🤗 I've picked up your work as a past time, I'll be completely honest with you. I honestly didn't think I was going to like your story, But don't get it twisted I'm not say it's bad and I don't judge a book by its cover. So I read your first chapter and to my surprise I got really into it, I became so interested in your story that before I knew i was on the last chapter you updated. So I have to say it's a really interesting idea and Characters are well written I'm looking forward to where you take, it so please continue to release new chapter as soon as you can 😁😁😁 Thank you

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Xmpr30

Not bad, but kind of boring. The childhood arc is too long, with no serious training, just him fooling around with girls. The romance is just okay, with the normal tsundere cliche. If you want a romance slice of life fic to pass time, you have come to the right place.

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Syxenn

Its actually a really good novel with a grammar that can be considered as masterclass in webnovel, so far I'm liking the mc's personality though you also need to mention his motivation, story development is going good but I'm also hoping for a time skip in near chapters, and also you should focus some more on mc's power development a little more as right now his still very weak, the love interest is also going good as you're taking you're time so it wont be forced and well they are still young anyway, and I'm also hoping you wont mess up the fanfic by doing one of the fanfic taboo's such as NTR or making mc subservient to someone, like him joining rias's peerage, unlike some dxd fanfic i hope you don't do that just for the mc to join the rating game against riser as you can just eliminate him outside of rating games, and when you do go to other worlds and compare the power level i hope you don't mess it up like many other fanfics as that just makes readers annoyed, you can ask your readers when comparing if you aren't sure and don't follow battle wiki as that's just messed up from what I think, the only issue so far in this fanfic is the update stability, if you update so late readers might just forget about it and it will become one of hundred books in library, forgotten, but other than that its a good work so keep it up author [img=recommend]

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Draconic_Games

Honestly the story is starting off very strong most fanfic either skip through childhood or never talk about so this story is unique in that it's doing neither

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Sir_Dood

Story has started extremely strong. Like the way he's building a foundation and relationships in the world and not just jumping straight to Canon. Usually childhood arcs are really boring but this has kept my interest. Also like that he's not another edgelord mc.

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Vallandres

I like this but why is your release schedule once or twice a month? Why not weekly? People are likely to forget about your story with such infrequent updates.

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KingParadox

I love this novel, thanks author i hope you don’t drop this………………… ………………………………. ………………… ………………………………. ………………… ………………………………. ………………… ……………………………….

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WML

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ghostensaop

love the fic plz keep writhing

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Chaotic_Reader_Cy2

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍good novel ..................

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blenin

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metraprix_12

I like it very much and it's well written. Author best of luck and I hope you keep writing [img=update][img=update]

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Lintiun8

A good novel, it has a very good story development. The author writes about the characters, their lives and stories, making the characters have an extra life and not just those who only follow the main character without us even knowing what they are like or their dreams, their past, etc. The only thing that I would say needs to improve is the writing, the first chapters are practically texts, they are not separated into paragraphs which makes it a little difficult to read, but this was resolved in the following chapters. Another thing would be a word here and there that is spelled wrong and many sentences are stuck together, I recommend leaving a space after the period. I recommend for this a program (like Grammarly or something like that) that can help you fixing these writing problems. The development of the world in general is going well too, nothing too big for now as the novel is just starting, but what has already been shown has been shown in a good way for us readers. Overall, I highly recommend it, the novel is just starting and I feel that if the author continues, it will be a great novel.

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Ed_clips0524

Keep up the great work looking forward to future chapters

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ArdaPendragon

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Mathias_Irusta

Espero continúes este trabajo autor-san 😁 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌

Bro this fic is kinda nice although the author keep edging us due to long childhood arc 😭 but fr the arc is not boring maybe it’s bcs the girl that author chose is truly beautiful or rare?

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Insert_Here

here is your review author you are welcome

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Dark_PersonJJ

So i will now write Review for this story, Very nice read, MC is not a Idiot, he use his brain,He is good guy,but is not afraid to break bones,he is not a simp, and do not thinks with his pepe all the time. I honesty dislike charakters who do not have any Control over they urges all the time. He can be ruthless when he needs to be, like before i said he is not afraid to break someone bones if he must, he is Smart and brave, knows when to be silent and when to speak, he likes to interfare with other people problems. That it for now.

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Solas_Arclight

Please keep updating....................................................