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I Am very excited for this story! the flow is great and it's easy to imagine the scenes. it is hard to find Yakuza stories and it's not riddled with grammatical errors. 😊
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I Am very excited for this story! the flow is great and it's easy to imagine the scenes. it is hard to find Yakuza stories and it's not riddled with grammatical errors. 😊
the flow of the story is very well put and can't wait to read more