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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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.....nice this is really a change maker for the other fics of rwby and cannon
I really love your story, but I wish there will be more frequent updates if possible.
The story's good, would definitely recommend reading but there are still few questions that the author can answer if can: 1) Will he ever awaken his aura and gain a semblance? If then what semblance and please let it not be the same as the OG Jaune. 2) Will there be more reincarnated monsters or any other character? 3) And most importantly will there be romance/harem?
one of the best fanfics iIever read author dont'tgive up you have such a raw talent. Amazing world building full of characters that feel well life like. character development of jaune from simp to GIGA CHAD. Not an japanese beta male but a true giga chad full of fighting spirit. from now on he is in my top 10 list of best characters. LONG LIVE THIS FANFIC AUTHOR DONT GIVE UP. also iIcan be your editor
.....nice this is really a change maker for the other fics of rwby and cannon
I really love your story, but I wish there will be more frequent updates if possible.
The story's good, would definitely recommend reading but there are still few questions that the author can answer if can: 1) Will he ever awaken his aura and gain a semblance? If then what semblance and please let it not be the same as the OG Jaune. 2) Will there be more reincarnated monsters or any other character? 3) And most importantly will there be romance/harem?
one of the best fanfics iIever read author dont'tgive up you have such a raw talent. Amazing world building full of characters that feel well life like. character development of jaune from simp to GIGA CHAD. Not an japanese beta male but a true giga chad full of fighting spirit. from now on he is in my top 10 list of best characters. LONG LIVE THIS FANFIC AUTHOR DONT GIVE UP. also iIcan be your editor