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I have no idea why you are translating this fic made by a chinese racist piece of human waste, but you are probably gaining some social credit in china for it.
mc are like #yaoi and had power of wow druid mc never watch eternal and never read comic he can change all but still live like chinese cultivator 🤮🤮
To author. i want to give you suggestions about the power of druid. Add the skills of Diablo 2 druid and Shaman of GRim dawn
Couldn't even get through the first few pages of the first chapter with all the ambiguous racial and classist overtones about being kidnapped as soon as he stepped into a poor area. Stating to do magical experiment on the poor and handicapped by feeding them magical plants to see what happens, also people who were poor and in need of food but not handicapped or old/children wanting food being illegals. Wow to the wow, story might have a good basis but I cannot get past this and if this the first chapter how deep will this go? Reads like a person who has never has to struggle for anything or born with a silver spoon. The point of any story is to engage the reader. This story does a poor job of it.
I just benge read this book. Not to slow. could have more character interactions. But the ones written are good.
ch36 and basically nothing has happened. we know the mcs powers, and he has had a few social interactions, but literally nothing has happened. some bs about a environmental group based around mcs powers popped up in a few chapters but seriously.. how can you write chapters and chapters of just nothing.
90% of it is a copy and paste and the rest is interesting but it doesn't give it enough importance and it doesn't develop anything and doesn't change anything. Read until the eternals until there I endure.
the quality of writing really is confusing sometimes, but when you pick up the pace everything becomes easier,development is really good for people who like a cool protagonist, Character designer is really disappointing, many times I forget what the character looks like, I just remember him having red hair.the stability of uploading the chapters is very good, congratulations to the translator.world backgroun doesn't disappoint, it's very good and I can visualize the world, never disrespecting any culture (at least as far as I've read) always respectful with the places that the protagonist visits.
it is nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A little slow and has a little bit confusing timeline, but other than that everything is great. Hoping that author/translator won't give up on this.
I like this book it is nice and good so I hit the book my stonesrthnesxjy4bgin ejrywx ehnrf867texyg fb7rxeb4 hujg vygjcftu cgyuyuf cctgyc yhufgjc fgcfghc hgjc ghjc yhfgjc tfcfyc yfhd fghdxyrfujhrydx
"This work is a translation, and not a very proficient one at that. Several chapters contain paragraphs that make no sense, and any conversation between characters is extremely confusing. Additionally, certain parts of the story include random words placed haphazardly, as if copied and pasted from a poorly executed Google Translate attempt."
good fanfic to pass the time, although the mc still has a Chinese feel, it's not that bad! It's very easy to follow and readable. the character design part is disappointing, I can't picture the protagonist in my mind, does he have red hair? I found out about this yesterday.
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Bit rough in the beginning, but later i was hooked. I like the flow of the story it is not rushed but not to slow either. ..................................................................................................................................
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This novel is really great to read. I want more of it😁😁😁😁😁🎉🎉🎉😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
good job translating 🤙 KAKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSK[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]SKS
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
To anyone who is interested in a great story read my words THIS IS AWESOME please upvote like give stone review and whatever else let this gem top all categories
This is probably the best translated fanfic I’ve seen in a while, definitely recommend .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like this a lot, and no harem just make me like it even more. Though is this Chinese in origin? Some character spoke similar to how I read in Chinese webnovel but not too much of it but still present.
I have no idea why you are translating this fic made by a chinese racist piece of human waste, but you are probably gaining some social credit in china for it.
mc are like #yaoi and had power of wow druid mc never watch eternal and never read comic he can change all but still live like chinese cultivator 🤮🤮
To author. i want to give you suggestions about the power of druid. Add the skills of Diablo 2 druid and Shaman of GRim dawn
Couldn't even get through the first few pages of the first chapter with all the ambiguous racial and classist overtones about being kidnapped as soon as he stepped into a poor area. Stating to do magical experiment on the poor and handicapped by feeding them magical plants to see what happens, also people who were poor and in need of food but not handicapped or old/children wanting food being illegals. Wow to the wow, story might have a good basis but I cannot get past this and if this the first chapter how deep will this go? Reads like a person who has never has to struggle for anything or born with a silver spoon. The point of any story is to engage the reader. This story does a poor job of it.
I just benge read this book. Not to slow. could have more character interactions. But the ones written are good.
ch36 and basically nothing has happened. we know the mcs powers, and he has had a few social interactions, but literally nothing has happened. some bs about a environmental group based around mcs powers popped up in a few chapters but seriously.. how can you write chapters and chapters of just nothing.
90% of it is a copy and paste and the rest is interesting but it doesn't give it enough importance and it doesn't develop anything and doesn't change anything. Read until the eternals until there I endure.
the quality of writing really is confusing sometimes, but when you pick up the pace everything becomes easier,development is really good for people who like a cool protagonist, Character designer is really disappointing, many times I forget what the character looks like, I just remember him having red hair.the stability of uploading the chapters is very good, congratulations to the translator.world backgroun doesn't disappoint, it's very good and I can visualize the world, never disrespecting any culture (at least as far as I've read) always respectful with the places that the protagonist visits.
it is nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A little slow and has a little bit confusing timeline, but other than that everything is great. Hoping that author/translator won't give up on this.
I like this book it is nice and good so I hit the book my stonesrthnesxjy4bgin ejrywx ehnrf867texyg fb7rxeb4 hujg vygjcftu cgyuyuf cctgyc yhufgjc fgcfghc hgjc ghjc yhfgjc tfcfyc yfhd fghdxyrfujhrydx
"This work is a translation, and not a very proficient one at that. Several chapters contain paragraphs that make no sense, and any conversation between characters is extremely confusing. Additionally, certain parts of the story include random words placed haphazardly, as if copied and pasted from a poorly executed Google Translate attempt."
good fanfic to pass the time, although the mc still has a Chinese feel, it's not that bad! It's very easy to follow and readable. the character design part is disappointing, I can't picture the protagonist in my mind, does he have red hair? I found out about this yesterday.
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Bit rough in the beginning, but later i was hooked. I like the flow of the story it is not rushed but not to slow either. ..................................................................................................................................
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This novel is really great to read. I want more of it😁😁😁😁😁🎉🎉🎉😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
good job translating 🤙 KAKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSK[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]SKS
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
To anyone who is interested in a great story read my words THIS IS AWESOME please upvote like give stone review and whatever else let this gem top all categories
This is probably the best translated fanfic I’ve seen in a while, definitely recommend .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like this a lot, and no harem just make me like it even more. Though is this Chinese in origin? Some character spoke similar to how I read in Chinese webnovel but not too much of it but still present.
Who is the heroine?.........................